MOKHTALIF PAHLU.......................................A.B

by adil bechain on March 14, 2009, 10:42:16 AM
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 a-    PARESHAN HAI, INSAAN..
       IS DAUR KEY  ASABAAB SEY,
       KI, AANEY LAGI HAI KHUSBOO,
       CHAMELI KI, GULAB SEY.....!!! sad10
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  b-   CHALA  JAA  RAHA HOON,
       MANZIL KI TALAASH MAIN...,
       RAAHGIR TO BAHOT MILEY,
       RAHBAR NAA MILA KOI...!!! Embarrased

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  c-   BAHUT MOHABBAT SEY PALA HAI..,
       DUSHMANI UNSEY...!
       HAI ZAKHAM BHI UNKA,
       AUR MARHAM BHI UNKA..!! icon_geek


       ADIL BECHAIN

  


    
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«Reply #1 on: March 16, 2009, 01:05:19 PM »
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bhoot khoob ADil ji..
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«Reply #2 on: March 17, 2009, 05:50:32 AM »
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Bahut achhe!!!
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«Reply #3 on: March 17, 2009, 07:55:41 AM »
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Nice 1  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: June 25, 2009, 02:30:00 PM »
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Quote from: Sophi on March 16, 2009, 01:05:19 PM
bhoot khoob ADil ji..

THanx Sophi ji
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«Reply #5 on: June 25, 2009, 02:30:25 PM »
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Thank u Roja ji
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Quote from: cRony/eNemy on March 17, 2009, 05:50:32 AM
Bahut achhe!!!

Thank u Rony ji
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«Reply #7 on: June 25, 2009, 02:38:21 PM »
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Excellent,very beautiful creation Adil ji. Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #8 on: July 06, 2009, 10:42:11 AM »
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Quote from: madhuwesh on June 25, 2009, 02:38:21 PM
Excellent,very beautiful creation Adil ji. Applause Applause Applause


THANK U MADHUWESH
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«Reply #9 on: August 16, 2009, 04:24:21 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: August 16, 2009, 04:39:10 PM »
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very nice adil ji

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«Reply #11 on: August 25, 2009, 05:41:22 PM »
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Quote from: jasbirsingh on August 16, 2009, 04:39:10 PM
very nice adil ji

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THANX JASBIR JI
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: March 04, 2010, 11:16:32 AM »
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Wah wah bahut achhi poems hai Adil ji. Marhaba.
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«Reply #14 on: March 04, 2010, 01:56:52 PM »
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Quote from: riyaz106 on March 04, 2010, 11:16:32 AM
Wah wah bahut achhi poems hai Adil ji. Marhaba.

thank u, bytheway, ye poem nahin hai mokhtalif ashaar hain
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