----- /// Mora mann /// -----

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na kisi ki sunta hai wo,
bas pyaar hi karta hai wo,
chahe tu kuch na bhi kahe,
chahe paas more na bhi rahe,
ye jo pagal mann hai mora,
kuch na wo sunta hai mora,

kal tak mora mann mora tha,
wo mori har baat sunta tha,
aaj bana bawla hai wo,
kuch bhi na sunta hai wo,
ye jo pagal mann hai mora,
wo kal tak tha bas mora,

lootne more mann ko tu kyun,
aayi itne more kareeb tu yun,
chhoo ke more mann ko tune,
kar diya kyun apna tune,
ye jo pagal mann hai mora,
ab to na raha ye mora,

dekhi hai maine wo chori teri,
luti thi tu ne wo tijori meri,
khajana tha wo mann me more,
mann ko luta tune mann se more,
ye jo pagal mann hai mora,
ban gaya hai wo tora,

manwa mora ab to rowe hai,
teri yaadon me wo khowe hai,
tu ne kyun mujhko chhoda,
kaahe more dil ko toda,
ye jo pagal mann hai mora,
ho ke reh gaya bas wo tora...

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«Reply #1 on: May 10, 2010, 05:10:39 PM »
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Wah kya baat hai Kapil ji bahut khoobsurat aur alag andaaz mein likha aapne ye kavita.great work,bahut hi khoob. Hats off to you!  icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #2 on: May 10, 2010, 05:42:41 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Madhu ji.... bas thodi si koshish ki maine kuch alag likhne ka .. achcha laga jaanke ki apko pasand aaya ...!!!

Wah kya baat hai Kapil ji bahut khoobsurat aur alag andaaz mein likha aapne ye kavita.great work,bahut hi khoob. Hats off to you!  icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: May 10, 2010, 08:51:43 PM »
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Bahut khoob Kapil

Ba.da chanchal howat hai yeh manwa
Kuchh ga.dba.d hoi to le lei janwa
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«Reply #4 on: May 10, 2010, 09:11:05 PM »
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Wat language is Dis?

Bt anywyaz its really really Nyc

kuch alag andazz!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #5 on: May 11, 2010, 03:04:19 AM »
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Nice poem Kapil ji. Ek alag hi style ki poem hai ye.
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«Reply #6 on: May 11, 2010, 06:04:43 AM »
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buhat khoob!
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«Reply #7 on: May 11, 2010, 10:47:16 AM »
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WAH KYA BAAT HAI       KAPIL JI.....


MORA MANN AB NAHI MORA
MORA MANN AB HOGAYA TORA
MORA MANN HOGAYA CHANCHAL
NAAM LE SIRF TORA PAL PAL
MORA MANN AB KAHAN SUNTA MORA
MORA MANN AB BAS ME HOGAYA TORA
MORA MANN  KO TERE SIWA KUCH NAHI CHAHIYE
DIN RAAT SIRF TU HI TU KHYALON ME CHAHIYE
MORA MANN HOGAYA HAI PURA KA PURA PAGAL TORA
APNE NAMM KE SAATH DEKHNA CHAHTA HAI NAAM TORA....
              MORA MANN---TORA MANN..
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«Reply #8 on: May 11, 2010, 08:23:05 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Rajesh ji...!!!

Bahut khoob Kapil

Ba.da chanchal howat hai yeh manwa
Kuchh ga.dba.d hoi to le lei janwa
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«Reply #9 on: May 11, 2010, 08:23:50 PM »
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Thanx a lot Neel ji... it's Hindi only but a different form...!!!

Wat language is Dis?

Bt anywyaz its really really Nyc

kuch alag andazz!!!!!!!!!!!
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«Reply #10 on: May 11, 2010, 08:24:46 PM »
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Thank u so much Riyaz ji... koshish kiya thoda shobdon ko todne madodne  ka...!!!

Nice poem Kapil ji. Ek alag hi style ki poem hai ye.
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«Reply #11 on: May 11, 2010, 08:25:11 PM »
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Shukriya Vb ji....!!!

buhat khoob!
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«Reply #12 on: May 11, 2010, 08:25:38 PM »
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Shukriya Cara ji... aapne bhi bahut khoob likha hai...!!!

WAH KYA BAAT HAI       KAPIL JI.....


MORA MANN AB NAHI MORA
MORA MANN AB HOGAYA TORA
MORA MANN HOGAYA CHANCHAL
NAAM LE SIRF TORA PAL PAL
MORA MANN AB KAHAN SUNTA MORA
MORA MANN AB BAS ME HOGAYA TORA
MORA MANN  KO TERE SIWA KUCH NAHI CHAHIYE
DIN RAAT SIRF TU HI TU KHYALON ME CHAHIYE
MORA MANN HOGAYA HAI PURA KA PURA PAGAL TORA
APNE NAMM KE SAATH DEKHNA CHAHTA HAI NAAM TORA....
              MORA MANN---TORA MANN..
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«Reply #13 on: May 11, 2010, 10:33:11 PM »
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Beautiful lines Rajesh ji and Cara ji. Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #14 on: May 12, 2010, 06:56:01 AM »
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Bohot khoob Kapil Ji, badi pyarai nazm likhi hai aapne.....Bohot khoob...
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