Mujhay zindagi ki dua na do (NM)

by vb on May 17, 2010, 02:02:59 PM
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«Reply #1 on: May 17, 2010, 02:05:38 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Vb Ji..

Bahut Hi khoobsurat jazbaat Pesh Kiye Hai Aapne..

bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: May 17, 2010, 02:36:12 PM »
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VB JI
Aik or khubspprat pishkush
Buhat khub zaberdast

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«Reply #3 on: May 17, 2010, 02:52:57 PM »
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U deserve that VB ji
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«Reply #4 on: May 17, 2010, 03:16:46 PM »
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ok then
Tareef us khuda ki jis nay thumay banya
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wasy incouragement to zaroori hoti hay na VB ji
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«Reply #5 on: May 17, 2010, 03:18:31 PM »
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bahot khub.... keep it up.... icon_thumleft
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«Reply #6 on: May 17, 2010, 04:54:47 PM »
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VB Ji Aapki Is Rachna Ke Bare Me Kya Kahun.. Jazzbaaton aur Ehasaason Ko itni Khubsoorati se Pesh Kiya Hai aapne Ki Aapke Yeh Likhe Hue Yeh Alfaaz Seedhe dil Tak Utar gaye..!!  icon_thumleft icon_thumleft

Bahut Hi Umda Peshkash Hai.. Daad Kubool karen..  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley



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«Reply #7 on: May 17, 2010, 05:45:27 PM »
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Wah VB Sahab , Kya kahene Bahoth qoob , Nazm Nazar Howi , Har Band qoob hai ,, unwan to bus kya kahiye jawab nahi ,, Dad Hazir hai qubool karen ..

Rag-e-jaan se bhi mere paas hai ? isse muraad ?


Allah apko khush rakhe..

Duwa go

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«Reply #8 on: May 17, 2010, 06:14:58 PM »
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shukriya aap ka.. k waqt diya or comments deyay aap ne.. qadeer_junaid jee..

"rag-e-jaan say bhe meray paas hay"

ji say hum nazm main mukhaatib hain.. un say.. arz kar rahay hain.. k wo hamaari rag-e-jaan say bhe zyada hamaray paas/qareeb hay..

rag-e-jaan k lafzi meni: puraanay zamanay say ake kahawat see chali aatee hay .. k insaan k dil say juri ake main rag hote hay.. jis k katnay par.. yakeenan insaan ki mout waqe hote hay.. ab is say zyada insaan ki jaan k qareeb kuch nahi.. hota..

jis say mukhatib hain.. wo hamari rag-e-jaan say bhe zyada.. hamaray paaas hay..

umeed hay.. hum jo chah rahay thay.. so bayan kar payay hon gay..





fir to inteha hi hogayi mahubbath ki VB sahab ,, Shai- rag se bhi Qareeb bataya apne ,, wah .. Humne bhi Suna tha ke koi hai jo Sub ki Shai-rag se bhi qareeb hota hai .. Apne Tarjumani Kardi Maza Dobala ho gaya ..


Duwa Go

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«Reply #9 on: May 17, 2010, 07:07:40 PM »
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Wow Vb ji,apne ehsaaso ko bahut khoobsurti se pesh kiya aapne,bahut hi khoob,midblowing creation.keep writting.excellent Hats off to you! icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause :clap:God bless you.be happy Thumbs UP
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«Reply #10 on: May 18, 2010, 07:25:21 AM »
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mairy humnafas mary humnawa mujhay dost bun k dagha na day
main hon derd i ishq say jan blub mujhy zindagi ki du na day

vb ji ap ki nazm min baisahtagi or rawani khob hay
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