MUJHE KISI GHAZAL KISI KAVITA MEIN................

by SURESH SANGWAN on October 23, 2017, 11:11:50 PM
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मुझे किसी ग़ज़ल

किसी कविता में

महानता का आँचल ना उढ़ाओ

कि मैं अपने दर्द में

 रो ना सकूँ

मैं अपने जी की

 कह ना सकूँ

मैं गिला करूँ तो

मुझपे उंगलियाँ उठें

मैं शिकवा करूँ तो

मुझको गालियाँ मिलें

मुझे रहने दो ज़मीं पर

नहीं वो झूठा आसमाँ

नहीं चाहिए

नहीं वो सच्चा आईना

नहीं चाहिए

नम सा वो आँचल सूखेगा कब??

ख़ौफ़ का  साया भागेगा कब  ?

ओ नारी के हौसले तू जागेगा कब??


सुरेश सांगवान 'सरु'


 
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«Reply #1 on: October 24, 2017, 03:09:58 AM »
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waah hee waah kyaa baat hai Suresh Jee RAU ke saath daad.

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«Reply #2 on: October 24, 2017, 11:40:51 AM »
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waah waah kya baat hai bahut bahut khoob saru ji.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #3 on: October 25, 2017, 01:12:36 PM »
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Nice line
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«Reply #4 on: October 26, 2017, 10:51:41 PM »
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waah hee waah kyaa baat hai Suresh Jee RAU ke saath daad.

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«Reply #5 on: October 26, 2017, 10:52:22 PM »
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thaaaaaaaanks Tauhid ji
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«Reply #6 on: October 30, 2017, 05:06:43 AM »
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