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This Poetry is for my mother on her untimely death on 2nd Jan, 2010. I miss her more than words can tell. Her demise has left me with an aloneness, which can never be filled. .  |
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«Reply #1 on: February 12, 2010, 02:40:30 PM » |
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«Reply #2 on: February 12, 2010, 02:54:17 PM » |
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Bahut Bahut Khoob!!!!
Talat Dost!!Dil Se likhi Har ek cheez Dusro ke Dil tak Pahunchti hai..
Aapki Yeh Dedication Sirf dil ko Chuuti Hi nahi par Aankhon Ko Bhi nam Kar Deti Hai..
Punjabi Mein Maa Ke Liye Yeh shabd Kahe Jaata Hai Ke
"Maavan Thandiyan Chaavan" Hoti Hai..
Aur Vaakai yeh Sach Hai!!!! Maa Hi thandi Chaa Ki tarah Hoti Hai
bahut bahut Khoooob Dost!!!!!
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«Reply #3 on: February 12, 2010, 04:00:25 PM » |
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Aapke dil k jajbaat ujagar kar rahe hai aapke ye alfaaz....har alfaaz dil mein utar gya hai aur aankhon se chhalakne lage hai.....kya kahu.....hav no words...
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«Reply #5 on: February 12, 2010, 04:36:42 PM » |
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bahut achchaaaaaa behtreen celmira ji............ALLAH AAP KO SAKOON DE AUR AAPKI AMMI KO JANNAT- UL -FIRDAUS MAIN JAGAH DE ....AAMIN....!!
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«Reply #6 on: February 12, 2010, 06:19:57 PM » |
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talat jee:
Aadaab!
mujhe baRaa hi duKh huaa aapke mummy jee ke baare meN jaan.K.. Khudaa se duaa yahee hai kii uNkii rooh ko ShaaNti mileN... har aik lafz meiN apni maa.N ke liye dil meiN basaa huaa pyaar naZar aaya mujhe... bas itna hi kahuuNgaa talat jee ki aapke mummy jee kabhee naheeN chaaheNge ki uNki beTii ziNdagee ke kisi bhee moD par Khud ko kamzor mehsuus kareN... aapki maa.N haMeShaa aapke paas hi hai..Khud ko saMbhaaleN.. maiN jaantaa huuN kehnaa aur sehnaa alag baat haii.. par itnaa Khayaal raKhiye.ngaa ki apne bachche ke aaNKhoN meiN aaNsu ek maa.N kabhee bardaast nahiiN kar sakti.. we aapko har pal deKh rahe.n hai.n..maa.N ke saath guzra har laMhaa azeez hotaa hai bas uN beeteN laMhoN ko apni taaQat banaayeN... !
apnaa achchhe se Khayaal raKheN... Khudaa se merii duaa aapke liye!
duaaoN ke saath ijaazat
aapka
~ Dhaval
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«Reply #7 on: February 12, 2010, 07:38:35 PM » |
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Great dedication Talat ji,aankh bhar aayi padke aapke kavita.aapke dard ko mahesoos kar sakti hoon.par dil chotta mat kar.mindblowing creation.excellent.God bless you and give you peace Talat ji.take care.
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«Reply #8 on: February 13, 2010, 01:07:40 AM » |
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Dear Talat, alfaz nahi. Bahut accha likha hai. Dua mein ho tum God bless you dear.
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«Reply #9 on: February 13, 2010, 07:31:38 AM » |
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Talat Ji, apni maa ko yaad karte huye behad sanjeeda nazam likhi hai aapne. Bahut achhi lagi ye nazm. Jaane wale lautkar to kabhi nahi aate magar unki yad hamesha aati hai. Ab isse zyada kuchh nahi kiya jaa sakta ke unke liye dua-e-maghfirat ki jaaye aur zyada se zyada eesal-e-swaab kiya jaye.
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«Reply #11 on: February 13, 2010, 11:09:51 AM » |
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Bahut Hi Sunder Aur Dil Ko Chune Wali Aapne Ye Nazam Likhi  Mein Duaa Karunga Talat Ji Aapki Ammi Ko Jannat Naseeb Ho |
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«Reply #12 on: February 14, 2010, 08:53:41 PM » |
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Zindagi mein kisi ki kami shayd kisi tarhaa.n bhi poori nahi ki ja sakti aur jahan lafz maa uske aage juR jaata ho to shayad phir saare alfaaz bhut kam aur bhut chote lagne lagte hain kuch bhi kehne ke liyn, ye wo rishta jo belos mohabbat ki ek aisi misaal hai jiski koi tashbeeh nahi, aapne apni is tehreer mai apne ehsaason ka bakhoobi izhaar kia hai, Allah se dua hai ki wo aapki ammi ko Jannat mai aala maraatba ata farmaaye aameen.
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«Reply #13 on: February 15, 2010, 06:49:51 PM » |
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Talat,
Bohot bohot hi achcha likha hai...
It is very very touching!
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«Reply #14 on: February 16, 2010, 04:26:33 PM » |
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I have absolute no words...bt honestly dukh hua yeh sunkar...Just pray for her soul as all of us will do...InshAllah she will be granted heaven and her soul will rest in peace...Ameen!!! Tooo good Talat di...
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