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by ~Hriday~ on October 24, 2010, 09:49:14 PM
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«Reply #15 on: October 27, 2010, 04:48:36 PM »
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geet di apne to teer par teer mare hain isme..wakai bahut badhiya hai~


mastam mast reply geet ji bht mast......

Bahut bahut shukriya kasak ji n abhi...
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«Reply #16 on: October 27, 2010, 05:04:40 PM »
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maafi chaunga deri ke liye Geet ji... aaj koshish kar ke kuch likh hi liya.. ummeed hai aapko achchi lagegi...

kai saalon se main dekh raha hoon raah tumhaare aane ki,
ruka hoon bahut par ab mujhse aur intezaar nahi hota,

khaayen hain chot maine kai kai baar mohabbat mein,
shayad yahi wajah hai ki ab kisi pe aetbaar nahi hota,

reh reh ke utha_ta hai is dil me dard judaai ka,
shayad yahi wajah hai ki ab mera ikhtiyaar nahi hota,

bharosa uth chuka hai mera is jahaan me waado se,
ab achche to lagte hain log par kisi se pyar nahi hota...



Waah bahut khoob likha hai ji..aapne tou merra haal-e-mhbt likh diya ab main kya jawab du..chalo koshish karti hu....



Janti hu mhbt ne tujhe bahut sataya hai,
isliye tou kismat ne ab hamein milwaya hai,

jo intezar tha terra aaj khatam hone laga hai,
dekh terre liye khuda ne mujhe banaya hai,

dard terri talaash mein maine bhi kam nhi sahe hai,
per taklifo se ladke bhi maine apna aashiya banaya hai,

bahut mushkilo se mile hai hamare dil k taar,
tujhe paane k liye maine bahut kuch gawaya hai,

iss baar kar le bharosa tu merri chahto per,
maine khud ko kho kar aaj tujhe jo paya hai.........
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«Reply #17 on: October 28, 2010, 09:52:23 AM »
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ye to coincidence hi hai ki main aapke dil ki baat likh paayaa.. aur aapne pasand kiya isse achchi baat aur kya ho sakti hai mere liye.. aur jawaab aapne itna khoobsurat diya hai ki kuch likhe bina mujhse raha nahi gaya...


aaj jaane kyun teri baaton pe yakeen karne ka jee karta hai,
tujhe apne kareeb laake baahon me bharne ka jee karta hai,

kabse ye baahen taras rahi hain kisi apne ko gale lagaane ko,
tujhe baahon me bharke jee bharke pyaar karne ka jee karta hai,

maaloom hai mujhe ki kitna saha hai tune mujhe paane k liye,
tere har dard ko tujhse chhinke apna bana lene ka jee karta hai,

kya kya khoya hai tune mujhe paane ke liye iska ehsaas hai mujhe,
ab tujhe wo sab kuch fir se lautaane ka mera jee karta hai,

jaane kyun aaj na chaahte huye bhi tujhe chaahne ka jee karta hai,
tere pyaar me doobkar tujhpe ek baar aetbaar karne ka jee karta hai....
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«Reply #18 on: October 28, 2010, 10:20:13 AM »
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bahut khoob dil ki gehraiyon se likha hai Kapil ji maza aa gaya padhkar. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #19 on: October 28, 2010, 10:21:34 AM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shkriya adaa karta hoon Suresh ji... bahut bahut shukriya....!!!
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«Reply #20 on: October 28, 2010, 11:03:03 AM »
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Wah wah wah Kapil kya khoob likha hai re..... Applause Applause Applause Applause

Mujhe tou ye "Adaalat" ka geet yaad ho aaya........

jaana tha ham se door, bahaane bana liye
ab tum ne kitani door, Thikaane bana liye
jaana tha ham se door............

rukhsat ke waqt tum ne jo aansoo hamein diye
un aansoo oon se ham ne, fasaane bana liye
ab tum ne kitani door, Thikaane bana liye
jaana tha ham se door...........

dil ko mile jo daagh, jigar ko mile jo dard
un doulato oon se hamne khazaane bana liye
ab tum ne kitani door, Thikaane bana liye
jaana tha ham se door.........
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«Reply #21 on: October 28, 2010, 02:22:27 PM »
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ye to coincidence hi hai ki main aapke dil ki baat likh paayaa.. aur aapne pasand kiya isse achchi baat aur kya ho sakti hai mere liye.. aur jawaab aapne itna khoobsurat diya hai ki kuch likhe bina mujhse raha nahi gaya...


aaj jaane kyun teri baaton pe yakeen karne ka jee karta hai,
tujhe apne kareeb laake baahon me bharne ka jee karta hai,

kabse ye baahen taras rahi hain kisi apne ko gale lagaane ko,
tujhe baahon me bharke jee bharke pyaar karne ka jee karta hai,

maaloom hai mujhe ki kitna saha hai tune mujhe paane k liye,
tere har dard ko tujhse chhinke apna bana lene ka jee karta hai,

kya kya khoya hai tune mujhe paane ke liye iska ehsaas hai mujhe,
ab tujhe wo sab kuch fir se lautaane ka mera jee karta hai,

jaane kyun aaj na chaahte huye bhi tujhe chaahne ka jee karta hai,
tere pyaar me doobkar tujhpe ek baar aetbaar karne ka jee karta hai....


Bahut shukriya ji..


Khushi hai mujhe aur naaz bhi hai,
ki tune bhula kar apne dard ko merra pyar sawikara hai,

rehti hu main hamesha hi terri agosh mein,
tune mujhe itne pyar aur mhbt se jo sanwara hai,

merre zakham tabhi dard karte hai jab tu nhi hota,
sang terre tou andhera bhi merre liye jannat ka nazara hai,

terre haasil mein hi merre har sawal ka jawab hai,
jo diya tune ye paigam mujhko yahi terre haasil ka ishara hai,

merri mhbt mein koi beimaani koi banawat nhi hai,
na bhulaungi tujhe kabhi sanam..terre hi intezar mein tou maine apna har pal guzara hai.........




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«Reply #22 on: October 29, 2010, 09:11:02 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob ...!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kya batayen tujhe tune apne pyaar me kya kya sapne dikhaaye hain,
bhoolaake khud ko hum ek baar fir tujhse pyaar karne aaye hain,

kiye honge kuch punya jarur pichhle janam me aisa lagta hai,
tabhi upar waale se kismat me tera naam likhwa ke laaye hain,

kya hua jo kai baar tuta hai ye dil apna jhooti mohabbat me,
soch ke khush hain ki mohabbat ke naam pe tujhe paaye hain,

laa denge teri zindagi me inti khushi ki khil uthegi tu,
bhool jayegi tu bhi wo umra jo tu ne gum me gawaaye hain,

asaan nahi hota pyaar itna ki nibhaayi jaye umra bhar,
par tere hothon pe muskan sajaake rakhne ki kasam hum khaaye hain....
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«Reply #23 on: October 29, 2010, 12:03:34 PM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji jald hi reply karungi..
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«Reply #24 on: October 29, 2010, 02:00:16 PM »
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mujhe aapke jawaab ka intezaar rahega ...!!!
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«Reply #25 on: October 31, 2010, 06:07:08 AM »
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Shukriya shihab ji...
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«Reply #26 on: October 31, 2010, 09:17:16 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob ...!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

kya batayen tujhe tune apne pyaar me kya kya sapne dikhaaye hain,
bhoolaake khud ko hum ek baar fir tujhse pyaar karne aaye hain,

kiye honge kuch punya jarur pichhle janam me aisa lagta hai,
tabhi upar waale se kismat me tera naam likhwa ke laaye hain,

kya hua jo kai baar tuta hai ye dil apna jhooti mohabbat me,
soch ke khush hain ki mohabbat ke naam pe tujhe paaye hain,

laa denge teri zindagi me inti khushi ki khil uthegi tu,
bhool jayegi tu bhi wo umra jo tu ne gum me gawaaye hain,

asaan nahi hota pyaar itna ki nibhaayi jaye umra bhar,
par tere hothon pe muskan sajaake rakhne ki kasam hum khaaye hain....

Aao ab merre paas aao k ab na koi majburi rahegi,
bhula dungi har hadh ko hamari mhbt mein na koi doori rahegi,

har shaam sajegi ab hamari chaht se,
har raat hamari sinduri rahegi,

adhurepan k faasle jo hamare darmiya the,
uski har rasam hamari maujudagi se poori rahegi,

naa hoga ab andhero se hamara saamna,
hamare riste ki roshni se zindgi hamesha noori rahegi.........
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«Reply #27 on: November 30, 2010, 08:46:31 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Shihab ji....!!!

Wah Kya Muhabbaton Bhari Mahfil Hai
Bahut Hi Khub Lafzon Ko Khumar Mein
Duboya Hai Aap Dono Ne...Bahut Khub
Hriday Ji Aur Brokenbyluv Ji...

Khush Rahiye...


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«Reply #28 on: November 30, 2010, 08:52:56 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Geet ji...!!!

Bahut khoob likha hai kapil ji jald hi reply karungi..
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«Reply #29 on: November 30, 2010, 08:53:49 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Geet ji... bahut hi mohabbat bhara .. bahut pyaara .. thaks for this sweet sweet reply...!!!

bharke tujhe baahon me tera ho jaaunga,
teri mohabbat me main tujhme kho jaaunga,

jab bhi tu pukaare mujhe, dauda chala aaunga,
saaya banke tera main tere saath reh jaaunga,

paake tujhe paaya hai maine ye jahaan saara,
ab is jahaan ko chhod tere dil me theher jaaunga,

aa meri jaana ki main tere hi liye aaya hoon,
tujhko apni mohabbat se main paagal kar jaaunga,

aaj apni mohabbt me main tujhko bhigo jaaunga,
baahon me bharke tujhe tere hothon ko chhuu jaunga,

andheron ko duur karke ujaale ab laa dunga,
apni chaahat se teri duniya roshan kar jaaunga...

Aao ab merre paas aao k ab na koi majburi rahegi,
bhula dungi har hadh ko hamari mhbt mein na koi doori rahegi,

har shaam sajegi ab hamari chaht se,
har raat hamari sinduri rahegi,

adhurepan k faasle jo hamare darmiya the,
uski har rasam hamari maujudagi se poori rahegi,

naa hoga ab andhero se hamara saamna,
hamare riste ki roshni se zindgi hamesha noori rahegi.........
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