----------/// Hum tumse duur naa jaayenge ///--------Hriday

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aaaye hain to naa jaayenge, ab saath ta-umra nibhaayenge,
tumse shuru ho tumpe khatam ho, zindagi ab hum yun bitaayenge,

koi shikwa na ho koi shikakaayat na ho, kuch aisa kar jaayenge,
mohabbt me jeene marne ki ab har kasam ko hum nibhaayenge,

jaanaa sach kehte hain, na kabhi duur tumse abhi hum jaayenge,
jo thaamaa hai tumhaaraa haath humne, wo haath chhod na paayenge,

dekho koi khwaaab tum agar, har khwaab pooraa hum kar jaayenge,
koi ghum na ho tumhaare paas kabhi, kuch aisa hum kar jaayenge,

laal mehekte gulaabon se mohabbat ki bagiyaa hum sajaayenge,
tum yaad karoge har janam, kuch aisa asar hum kar jaayenge....

*****HRIDAY*****
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«Reply #1 on: August 05, 2012, 06:43:00 AM »
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«Reply #2 on: August 05, 2012, 06:50:18 AM »
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HIRDAY JI BAHUT KHOOB  Applause Applause Applause
MOHABAT HO TO AISEE
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«Reply #3 on: August 05, 2012, 06:55:47 AM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
bahut khoobsurat likha hai aapne
itna sab kuch kahne ke baad agar unki najar e inaayat ho jaaye to kya kahna..
maine sahi kahaa na..
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«Reply #4 on: August 05, 2012, 07:45:43 AM »
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aaaye hain to naa jaayenge, ab saath ta-umra nibhaayenge,
tumse shuru ho tumpe khatam ho, zindagi ab hum yun bitaayenge,

koi shikwa na ho koi shikakaayat na ho, kuch aisa kar jaayenge,
mohabbt me jeene marne ki ab har kasam ko hum nibhaayenge,

jaanaa sach kehte hain, na kabhi duur tumse abhi hum jaayenge,
jo thaamaa hai tumhaaraa haath humne, wo haath chhod na paayenge,

dekho koi khwaaab tum agar, har khwaab pooraa hum kar jaayenge,
koi ghum na ho tumhaare paas kabhi, kuch aisa hum kar jaayenge,

laal mehekte gulaabon se mohabbat ki bagiyaa hum sajaayenge,
tum yaad karoge har janam, kuch aisa asar hum kar jaayenge....

*****HRIDAY*****


veriiiiiiiiiii gud------------aap to expert ho mohabbat ke khawaab dikhane mein. aaisey hii chalta rahaa to kayii ladkiyaan aap ki diwaani ho jaayein gi.

  yaar hriday ji main to aap ki lekhni se jealous ho rahaa hoon
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«Reply #5 on: August 05, 2012, 08:01:12 AM »
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waah waah great
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«Reply #6 on: August 05, 2012, 09:00:40 AM »
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वाह वाह बहुत बढ़िया
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«Reply #7 on: August 05, 2012, 12:25:44 PM »
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boht khub hridhay ji
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«Reply #8 on: August 05, 2012, 02:00:43 PM »
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wah kya baat hai hriday ji.. Usual Smile

bahut khoob.. Applause Applause
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Bahut Acche Kapil Bhai.. Dil Ke Jazzbaaton Ko Behad Khubsoorati se Lafzon Me Utaara hai aapne.. daad Kubool Karen.. Applause Applause Applause


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«Reply #10 on: August 05, 2012, 07:39:06 PM »
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beautiful, simply beautiful, ab aise hi nahi aap hamare favourite hain...apki koi poem kabhi niraash nahi karti Hriday ji...bahot hi sunder
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«Reply #11 on: August 06, 2012, 02:37:16 AM »
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BAhut BAhut Khub Hriday Ji
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2012, 05:34:52 AM »
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Nice! Applause Applause
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«Reply #13 on: August 09, 2012, 12:27:18 PM »
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Thanks a lot Suman ji....!!!

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«Reply #14 on: August 10, 2012, 12:13:19 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Bansi ji...!!!

HIRDAY JI BAHUT KHOOB  Applause Applause Applause
MOHABAT HO TO AISEE
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