-----/// Kya rakha hai duur ghar se /// ------ Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on July 24, 2012, 01:31:23 PM
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chhod ke saath maa papaa ka main aaya tha ghar se,
rupaye dus hazar bachaake main laayaa tha ghar se,
maa ne kahaa beta khat likhna har hafte mujhe tu,
khat kya yaad tak na kiya duur aake maine ghar se,

papaa ne kahaa tha pairon pe apne khadaa hona hai,
koshish aaj tak kar raha hoon aake duur ghar se,
wo rupaye khatam karke ab udhaar me dooba hoon,
aise kar raha hoon main basar jeewan duur ghar se,

koi chaachaa na koi taau hai yahaan daftaro me mera,
kaun yahaan rakhe mujhe kaam pe itni duur ghar se,
apni mehnat se achchi degree li hai maine par,
degree bhi meri lagti hai ab raddi duur ghar se,

kaam usko milta hai jiske rishtedaar ho bade,
bhala kaun yahaan mera hai meelon duur ghar se,
sochta hoon kya faaida yahaan degreeyon ka bhala,
bol baalaa hai yahaan thagi ka duur ghar se,

achcha tha rehta main aanchal se bandhe maa ke,
lagta nahi ab dil mera yahaan duur ghar se,
haath bataaun papaa ka main jaake kheton me,
kya rakha hai shahar me ab itni duur ghar se...

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«Reply #1 on: July 24, 2012, 01:48:05 PM »
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heart touching hriday ji talkh sachhai hai jeevan kee ise bayaan karne ke liye aap saadhuwaad ke paatr hain
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«Reply #2 on: July 24, 2012, 03:14:17 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: July 24, 2012, 03:41:07 PM »
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HIRDAY JI JO AAPNE LIKHA HAI WO
HAQEEKAT HAI, YAA NAHIN YE TO MAIN JANTA NAHIN
JO KAHA HAI, DIL KO NA CHHUYE YEH HO SAKTA NAHIN
AAP KO DAAD DIYE BAGAIR MAIN RAH SAKTA ANHIN
KARTA HOON ILTJA KHUDA SE, AAPKO KHUSHIYON SE DDOR RAKHE NAHIN

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«Reply #4 on: July 24, 2012, 04:22:40 PM »
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bahut khub bahut umda aur bhut hi sahi trike se likha hai aapne hriday,.............. dil mein ghar kar gai yeh rachna aapki...........

dhero salaam aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #5 on: July 24, 2012, 04:40:11 PM »
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Bahut khoob Hriday jee
bahut umda ..hamesha ki tarah.
maa ki yaad dilaa dee aapne.
thoda emotional ho gayaa..
Har maa ko mera saadar pranaam.
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«Reply #6 on: July 24, 2012, 06:28:42 PM »
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kp......... just awesm post dear.......
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«Reply #7 on: July 24, 2012, 06:41:40 PM »
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chhod ke saath maa papaa ka main aaya tha ghar se,
rupaye dus hazar bachaake main laayaa tha ghar se,
maa ne kahaa beta khat likhna har hafte mujhe tu,
khat kya yaad tak na kiya duur aake maine ghar se,

papaa ne kahaa tha pairon pe apne khadaa hona hai,
koshish aaj tak kar raha hoon aake duur ghar se,
wo rupaye khatam karke ab udhaar me dooba hoon,
aise kar raha hoon main basar jeewan duur ghar se,

koi chaachaa na koi taau hai yahaan daftaro me mera,
kaun yahaan rakhe mujhe kaam pe itni duur ghar se,
apni mehnat se achchi degree li hai maine par,
degree bhi meri lagti hai ab raddi duur ghar se,

kaam usko milta hai jiske rishtedaar ho bade,
bhala kaun yahaan mera hai meelon duur ghar se,
sochta hoon kya faaida yahaan degreeyon ka bhala,
bol baalaa hai yahaan thagi ka duur ghar se,

achcha tha rehta main aanchal se bandhe maa ke,
lagta nahi ab dil mera yahaan duur ghar se,
haath bataaun papaa ka main jaake kheton me,
kya rakha hai shahar me ab itni duur ghar se...

*****HRIDAY*****

          touching. but yehi sachchaii hai.

                        darr-badar bhatakta rahaa roshni ke liye.!
                        paas ek chiraag thaa wo bhi bujh gayaa.!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 25, 2012, 10:34:34 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji.... !!!

heart touching hriday ji talkh sachhai hai jeevan kee ise bayaan karne ke liye aap saadhuwaad ke paatr hain
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«Reply #9 on: August 01, 2012, 02:21:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Bhupinder ji....!!!

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«Reply #10 on: August 02, 2012, 03:02:44 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Bansi ji.. ye just ek imagination hai.. meri kahaani nahi hai.. thanks again....!!!


HIRDAY JI JO AAPNE LIKHA HAI WO
HAQEEKAT HAI, YAA NAHIN YE TO MAIN JANTA NAHIN
JO KAHA HAI, DIL KO NA CHHUYE YEH HO SAKTA NAHIN
AAP KO DAAD DIYE BAGAIR MAIN RAH SAKTA ANHIN
KARTA HOON ILTJA KHUDA SE, AAPKO KHUSHIYON SE DDOR RAKHE NAHIN


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«Reply #11 on: August 03, 2012, 01:04:53 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Soudagar ji....!!!

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bahut khub bahut umda aur bhut hi sahi trike se likha hai aapne hriday,.............. dil mein ghar kar gai yeh rachna aapki...........

dhero salaam aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #12 on: August 06, 2012, 12:06:44 PM »
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Usual Smile  thank you so much Mukesh ji....!!!

Bahut khoob Hriday jee
bahut umda ..hamesha ki tarah.
maa ki yaad dilaa dee aapne.
thoda emotional ho gayaa..
Har maa ko mera saadar pranaam.
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«Reply #13 on: August 07, 2012, 02:32:02 PM »
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thanks a lot Kasak ji....!!!

kp......... just awesm post dear.......
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«Reply #14 on: August 07, 2012, 02:33:58 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa K_A ji....!!!

          touching. but yehi sachchaii hai.

                        darr-badar bhatakta rahaa roshni ke liye.!
                        paas ek chiraag thaa wo bhi bujh gayaa.!!

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