-----/// Main zindagi se duur jaataa rahaa ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on August 29, 2012, 06:37:24 AM
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uskaa chehraa mujhe khwaabon me nazar aataa rahaa
maine  bhulaanaa  chahaa par  wo   yaad aataa  rahaa

main ek  tarfaa  apni mohabbat  ko  nibhaataa  rahaa
dard ko dabaake  seene  me main muskuraataa rahaa

waadaa kiyaa thaa  usse   ki   bhool  jaaunga use main
use yaad rakhaa, bas us  waade   ko  bhulaataa  rahaa

chal  rahaa  hoon  main , manzil  ka  kuch  pataa  nahi
le chali  zindagi   jahaan   main  wahaan  jaataa rahaa

yakeen  hai ,  kabhi   to   milegi ,  kahin  to  milegi wo
bas is ummeed me main apne kadam badhaataa raaaa

par  kadam  kis  taraf  , zindagi   nahi   maut  ki  taraf
har ek  din  main  maut ke  aur  kareeb   jaataa  rahaa

sambhaalnaa chaahaa  mere   yaaron ne  bahut mujhe
main  apnaa  haath  unse  har baar  chhudaataa rahaa

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«Reply #1 on: August 29, 2012, 06:40:18 AM »
bahut bahut bahut khoobsoorat
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«Reply #2 on: August 29, 2012, 08:23:12 AM »
Bahut badhiya Kapil jee
Applause Applause
Ummeedon bhari is peshkash par mubaarakbaad kubool karen.
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«Reply #3 on: August 29, 2012, 08:33:13 AM »
BAhut BAhut Khub Likha Hai Kapil Ji Mubaarakbaad Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: August 29, 2012, 08:39:49 AM »
main   roz   ek  kadam   zindagi  se  duur  jaataa rahaa
maine  bhulaanaa  chahaa par  wo   yaad aataa  rahaa
matle mein aaps mein koi rabta nahin hai maaf karein.just line milaane wali baat hai. Usual Smile Usual Smile

main ek  tarfaa  apni mohabbat  ko  nibhaataa  rahaa
dard ko dabaake  seene  me main muskuraataa rahaa

waadaa kiyaa thaa  usse   ki   bhool  jaaunga use main
use yaad rakhaa, bas us  waade   ko  bhulaataa  rahaa

chal  rahaa  hoon  main , manzil  ka  kuch  pataa  nahi
le jaaye  zindagi   jahaan   main  wahaan  jaataa rahaa 

jaaye ki jagah chalii hoga janab
Usual Smile Usual Smile

yakeen  hai ,  kabhi   to   milegi ,  kahin  to  milegi wo
bas is ummeed me main apne kadam badhaataa raaaa

par  kadam  kis  taraf  , zindagi   nahi   maut  ki  taraf
har ek  din  main  maut ke  aur  kareeb   jaataa  rahaa icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch icon_scratch

sharaab  ko  sukun samajh main usme samaataa rahaa
ghum ko main  cigarette ke dhuyen me udaataa rahaa kamzor sher hai

sambhaalnaa chaahaa  mere   yaaron ne  bahut mujhe
main  apnaa  haath  unse  har baar  chhudaataa rahaa

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«Reply #5 on: August 29, 2012, 11:06:35 AM »
bahut khoob
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«Reply #6 on: August 29, 2012, 07:44:24 PM »
uskaa chehraa mujhe khwaabon me nazar aataa rahaa
maine  bhulaanaa  chahaa par  wo   yaad aataa  rahaa

main ek  tarfaa  apni mohabbat  ko  nibhaataa  rahaa
dard ko dabaake  seene  me main muskuraataa rahaa

waadaa kiyaa thaa  usse   ki   bhool  jaaunga use main
use yaad rakhaa, bas us  waade   ko  bhulaataa  rahaa

chal  rahaa  hoon  main , manzil  ka  kuch  pataa  nahi
le chali  zindagi   jahaan   main  wahaan  jaataa rahaa

yakeen  hai ,  kabhi   to   milegi ,  kahin  to  milegi wo
bas is ummeed me main apne kadam badhaataa raaaa

par  kadam  kis  taraf  , zindagi   nahi   maut  ki  taraf
har ek  din  main  maut ke  aur  kareeb   jaataa  rahaa

sambhaalnaa chaahaa  mere   yaaron ne  bahut mujhe
main  apnaa  haath  unse  har baar  chhudaataa rahaa

*****HRIDAY*****


bahut khoob hriday..........!
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 08:13:47 AM »
uskaa chehraa mujhe khwaabon me nazar aataa rahaa
maine  bhulaanaa  chahaa par  wo   yaad aataa  rahaa

main ek  tarfaa  apni mohabbat  ko  nibhaataa  rahaa
dard ko dabaake  seene  me main muskuraataa rahaa

waadaa kiyaa thaa  usse   ki   bhool  jaaunga use main
use yaad rakhaa, bas us  waade   ko  bhulaataa  rahaa

chal  rahaa  hoon  main , manzil  ka  kuch  pataa  nahi
le chali  zindagi   jahaan   main  wahaan  jaataa rahaa

yakeen  hai ,  kabhi   to   milegi ,  kahin  to  milegi wo
bas is ummeed me main apne kadam badhaataa raaaa

par  kadam  kis  taraf  , zindagi   nahi   maut  ki  taraf
har ek  din  main  maut ke  aur  kareeb   jaataa  rahaa

sambhaalnaa chaahaa  mere   yaaron ne  bahut mujhe
main  apnaa  haath  unse  har baar  chhudaataa rahaa

*****HRIDAY*****


naaaaaaaaaice Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2012, 08:51:24 AM »
Bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji...aapne PM me jo suggestions diye the maine accept kar ke corrections kar liye hain....!!!

bahut bahut bahut khoobsoorat
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2012, 08:52:04 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Mukesh ji...!!!

Bahut badhiya Kapil jee
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2012, 08:52:35 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa Sanjeev ji...!!!

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«Reply #11 on: August 30, 2012, 08:53:56 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaa K_A ji... aapke suggestions ko accept karke changes kar liye hain maine.... meri poem ki khoobsurti ko badhaane ke liye main aapkaa tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon...!!!


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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2012, 08:55:21 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shaukeen ji....!!!

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«Reply #13 on: August 30, 2012, 08:56:21 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Shihab ji... aapko pasand nahi aayaa wo line maine hataa diyaaa... tongue3

Bahut Bahut Khub Hriday ji sharaab Wali ko chhorh kar baaki sab Pasand aaya Applause

Shad o Aabaad Rahiye

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«Reply #14 on: August 30, 2012, 08:56:46 AM »
bahut bahut shukriyaaa Sheba ji....!!!


bahut khoob hriday..........!
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