Mukaddar hame aazmane laga.........mann

by mann.mann on December 04, 2012, 12:48:14 PM
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Mukaddar hame aazmane laga.
Naye rag kya kya dikhane laga.

Dardki had hamare kuchh aisi hui,
Aasmaan bhi hai aansu bahane laga.

Khabar hai use ham aaj mar jayenge,
Abhi se wo mahfil sajane laga.

Duriyan usse meri kuchh itni badhin,
Raaz dil ke wo hamse chhupane laga.

Khushi ki wo manzil sab chhod di,
Kahan jake "mann" tu thhikane laga.

Mann
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Quote from: mann.mann on December 04, 2012, 12:48:14 PM
Mukaddar hame aazmane laga.
Naye rag kya kya dikhane laga.

Dardki had hamare kuchh aisi hui,
Aasmaan bhi hai aansu bahane laga.

Khabar hai use ham aaj mar jayenge,
Abhi se wo mahfil sajane laga.

Duriyan usse meri kuchh itni badhin,
Raaz dil ke wo hamse chhupane laga.

Khushi ki wo manzil sab chhod di,
Kahan jake "mann" tu thhikane laga.

Mann

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«Reply #8 on: December 05, 2012, 08:42:51 AM »
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Mann Jee Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia baat hai jee bahut khoob bade achche ashaar
kahe hai janab bahut khoob... Usual Smile

Sabhi khayaal behad khoob rahe.. puri kalaam hi qabil e daad
hai... Humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye.. Usual Smile


Likhate rahiye.... Aate rahiye...
Shaad O aabaad rahiye..

Khuda Hafez.. Usual Smile
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Quote from: mann.mann on December 04, 2012, 12:48:14 PM
Mukaddar hame aazmane laga.
Naye rag kya kya dikhane laga.

Dardki had hamare kuchh aisi hui,
Aasmaan bhi hai aansu bahane laga.

Khabar hai use ham aaj mar jayenge,
Abhi se wo mahfil sajane laga.

Duriyan usse meri kuchh itni badhin,
Raaz dil ke wo hamse chhupane laga.

Khushi ki wo manzil sab chhod di,
Kahan jake "mann" tu thhikane laga.

Mann



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