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by Pooja on July 16, 2008, 05:04:10 PM
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na jaane ajj kaya dil ko karaar ayya hai
bahoot barso baad, khud pe pyar ayya hai

nihara hai khud ko aaine mai maine
man he man na jaane kaya khyal muskuraya hai

gunguna rahi hu her ek baat per ajj
ane wale, her ek sawal ko, muskura kar thukraya hai

na shikan, na gussa, na he ansoo hai ajj pass mere
shayd phir se zindagi jeene ka man mai ayya hai

na jaane ajj kaya dil ko karaar ayya hai
bahoot barso baad, khud pe pyar ayya hai!!!
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«Reply #1 on: July 16, 2008, 06:10:31 PM »
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Bohut bohut mubaarak ho nayi zindagi, naya khyaal, nayi khushiyaN, bohut hi umda likha aapne pooja ji, maoqa mila to is mauzu par zarur kuchh likhna chahunga.
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«Reply #2 on: July 16, 2008, 06:21:08 PM »
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mujhe intzaar rahega apke likhneka!!

Shukaria apko mera likha acha laga.. warna review #s badte ja rahe the aor kisi ne ek comment tak nahi likha..
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«Reply #3 on: July 16, 2008, 06:26:03 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 16, 2008, 06:21:08 PM
mujhe intzaar rahega apke likhneka!!

Shukaria apko mera likha acha laga.. warna review #s badte ja rahe the aor kisi ne ek comment tak nahi likha..

Shayad is liye ke unheN alfaaz nahi mile honge tareef ke liye,
Ham to he hi na muraad, gustaakh, jo ji me aaya likh dete heN, ye jaane bageyr ke kahan kyse alfaaz istemaal karne chahiye.
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«Reply #4 on: July 16, 2008, 09:47:44 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 16, 2008, 05:04:10 PM
na jaane ajj kaya dil ko karaar ayya hai
bahoot barso baad, khud pe pyar ayya hai

nihara hai khud ko aaine mai maine
man he man na jaane kaya khyal muskuraya hai

gunguna rahi hu her ek baat per ajj
ane wale, her ek sawal ko, muskura kar thukraya hai

na shikan, na gussa, na he ansoo hai ajj pass mere
shayd phir se zindagi jeene ka man mai ayya hai

na jaane ajj kaya dil ko karaar ayya hai
bahoot barso baad, khud pe pyar ayya hai!!!


Yunhi muskurati rahiye, gungunati rahiye ....!!
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«Reply #5 on: July 17, 2008, 03:27:40 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 16, 2008, 05:04:10 PM
na jaane ajj kaya dil ko karaar ayya hai
bahoot barso baad, khud pe pyar ayya hai

nihara hai khud ko aaine mai maine
man he man na jaane kaya khyal muskuraya hai

gunguna rahi hu her ek baat per ajj
ane wale, her ek sawal ko, muskura kar thukraya hai

na shikan, na gussa, na he ansoo hai ajj pass mere
shayd phir se zindagi jeene ka man mai ayya hai

na jaane ajj kaya dil ko karaar ayya hai
bahoot barso baad, khud pe pyar ayya hai!!!


umangon se bharpoor......khushi ki nayi bayar......laati aapki ye kavita bahoot achchi lagi.....
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«Reply #6 on: July 18, 2008, 07:25:54 PM »
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Quote from: Celmira on July 16, 2008, 09:47:44 PM
Yunhi muskurati rahiye, gungunati rahiye ....!!

Thanks Celmira
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«Reply #7 on: July 18, 2008, 07:28:20 PM »
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Quote from: bekarar on July 17, 2008, 03:27:40 AM
umangon se bharpoor......khushi ki nayi bayar......laati aapki ye kavita bahoot achchi lagi.....

Thanks Bekarar jee.... app bhi kuch likh dete to acha lagta!!
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«Reply #8 on: July 18, 2008, 07:41:18 PM »
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+++++++
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«Reply #9 on: July 18, 2008, 07:46:25 PM »
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wah kaya baat hai!!
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«Reply #10 on: July 18, 2008, 08:10:26 PM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 18, 2008, 07:46:25 PM
wah kaya baat hai!!

zarrah nawaazi ka shukriya
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«Reply #11 on: July 20, 2008, 04:43:39 AM »
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Quote from: Pooja on July 16, 2008, 05:04:10 PM
na jaane ajj kaya dil ko karaar ayya hai
bahoot barso baad, khud pe pyar ayya hai

nihara hai khud ko aaine mai maine
man he man na jaane kaya khyal muskuraya hai

gunguna rahi hu her ek baat per ajj
ane wale, her ek sawal ko, muskura kar thukraya hai

na shikan, na gussa, na he ansoo hai ajj pass mere
shayd phir se zindagi jeene ka man mai ayya hai

na jaane ajj kaya dil ko karaar ayya hai
bahoot barso baad, khud pe pyar ayya hai!!!


pyar kar khud se, sari dunia ko tu bhula de
her anne wale gum ko ab tu jhuthla de

hans kar, kar de vida, her ek ansoo aor gum ko
her khushi ki baat ko gale se laga le

hansegi her fiza, her bahar, yah jameen-asmaan
bad kar jo tu khud ko khud ke gale laga le

na mudna ab, bas chalti he ja, isi umang ke sung
hans kar tu, mujhko bhi ab Pooja tu hansa de

pyar kar khud se, sari dunia ko tu bhula de
her anne wale gum ko ab tu jhuthla de....
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«Reply #12 on: July 20, 2008, 05:22:45 PM »
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Khoob farmayaa sarthika ji...
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«Reply #13 on: July 20, 2008, 05:36:53 PM »
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Shukaria Sayyid jee...
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«Reply #14 on: November 25, 2008, 07:49:41 PM »
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Quote from: sarthika on July 20, 2008, 04:43:39 AM
pyar kar khud se, sari dunia ko tu bhula de
her anne wale gum ko ab tu jhuthla de

hans kar, kar de vida, her ek ansoo aor gum ko
her khushi ki baat ko gale se laga le

hansegi her fiza, her bahar, yah jameen-asmaan
bad kar jo tu khud ko khud ke gale laga le

na mudna ab, bas chalti he ja, isi umang ke sung
hans kar tu, mujhko bhi ab Pooja tu hansa de

pyar kar khud se, sari dunia ko tu bhula de
her anne wale gum ko ab tu jhuthla de....

Bahoot kari koshsih, her aks main wo he najar ayya
Bhoolane ki ki koshish main aor jayada wo yaad ayya

Vida kab se kar diya, yaadein kahin jaati nahi
Khud ko khoob saja saja kar bhi maine samjhaya

Bant gai hu kai tukaro main sarthika kayak are Pooja
Magar har tukre ko uske dard ne hai rulaya

Payr hai khud se, magar use jayada nahi
Her bathe ansoo ne ajj yahi hai samjhaya

Bahoot kari koshsih, her aks main wo he najar ayya
Bhoolane ki ki koshish main aor jayada wo yaad ayya
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