!!!..Na kisi ko kabhi aisa mukaam mile..!!!

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Na kisi ko kabhi aisa mukaam mile,,
Intezar se bhare subah-o-shaam mile..

Lab taras jaaye.N pyaas bujhane ko,,
Aur na ankho ke pyalo se hi jaam mile..

Mashhur itna ho jaao dastan-e-ishq me,,
Ki muhabbat ko ruswai ka inaam mile..

Ek duje ke ho kar bhi ek na ho paao,,
Aur rishte ko naam radha-shyaam mile..

Ishq karna ikk khata nazar aaye aur,,
Bhaari kishto.N me sazaa tamaam mile..

Likhne baitho ghazal khumar-e-ishq ki,,
Aur padhne ko dard bhara kalaam mile..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: August 27, 2013, 10:50:11 PM »
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kya baat hai kya baat hai...
Ek duje ke ho kar bhi ek na ho paao,,
Aur rishte ko naam radha-shyaam mile..

Ishq karna ikk khata nazar aaye aur,,
Bhaari kishto.N me sazaa tamaam mile..

Likhne baitho ghazal khumar-e-ishq ki,,
Aur padhne ko dard bhara kalaam mile..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #2 on: August 27, 2013, 10:55:48 PM »
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bahut khoob Ashwani ji...!!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 27, 2013, 11:22:43 PM »
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Lab taras jaaye.N pyaas bujhane ko,,
Aur na ankho ke pyalo se hi jaam mile..
Bahut Khoob Bhai Nashwaniji
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«Reply #4 on: August 28, 2013, 12:05:41 AM »
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Bahaut khoob Nashwani ji ... Ismein jo irony ka touch hai wo bahaut achchha laga
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WAAH WAAH Ashwani ji dil khush kithaaaaaa hai ji, choom lu woh lafz jo ishq ki baat kehe aur ush mei dab e hue jasbaat jo haal e dil bayan kare...
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«Reply #7 on: August 28, 2013, 01:40:40 AM »
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jaan lewa gazal arjun ...... tumhari ab tak ki best hai
sply ye lines

Ek duje ke ho kar bhi ek na ho paao,,
Aur rishte ko naam radha-shyaam mile..
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Wooooooooooooooow Ashwani kya baat hai bahut hi umda peshkash rahi is baar... Mai toh fida ho gayi tumhari is ghazal par... kya khoooooooooob sabhi ashaaaaar hai.. ek rau toh dena hi banta hai... hazaron hazaron daaaaaad...

Na kisi ko kabhi aisa mukaam mile,,
Intezar se bhare subah-o-shaam mile..

Mashhur itna ho jaao dastan-e-ishq me,,
Ki muhabbat ko ruswai ka inaam mile..

Ishq karna ikk khata nazar aaye aur,,
Bhaari kishto.N me sazaa tamaam mile..

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waah waah ashwani bhai.. jabardast peshkash.. Usual Smile

Likhne baitho ghazal khumar-e-ishq ki,,
Aur padhne ko dard bhara kalaam mile..!!!

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«Reply #14 on: August 28, 2013, 10:29:09 PM »
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kya baat hai kya baat hai...
Ek duje ke ho kar bhi ek na ho paao,,
Aur rishte ko naam radha-shyaam mile..

Ishq karna ikk khata nazar aaye aur,,
Bhaari kishto.N me sazaa tamaam mile..

Likhne baitho ghazal khumar-e-ishq ki,,
Aur padhne ko dard bhara kalaam mile..!!! Ñ
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Bahut shukriya iqtedar jee..happy9
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