Naav kaagaz kee ..........Mamta Bajpai

by mamta bajpai on February 26, 2011, 06:46:35 PM
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Dil jo naazuk hai mohabbat me dhadaknaa kyoNkar
naav kaagaz kee hai to paanee me utarnaa kyoNkar

log haNste haiN tamaashaa saa banaa dete haiN
apne haalaat zamaane ko bataanaa kyoNkar

deke ummeed badee aap badal jaate haiN
bevajah dil kisee bebas kaa dukhaanaa kyoNkar

koi ilzaam muhabbat me lagaanaa kaisaa
hum naheeN aap kee chaahat ye chhupaanaa kyoNkar

apnee ruswaayee kaa shikwaa nahee hotaa humko
naam logoN kee zubaaN par hai tumhaaraa kyoNkar

Mamta Bajpai
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«Reply #1 on: February 26, 2011, 06:55:43 PM »
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deke ummeed badee aap badal jaate haiN
bevajah dil kisee bebas kaa dukhaanaa kyoNkar


Bahut Khoob .... Mamta Ji !

umdaa soch ke saath kahe hai aapne sabhi ashaar ... acchi ghazal huii ...!

tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... ! Applause Applause Applause

yunhi likhte rahen ... khush rahen ... !

duaaoN ke saath ... !
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«Reply #2 on: February 26, 2011, 09:01:41 PM »
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kaafee sanzidgee se sabdon ka chayan kiya hai aapne Mamta ji.
har ek sher complete book hai.
sirf daad se kaam nhi chalega yahan--
bas dil se kahunha--wah wah.
khus rahiye aur aabaad rahiye
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«Reply #3 on: February 27, 2011, 12:32:41 AM »
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Bahut Khub Mamta Ji
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«Reply #4 on: March 06, 2011, 04:31:42 PM »
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Behad shukriyaa Naresh jee!
aap bhee yuN hee saath nibhaate raheN...khush raheN...
khushiyaaN baateN........
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«Reply #5 on: March 06, 2011, 04:39:59 PM »
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Niralaa jee aap kee dili waah waah ko humne bhee dil se hee kubool kiyaa...houslaa afzai kaa behad shukriyaa........
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«Reply #6 on: March 06, 2011, 04:40:31 PM »
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shukriyaa Rishi jee!
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«Reply #7 on: March 06, 2011, 07:47:51 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
chand se phool se ya meri juba se suniye,
har taraf aapka kissa hai jaha se suniye.
 behtareen peshkash ke liye daad kabool kijiye.
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«Reply #8 on: March 06, 2011, 11:07:05 PM »
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Badhiya Hai Mamta Ji
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«Reply #9 on: March 07, 2011, 12:15:16 PM »
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Poonam badee muddat baad nazar aayeeN .
dekh kar achchha lagaa....
bade hee niraale andaaz me housla afzai kee hai aap ne ...
bahut khoob.......
behad shukriya....
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«Reply #10 on: March 07, 2011, 12:16:08 PM »
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Shiba jee gazal pasand karne kaa dher saa shukriya.........
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«Reply #11 on: March 07, 2011, 12:18:55 PM »
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Kya Baat Hai Ji
Bohat Hi Badhiya Mamta Ji

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