......!!!!.....No VaCany......!!!........

by badnaam_shayar on June 20, 2006, 04:32:53 PM
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Author  (Read 1383 times)
badnaam_shayar
Guest
Reply with quote
Well Frnds yeh new Poem maine kisi bhi bacche ke Janm lene se uski jawaani tak ki kahani likhi hai......Maa Baap ki kya Ashayien hoti hai or woh kahan tak unpar khara utarne ki koshish karta hai or kahan tak kamyaab ho pata hai........I Hope u ppls will like it........thnx

Jab Janm liya maine toh sab ne Jashn tha manaya......
Hua thoda bada toh School me dakhila karwaya......

Roz subha maa meri tayaar karte hue kehti thi.....
Tujhe padd likh kar bahut bada insaan banna hai......
Apne Maa Baap ka Naam roshan karna hai......

Maa Baap ke paav choo ke main Pariksha dene jata tha......
Wahan harr Sawaal me mujhe Chehra unhi dono ka Nazar ata tha......

Junoon me kuch kar dikhane ki maine harr Pariksha me safal hua.......
Par jab tha main nikla Naukri ki talaash me toh mere harr Armaan ka Katl hua........

Roz subha ek nayi tarah se main tayaar hua karta tha......
Maa ke haath se kha ke ek chammach dahi.....
Unka Ashirwaad lia karta tha......

Phir kadakti dhoop me darbadar naukri ki talaash me bhatakna......
Phir dekh ke piple ki Chaav uske neeche maa ki haath ki Roti tukna......

Woh phir shaam ko mooh latka ke wapas ghar ana......
Pita ji ka mujhse poochna aur mera neeche chale jana......

Kya karun main mujhe kuch samajh nahi ata......
Jab nahi Bhavishaya koi toh harr koi apna Baccha kyu padata.......

Samajh aya ab mujhe jiski hai Sifarish wahi Kamyaaab hai......
Binn Sifarish ke toh Jindagi hee bekaar hai.........!!!!!!!!
Logged
ranjana
Guest
«Reply #1 on: June 20, 2006, 04:35:32 PM »
Reply with quote
superbbbbbbbbb GAURAV ......bilkul sach likha diya tumne apne khubsurat lafazo mein......good dear........bahut aacha ..... Usual Smile
Logged
badnaam_shayar
Guest
«Reply #2 on: June 20, 2006, 04:37:17 PM »
Reply with quote
Thnx a lot ranju :D
Logged
nikki
Guest
«Reply #3 on: June 20, 2006, 04:39:07 PM »
Reply with quote
so true..n nice B_S
Logged
Delicate_Doll
Guest
«Reply #4 on: June 20, 2006, 04:48:29 PM »
Reply with quote
nice gaurav
Logged
Pooja
Guest
«Reply #5 on: June 20, 2006, 07:24:15 PM »
Reply with quote
wah kay abaat hai BS JI, bahoot khoob!!

Na ho nirash, ki pariksha ka waqat hai
jitna socha apne, khuda utna nahi sakhat hai

ho app kamyaab yahi dua rahegi hamari
bane acha bhavishye, ho achi si nokary tumhari

man ke haare HAAR hai, man ke jeete JEET
Uth chal ab aggy, na soch usko, jo gaya hai Beet!!!
Logged
badnaam_shayar
Guest
«Reply #6 on: June 21, 2006, 12:21:29 AM »
Reply with quote
Thnx a lot Salma....nikki and Pooja ji..gud one u too....thnx for Motivate me.... Usual Smile

Haara nahi main bas thoda ghabra gaya hu......
Kahana jane ki sochi thi or yeh kahan aa gaya hu......

Kya hoga Sapno ka kya mere Armaan ab Zinda rahenge......
Agar halaat rahe yahi toh hum toh bas adhoori jindagi jiyenge......
Logged
Rajbir
Guest
«Reply #7 on: June 21, 2006, 09:54:50 PM »
Reply with quote
Gaurav ! As per my promise ek choti si koshish !

Maa baap ki aashaon ka tu chiraag hai
Ek na ek din to tujhe choona aakash hai !

Pujya jano ka aashirwaad yuhi vyarth na jayega
Ek pyara sa swarag tu unke liye yahin banayega !

Zindagi ki rukawaton se tu kabhi bhi mat ghabrana
Ek shoorveer ki tarah tu unhein dhwast karte jaana !

Paoge jab lakshaya apni zindagi ka kade parishram se
Hoga phir hum sab ko atyant garv tere gaurav se !
 :D

 Puzzled !
Logged
ranjana
Guest
«Reply #8 on: June 21, 2006, 10:53:57 PM »
Reply with quote
wah kya baat hai............ :D bahut khub Rajbir .......superbbbbbb Usual Smile

aap toh chhaa gaye.......... :D
Logged
badnaam_shayar
Guest
«Reply #9 on: June 21, 2006, 11:14:57 PM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "Rajbir"
Gaurav ! As per my promise ek choti si koshish !

Maa baap ki aashaon ka tu chiraag hai
Ek na ek din to tujhe choona aakash hai !

Pujya jano ka aashirwaad yuhi vyarth na jayega
Ek pyara sa swarag tu unke liye yahin banayega !

Zindagi ki rukawaton se tu kabhi bhi mat ghabrana
Ek shoorveer ki tarah tu unhein dhwast karte jaana !

Paoge jab lakshaya apni zindagi ka kade parishram se
Hoga phir hum sab ko atyant garv tere gaurav se !
 :D

 Puzzled !


 Shocked Kya baat hai Rajbir bhaiya.....first point ki aapne likha second point yeh ki itna accha likha.......WOW thats really nice.....sach me laga ki koi saath hai mere.....Thnx a lot
Logged
anjani_si
Guest
«Reply #10 on: June 22, 2006, 03:24:41 AM »
Reply with quote
Quote from: "Rajbir"
Gaurav ! As per my promise ek choti si koshish !

Maa baap ki aashaon ka tu chiraag hai
Ek na ek din to tujhe choona aakash hai !

Pujya jano ka aashirwaad yuhi vyarth na jayega
Ek pyara sa swarag tu unke liye yahin banayega !

Zindagi ki rukawaton se tu kabhi bhi mat ghabrana
Ek shoorveer ki tarah tu unhein dhwast karte jaana !

Paoge jab lakshaya apni zindagi ka kade parishram se
Hoga phir hum sab ko atyant garv tere gaurav se !
 :D

 Puzzled !


waah kya baat hai......baatein banane ke ilawa....app ko aur bhi pata hai :D:D
Logged
Shikha12
Guest
«Reply #11 on: June 23, 2006, 03:36:15 PM »
Reply with quote
Nice one Gaurav, Pooja ji, Ranjana ji and Rajbir ji....



Kisi ney sahi kaha hai:

Bahut kar li aaish yaron college ki diwaron mey,  Usual Smile
Dhoondhtey hai naukri ab roz naye akhbaron mey....  sad5

(Not mine)
[/b]
Logged
deepika_divya
Guest
«Reply #12 on: March 20, 2007, 10:43:04 AM »
Reply with quote
wow gaurav.. mast likha hi.. Rajbir bhaiya ji wow tussi bhi cha gai. pooja di ranjana di & Shikha di.. aap logo ne tho kamal kar diya.. really true & nic lines....

Kismat par barosa rako..
yahi hai jo saath nahi choda karti hai..

vakt jarur badal jata hai par
yahi hai jo nai takdir likha karti hai...

dkna ak vakt aisa aayega..
yea vakt tere kadmo mein juk jayega..

yaad karegi duniya tujhe
ak aisi pehchan tu payega....

Best of Luck Gaurav...
Logged
Pages: [1]
ReplyPrint
Jump to:  

+ Quick Reply
With a Quick-Reply you can use bulletin board code and smileys as you would in a normal post, but much more conveniently.


Get Yoindia Updates in Email.

Enter your email address:

Ask any question to expert on eTI community..
Welcome, Guest. Please login or register.
Did you miss your activation email?
June 13, 2026, 11:03:08 AM

Login with username, password and session length
Recent Replies
[June 05, 2026, 08:07:29 PM]

[June 05, 2026, 08:06:14 PM]

[June 05, 2026, 08:05:07 PM]

[May 31, 2026, 04:57:41 PM]

[May 31, 2026, 04:55:56 PM]

[May 31, 2026, 04:55:21 PM]

[May 31, 2026, 04:28:57 PM]

[May 31, 2026, 04:26:17 PM]

[May 31, 2026, 04:23:56 PM]

[May 31, 2026, 04:21:16 PM]
Yoindia Shayariadab Copyright © MGCyber Group All Rights Reserved
Terms of Use| Privacy Policy Powered by PHP MySQL SMF© Simple Machines LLC
Page created in 0.095 seconds with 22 queries.
[x] Join now community of 8522 Real Poets and poetry admirer