-----/// Paan lene ///----- Hriday

by ~Hriday~ on October 12, 2012, 06:25:10 PM
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main gayaa jab  subah  ek  meethaa paan lene
wo samjhaa  ki  main aayaa uski  dukaan  lene

band karke apni dukaan wo  bhaagaa  is tarha
usko  lagaa  main  aayaa  hoon  uski jaan lene

baat  aur   hai  ki  udhaari  li  thi usne  mujhse
par kahaan gayaa thaa main wo saamaan lene

raat  se   tadap   rahaa  thaa  us  cheez ke liye
subah hote  hi  main gayaa thaa ek  paan lene

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«Reply #1 on: October 12, 2012, 06:41:44 PM »
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main gayaa jab  subah  ek  meethaa paan lene
wo samjhaa  ki  main aayaa uski  dukaan  lene

band karke apni dukaan wo  bhaagaa  is tarha
usko  lagaa  main  aayaa  hoon  uski jaan lene

baat  aur   hai  ki  udhaari  li  thi usne  mujhse
par kahaan gayaa thaa main wo saamaan lene

raat  se   tadap   rahaa  thaa  us  cheez ke liye
subah hote  hi  main gayaa thaa ek  paan lene

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«Reply #2 on: October 13, 2012, 03:02:31 AM »
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BAHUT KHUB Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #3 on: October 13, 2012, 06:45:20 AM »
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good one ..but ek meetha paan mere liye bhi ....banaras wala hoto kya hi baat hai. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #4 on: October 13, 2012, 12:27:03 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Manoj ji....!!!

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«Reply #5 on: October 14, 2012, 05:09:30 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Soudagar ji....!!!

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«Reply #6 on: October 14, 2012, 05:29:47 PM »
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waaaaaaaah....... kya baat hai sir ji........... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 15, 2012, 01:32:40 AM »
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nice
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«Reply #8 on: October 15, 2012, 06:48:45 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Sahal ji... aap bas apna address bhej dijiye....!!!

good one ..but ek meetha paan mere liye bhi ....banaras wala hoto kya hi baat hai. Thumbs UP
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«Reply #9 on: October 15, 2012, 11:14:45 AM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaaa Vimmi ji....!!!

waaaaaaaah....... kya baat hai sir ji........... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: October 15, 2012, 11:17:57 AM »
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Thanks a lot Nandbahu ji....!!!

nice
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