PATH_THAR KO PUJTE......

by sajid_ghayel on August 23, 2008, 09:33:55 AM
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PATH_THAR KO PUJTE THE
PATH_THAR SE CHOT KHAYEE
DUNIYA BANANE WALE
TERI DUNIYA SAMAJ NA AAYEE
             
                       -SAJID GHAYEL-
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«Reply #1 on: August 23, 2008, 09:40:25 AM »
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Nice Lines Sajid Ji..
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«Reply #2 on: August 23, 2008, 09:48:36 AM »
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THANKX MAHIYA JEE WOULD YOU ADD ANOTHER 4 LINES
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«Reply #3 on: August 23, 2008, 09:58:23 AM »
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Quote from: sajid_ghayel on August 23, 2008, 09:48:36 AM
THANKX MAHIYA JEE WOULD YOU ADD ANOTHER 4 LINES

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Yeh Bekasi ka aalam,
Yeh karb si hawaayein..
Kahin toot.ti si saansein,
Jo phir judd naa paayi...
Pathhar ko poojte thhe, Pathhar se chott khaayi,
Duniya banaane waale, Teri Duniya samajh naa aayi...

Bada waqt ka hai maara,
Yahan hota nahin guzaara,
Phir yaad 'Khuda' tu aaya,
Jab bhookhe neend naa aayi...
Pathhar ko poojte thhe, Pathhar se chott khaayi,
Duniya banaane waale, Teri Duniya samajh naa aayi...
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«Reply #4 on: August 23, 2008, 10:03:17 AM »
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WHO ARE YOU. MAHIYA I SALUTE YOU AND I TRULY RESPECT YOU FROM THIS DAY IT WAS GREAT.
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«Reply #5 on: August 23, 2008, 10:38:48 AM »
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Very nice both of you.... Keep it up.. Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: August 23, 2008, 10:48:59 AM »
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bahoot khoob sajid ji aur mahiya ke shabdon ne ise aur bhi asardar bana diya...behtreen...
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«Reply #7 on: August 23, 2008, 12:47:08 PM »
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YARO IS CREATION KA PURA CREDIT MAHIYA KO HI DENA CHAHIYE THANKS NATURAL AND BEKARAR YAAR AAP LOGH BHI KUCH ADD KARE
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«Reply #8 on: August 25, 2008, 08:08:08 AM »
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Waah Sajid Bhai,.
Kya Lines Hain Yaar,.

And Nice One Mahiya,.
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«Reply #9 on: August 25, 2008, 08:09:45 AM »
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Dekha Jab Duniya Ki Haalat Humne,.
Ke Ye Patthar Poojte Hain,.
Humne Dil Apna Patthar Banaa Liya,.
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«Reply #10 on: August 25, 2008, 08:11:31 AM »
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is kalam ko aaj hi pura karke post kiya hain teri duniya..... padhe
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«Reply #11 on: August 27, 2008, 10:11:49 AM »
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Nice start Sajid ji, and Mahiya and Jaanasheen ji  Thumbs UP
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«Reply #12 on: August 30, 2008, 03:15:28 AM »
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humne dil apna patthar bana liya ise mukammal karke post karo janasheenn
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«Reply #13 on: November 20, 2008, 07:19:56 PM »
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nice work SG, Mahiya and Lil bro (jaanasheen)
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«Reply #14 on: November 20, 2008, 09:08:58 PM »
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pooja ise mukammal karke bhi post kiya hain aap ek baar padh leti to badi khushi hoti
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