patthar..................sheba

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                       machalte hue armaano.n ko sambhaal rakha hai!
                       kuch  aise   hi khud  ko  behaal  rakha hai!!


                       naa   aaye   nazar   kisi  ko   aansoo  mere.
                       rone   se   pahle   ye   khayaal  rakha  hai!


                       taiy  shudaa  taarikh  pe wisaal-e-yaar mein.
                       jalaa   kar   chiraag  har  saal  rakha  hai!


                       lage  poochne  ab  mujh  se  hi  sabab  iska.
                       nigaah   ne   meri  jo   sawaal   rakha  hai!


                       hai  bechain  manzar aur pareshaa.n main bhi.
                       khawaabo.n  ne  chaar-soo  jo jaal rakha hai!



                      rahi  ek   khoobi  azal  se  patthar ki sheba!
                       khud  ko 'pujwaane' ka  kamaal rakha hai!!
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«Reply #1 on: April 07, 2013, 08:43:25 PM »
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ziyaadaa kuchh naheen bas ek rau le lo aur hamesha khush raho
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«Reply #2 on: April 07, 2013, 08:43:51 PM »
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                       machalte hue armaano.n ko sambhaal rakha hai!
                       kuch  aise   hi khud  ko  behaal  rakha hai!!


                       naa   aaye   nazar   kisi  ko   aansoo  mere.
                       rone   se   pahle   ye   khayaal  rakha  hai!


                       taiy  shudaa  taarikh  pe wisaal-e-yaar mein.
                       jalaa   kar   chiraag  har  saal  rakha  hai!


                       lage  poochne  ab  mujh  se  hi  sabab  iska.
                       nigaah   ne   meri  jo   sawaal   rakha  hai!


                       hai  bechain  manzar aur pareshaa.n main bhi.
                       khawaabo.n  ne  chaar-soo  jo jaal rakha hai!



                       rahi  ek   khoobi  azal  se  pattar ki sheba!
                       khud  ko 'pujwaane' ka  kamaal rakha hai!!



Kya Kehne Sheba Ji...Bahutt gehrai Hai iss Ghazal mein..Khaas Taur Par Doosra Aur maqte Ka Sher.....Sach Mein lajawaab..

Bahutttttttttttttt bahutttttttttttttt Khooooooob!!!!!!

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«Reply #3 on: April 07, 2013, 11:56:00 PM »
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Bahut hi behtareen rahi ye Ghazal Sheba ji bahut bahut khoob....waah waah waah ...dheron daad...
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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2013, 12:03:09 AM »
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                       machalte hue armaano.n ko sambhaal rakha hai!
                       kuch  aise   hi khud  ko  behaal  rakha hai!!


                       naa   aaye   nazar   kisi  ko   aansoo  mere.
                       rone   se   pahle   ye   khayaal  rakha  hai!


                       taiy  shudaa  taarikh  pe wisaal-e-yaar mein.
                       jalaa   kar   chiraag  har  saal  rakha  hai!


                       lage  poochne  ab  mujh  se  hi  sabab  iska.
                       nigaah   ne   meri  jo   sawaal   rakha  hai!


                       hai  bechain  manzar aur pareshaa.n main bhi.
                       khawaabo.n  ne  chaar-soo  jo jaal rakha hai!



                      rahi  ek   khoobi  azal  se  patthar ki sheba!
                       khud  ko 'pujwaane' ka  kamaal rakha hai!!

waaaahhhh

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«Reply #5 on: April 08, 2013, 12:53:16 AM »
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Bahut khoob Sheba jee

naa   aaye   nazar   kisi  ko   aansoo  mere.                        
rone   se   pahle   ye   khayaal  rakha  hai!

mujhe ye sher bahut pasand aaya.

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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2013, 01:47:16 AM »
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                       machalte hue armaano.n ko sambhaal rakha hai!
                       kuch  aise   hi khud  ko  behaal  rakha hai!!


                       naa   aaye   nazar   kisi  ko   aansoo  mere.
                       rone   se   pahle   ye   khayaal  rakha  hai!


                       taiy  shudaa  taarikh  pe wisaal-e-yaar mein.
                       jalaa   kar   chiraag  har  saal  rakha  hai!


                       lage  poochne  ab  mujh  se  hi  sabab  iska.
                       nigaah   ne   meri  jo   sawaal   rakha  hai!


                       hai  bechain  manzar aur pareshaa.n main bhi.
                       khawaabo.n  ne  chaar-soo  jo jaal rakha hai!



                       rahi  ek   khoobi  azal  se  patthar ki sheba!
                       khud  ko 'pujwaane' ka  kamaal rakha hai!!

nice 1 Sheba ji
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2013, 02:45:06 AM »
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Shebaa Sahibaa Aadaab!


WaaH jee waaH kia kahne .. badi hi khoob aur umdaa kalaam kahi hai jee.. behad gehre aur khoob ashaaroN meiN khayaalon ko piroya hai aapne.. Usual Smile


Sabhia shaar qabil e daad hai... Is khoob kalaam, par humari hazaaroN dili daad O mubbarakbad kabul kijiye... Usual Smile


Likhati rahiye... Bazm meiN aati rahiye ..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile






                       machalte hue armaano.n ko sambhaal rakha hai!
                       kuch  aise   hi khud  ko  behaal  rakha hai!!

Kafi umdaa aur gehre matla kaha hai.. daad daad daad...



                       naa   aaye   nazar   kisi  ko   aansoo  mere.
                       rone   se   pahle   ye   khayaal  rakha  hai!

Waah jee waaH kia umdaa sher kaha hai behad khoob .. sidha sa khayaal hai par behad khoobsurat raha daad... Usual Smile



                       taiy  shudaa  taarikh  pe wisaal-e-yaar mein.
                       jalaa   kar   chiraag  har  saal  rakha  hai!

Shebaa Sahibaa Olaa misra hume kuch sahiN nahi laga..  kyuN ke khayaal aapka hai toH aap shayad sahin se samjheNgi..



                       lage  poochne  ab  mujh  se  hi  sabab  iska.
                       nigaah   ne   meri  jo   sawaal   rakha  hai!

Bahut khoob jee daad...



                       hai  bechain  manzar aur pareshaa.n main bhi.
                       khawaabo.n  ne  chaar-soo  jo jaal rakha hai!


Bahut khoob bada achcha sher hai daad..



                       rahi  ek   khoobi  azal  se  patthar ki sheba!
                       khud  ko 'pujwaane' ka  kamaal rakha hai!!


Maqta behad laa jawaab kaha hai jee daad daad daad...









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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2013, 03:18:42 AM »
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                       machalte hue armaano.n ko sambhaal rakha hai!
                       kuch  aise   hi khud  ko  behaal  rakha hai!!


                       naa   aaye   nazar   kisi  ko   aansoo  mere.
                       rone   se   pahle   ye   khayaal  rakha  hai!


                       taiy  shudaa  taarikh  pe wisaal-e-yaar mein.
                       jalaa   kar   chiraag  har  saal  rakha  hai!


                       lage  poochne  ab  mujh  se  hi  sabab  iska.
                       nigaah   ne   meri  jo   sawaal   rakha  hai!


                       hai  bechain  manzar aur pareshaa.n main bhi.
                       khawaabo.n  ne  chaar-soo  jo jaal rakha hai!



                       rahi  ek   khoobi  azal  se  patthar ki sheba!
                       khud  ko 'pujwaane' ka  kamaal rakha hai!!

beautiful poetry...asghar
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2013, 11:56:27 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: April 08, 2013, 01:14:33 PM »
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                       machalte hue armaano.n ko sambhaal rakha hai!
                       kuch  aise   hi khud  ko  behaal  rakha hai!!


                       naa   aaye   nazar   kisi  ko   aansoo  mere.
                       rone   se   pahle   ye   khayaal  rakha  hai!


                       taiy  shudaa  taarikh  pe wisaal-e-yaar mein.
                       jalaa   kar   chiraag  har  saal  rakha  hai!


                       lage  poochne  ab  mujh  se  hi  sabab  iska.
                       nigaah   ne   meri  jo   sawaal   rakha  hai!


                       hai  bechain  manzar aur pareshaa.n main bhi.
                       khawaabo.n  ne  chaar-soo  jo jaal rakha hai!



                       rahi  ek   khoobi  azal  se  patthar ki sheba!
                       khud  ko 'pujwaane' ka  kamaal rakha hai!!

wonderful sheba ji.
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«Reply #12 on: April 08, 2013, 07:41:25 PM »
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«Reply #13 on: April 16, 2013, 04:19:43 AM »
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ziyaadaa kuchh naheen bas ek rau le lo aur hamesha khush raho

shukria dr ji.......!
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«Reply #14 on: April 16, 2013, 08:43:34 PM »
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Kya Kehne Sheba Ji...Bahutt gehrai Hai iss Ghazal mein..Khaas Taur Par Doosra Aur maqte Ka Sher.....Sach Mein lajawaab..

Bahutttttttttttttt bahutttttttttttttt Khooooooob!!!!!!

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shukria.........!
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