Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar -Panna 2:Miscellaneous Shayri

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«Reply #15 on: November 13, 2010, 03:04:10 PM »

Quote from: -Rahim- on November 12, 2010, 09:05:15 PM

Nikhaar di,
Bahaut bahaut khoob..
Mujhe bahaut achi lagi yeh peshkash apki..
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dil se shukriya Rahim ji...khushi hui jaan kar k aapko yeh peshkash pasand aayi


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #16 on: November 13, 2010, 03:30:29 PM »

Quote from: Matrix Guy on November 13, 2010, 05:43:37 AM

hmm nikhar ji.........
apki post read ki.ek nahi sahyad bht baar chuka hu last 1 hour me.........well muje nahi pata ki kisi ko ye kya samaj aayi ya nahi ayi......but ha muje ye bahot bahot aachi lagi......

ek dard........ek ghutan......kuch past me jo kho chuke uska dard.....agey jo khone ja rahe he aur esa hone se rok bhi nahi sakte uska dar aur dard........pyar karna aur pyar ka tutna.....dono hi apne ek line me kah diya (4th paragraph)ye muje sabse aacha laga........hmm kya kahu bht kuch feelings aa rahi he .....shayd anadr bhi kuch esa hi he jo apne likha he .khud ko feel kar raha hu......

bas bht likh chuka aur kya likhu......i think it is one ur best poetry u wrote and one of my best poetry i read till now.....

keep going and be in touch

aapne itna khuch keh diya k mai kya kahu.....bakhubi samjha aapne inn panktiyon mein chipi bhavnao ko.....bahut bahut shukriya...qunki ankahe jajbaaton ko samajhna aasan nahi hota....... Usual Smile


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #17 on: November 13, 2010, 03:35:23 PM »

Quote from: khwaish on November 13, 2010, 07:58:51 AM

Bahut Bahut Khoob pooja..Sach mein Gehre Lafz,Padhkar Yeh Mehsoos Hota hai Ke Aapne Dil Se Likha Hai Aur Ek Hi baar mein Aap Yeh Likh gaye..Bas Ek baar 4rth Sher Ko Kuch Edit Zaroor karna..

Just Tooooooooooooo Gooooooooooood!

bahut bahut shukriya khwaish ji.....4th sher mein galati se do baar likha gaya.....maine bhi abhi hi padha...


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #18 on: November 13, 2010, 03:55:35 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on November 13, 2010, 08:24:08 AM

Nikhar ji dil ko kagaz pe rakh dena agar ek hunar hai to mai kahunga ki aap ek jaheen ustaad hain is hunar ki....koshish karunga ki aaj hi balki abhi hi kuch likh paun jawab me.....likhte rahen Applause

aapne chand lafjon mein sab khuch keh diya bekarar ji......
notworthy

....waise mai koi ustaad nahi balki yo ki ek choti si member hu jisne likhna bhi aap sabse hi sikha hai toh sahi mayno mein ustaad aap sab hue...teh dil se shukriya aapka...... Usual Smile


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #19 on: November 13, 2010, 04:58:32 PM »

Quote from: ANAAM on November 12, 2010, 07:29:42 PM

Maaf kariyega kuchh pale nahi pad raha hai......
bhav aapke bahak gaye hain......
lines bikhar gayee hain.....
shabd bhi control main nahi lag rahe.....
mast khichdi ban gayee hai....
par kadhi k bina sach mai adhuri lag rahi hai.....
Chat-pati chatni he de deti tou kuchh taste aa jaata....
Kavita nikhaar jaati...haan Nikaarji such me.... Applause

Maafi kyu maang rahe hai Anaam ji.....mjhe aapki kisi bhi baat ka bura nahi laga.....qunki aapki ye baatein se zyada mujhe yha sabke pyar bhare comments nazar aa rahe hai....mere liye aapki baaton ko dil pe lene se behtrin hai
Khwaish ji , Sanjeev ji aur MG ji k kahe alfaazon ko yaad rakhna......

chahe toh aap bhi yaad rakh sakte hai Anaam ji....

yha sabhi umda shayar hai....khuch ko shayari ki saugaat viraasat mein mili hai toh khuch mujh jaise hai jinhone yahi se likhna sikha h.....aur hamein koi haq nahi k hum kisi ki bhavnao ka mjak uddaye......ummid karti hu k aap koshish karege "samajhne" ki .....aur jab aap samajh jaayege toh yakeenan aapko naam jarur mil jaayega Anaam ji....... Usual Smile

Khwaish ji , Sanjeev ji , Mg ji aap sabka shukriya kehne k liye lafj nahi hai mere paas.....
bahut accha lagta hai jab aapko ye mehsus hota hai k aap akele nahi hai....khaas uss waqt jab aapko kisi ki kahe apshabdon ka jwaab dena ho.....
dil se shukriya....... happy3


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #20 on: November 13, 2010, 05:53:27 PM »

Quote from: bekarar on November 13, 2010, 08:40:47 AM

Chand kadamon ka hi faasla tha manzil se,k kadam raahon par mud gaye
Aapki kavita ki ek line jisne mere dil ko choo liya usi ko aadhar bana kar chaar line aapki najar

nai rahon pe chal diye, magar manjil wahi purani rakhkhi
usi taraf uth gaye kadam jis raah pe teri nishani rakkhi,

har us shakhs ka ho gaya mai jisme teri adayen dekhi,
Har kali ko chooa maine, taasir magar ruhaani rakkhi,

bahut khoob likha hai.........nayi raaho par chalna aur manjil wahi purani....
khoob piroya lafjon ko......inn alfaazon ka jwaab toh nahi ...phr bhi likhne ki gusatkhi ki hai.......

Laut aana hi tha mud kar, toh jaana kyu hua
Wo hamesha se tha apna,aaj bhi hai,
phir na jaane rishta begana kyu hua

Halki si aawaaz bhi aati toh mod na mudte
Labon par tere,par, ek lafj ka bhi aana na hua


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #21 on: November 13, 2010, 06:18:07 PM »

Nikhaarji......mein tou kisi ko hurt karne ka soch bhi nahi sakta......ye meri fitrat hai he nahi.......mere comments shayad bahut light mood mai they......ek gambheer wata waran jo upasthit ho raha tha usse light karna he mera uddeshya tha....shayad mein yahaan par galti soch baitha.....dilse xshma chahta hu aapse v anya sabhi vachkonse jinhe meri wajah se dukh pahucha hai aur aacrosh huaa hai......mein apni pratikriya ko waapas leta hu.....aur aapse xshma ki apeksha rakhta hu........ tearyeyed

Quote from: Nikhaar on November 13, 2010, 04:58:32 PM


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #22 on: November 14, 2010, 02:42:06 PM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on November 12, 2010, 06:31:27 PM

Doston..aaj kaafi waqt baad khuch likha hai....kya likha hai.....khud ko bhi nahi pta....bas dil mein jo aaya likh diya...isliye misc. section mein post kar rahi hai......aapke comments ka intzaar rahega.....

Thaama hai kalam ko inn ungliyon ne ye sochkar aaj
Zindagi k panno mein likhi jaayegi phir se ek kahani aaj

Raaton ki tanhayi hogi, dhundhali yaadon ki parchhayi hogi
Aur mil kar likhenge dono koi naya geet aaj

Dil ko chot pahuchane k raaste par badhe chale ja rahe hai kadam
Dil ki haar ka wo manjar likhenge khuch iss tarah,
K uss pal par bhi haamein hoga naaz

Chand kadamon ka hi faasla tha manzil se,k kadam raahon par mud gaye
Khuch naya talashne ki khwaish mein
Aankhon mein chubh gaye kaanch

Zindagi kya hai...shayari hi toh hai
Likhte khuch hai aur ye likh jaati khuch hai
Taal par iski jhumna hi theek,
Na jaane kab kaunsa ye nachaye naach

Thaama tha kalam ko ye sochkar k ek nayi kahani likhenge aaj
Par phir se ek adhuri kahani likh gaye aaj

Main samajh sakti hu nikhaar ji kayi baar dil mein itne ehsas hote hai ki kisi ek ehsas per likhne mushkil sa ho jata hai bus jo dil keheta hai wahi kalam likhti jati hai..apne bahut khoob likha hai aur sabhi ne bakhubi apke halaat ka smjha bhi hai bahut acha laga ki lambe waqt k baad apka likha kuch padhne mila..take care ji...


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #23 on: November 15, 2010, 05:26:30 AM »

Quote from: khwaish on November 13, 2010, 09:03:30 AM

Sanjeev bro..
Aap Ka Hukum Sar Aankhon par...

Jis Kahani Mein Milne Se pehle Bichadna Likha Ho
Hasne Se Pehle Rona Likha Ho
Paane Se Pehle Khona Likha Ho

Kuch Ankahe Jazbaton ko Lafzon Mein Utaarenge Aaj!!!
Zindagi Ke Panho Mein Likhenge Phir Ek Kahani Aaaj!!!

Jis Kahani Mein Manzil To kareeb Thi
Par Kadam Ladkada Gaye
Kuch Tasveere Bahut Hi Haseen Thi
Par Waqt Ki Tez Aandhi Mein
Tasveere Dhoondhla Gaye
Jeet Naa Tha Jis Baazi Ko
Woh Baazi Hi Haar Gaye

Roti Hui kalam Se Kuch Dil Ki Baatein Kahenge Aaj!!!
Zindagi Ke Panho mein Likhenge Phir Se Ek kahani Aaj!!!

Apni majbooriyon Se Darr kar Zindagi Ghabra Gayi!!!
Buland Hauslo Ko bhi Jaise Maut Aa Gayi!!!
Kuch Faisle Zindagi ke Aise The jo Sunna Nahi chaahte The
Par Zindagi Khud Humein Woh Faisle Suuna Gayi
"Khwaish" Aaj Phir Mohabbat Hi Kyon Maat Kha Gayi

Bhooli-Bisri Dastaan Ko Phir se Dohraayenge Aaj!!!
Zindagi Ke Panho Mein Likhenge Phir Se Ek Kahaani Aaj!!!!

waah mere bhai chaa gaye......jin jajbaaton ko lekar nikhar ji ne ye rachna likhi...unhe aapne bakhoobi nibhaya hai ....bahoot khoob Applause


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #24 on: November 15, 2010, 05:33:56 AM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on November 13, 2010, 04:58:32 PM

dekho khwaish ka to pata nahi lekin mera shukriya ada karna hai to bas ek aur badhiya si kavita likh den.. Usual Smile


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #25 on: November 15, 2010, 05:35:31 AM »

Quote from: Nikhaar on November 13, 2010, 05:53:27 PM

bahoot khoob


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #26 on: November 15, 2010, 07:58:32 AM »

Nikhaar ji...sabse pehle maafi chahuga ..itni achhi post ko itne der bad dekha raha hun..

ek bat hamesha keheta hun aaj bhi kahuga..."dil ki bat dil ko chhoo hi leti hai..."

mai likhta raha man ko syahi samajhkar dil ke panne par,
man ujda dil bikhar gaya or chahat adhoori reh gayi,
ek safar tha apna bhi jiski sirf kahani reh gayi...
zinda-dili thi zindagi kabhi sirf zinda dil reh gayi...


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #27 on: November 15, 2010, 08:43:21 AM »

Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on November 15, 2010, 07:58:32 AM

Waah Waah!!! Bahut Khoob Abhiji


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Re: Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

«Reply #28 on: November 15, 2010, 08:48:11 AM »

Quote from: ANAAM on November 13, 2010, 06:18:07 PM

Mere Bhai Anaam Ji, Chodiye Pichli Baton ko Jo Ho Gaya So Ho gaya..agar hum wahi baaton ko pakad kar chale to Woh Dilon Ko takleef degi..

Shayad aap karna kuch aur chaahte the aur nazar kuch aur aaya..bhool jaaye inn baaton ko..apna khayal Rakhe..