Phir ek adhuri Kahani...............Nikhaar

by Nikhaar on November 12, 2010, 06:31:27 PM
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«Reply #30 on: November 15, 2010, 08:52:30 AM »
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Waah Waah!!! Bahut Khoob Abhiji Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
shukriya sir g pasand karne ke liye~
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«Reply #31 on: November 15, 2010, 08:53:08 AM »
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waah mere bhai chaa gaye......jin jajbaaton ko lekar nikhar ji ne ye rachna likhi...unhe aapne bakhoobi nibhaya hai ....bahoot khoob  Applause Applause

Sanjeev Bro, Aapne Padha Matlab Mera Likhna Safal Hua..Teh Dilll Se shukriya Aapka..Yuhi Saath Dete Rahiyega Sanjeev Bhai.. notworthy
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«Reply #32 on: November 15, 2010, 09:08:06 AM »
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dekho khwaish ka to pata nahi lekin mera shukriya ada karna hai to bas ek aur badhiya si kavita likh den.. Usual Smile Usual Smile

Bilkul Sahi kaha Sanjeev Bro Aapne Par..

Nikaar Ji Itna Jaldi Kabhi koi Kavita Nahi Likhte, unhe Der Saari Benti Aur Maske lagaane Padhte Hai Phir Jaakar Woh koi Kirpa Karte Hai..Abhi Tak Meri Kayi Request Kataar Mein hai.. icon_geek

Hai Naa Nikhaar Ji??  tongue3
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«Reply #33 on: November 15, 2010, 03:27:10 PM »
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Main samajh sakti hu nikhaar ji kayi baar dil mein itne ehsas hote hai ki kisi ek ehsas per likhne mushkil sa ho jata hai bus jo dil keheta hai wahi kalam likhti jati hai..apne bahut khoob likha hai aur sabhi ne bakhubi apke halaat ka smjha bhi hai bahut acha laga ki lambe waqt k baad apka likha kuch padhne mila..take care ji...Usual Smile
dil se shukriya aapka dear....bilkul sach kha aapne..... bakhubi samjha inn aehsaason ko.......bahut bahut shukriya aapka...khushi hui jaankar ki aapko ye pesshkash pasand aayi... Usual Smile
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«Reply #34 on: November 15, 2010, 03:44:01 PM »
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dekho khwaish ka to pata nahi lekin mera shukriya ada karna hai to bas ek aur badhiya si kavita likh den.. Usual Smile Usual Smile
jaisa aap kahe Sanjeev ji.....jaise hi dil ka hukm hoga ,ek aur kavita aapke saamne hogi....
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«Reply #35 on: November 15, 2010, 04:52:29 PM »
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Nikhaar ji...sabse pehle maafi chahuga ..itni achhi post ko itne der bad dekha raha hun..

ek bat hamesha keheta hun aaj bhi kahuga..."dil ki bat dil ko chhoo hi leti hai..."

mai likhta raha man ko syahi samajhkar dil ke panne par,
man ujda dil bikhar gaya or chahat adhoori reh gayi,
ek safar tha apna bhi jiski sirf kahani reh gayi...
zinda-dili thi zindagi kabhi sirf zinda dil reh gayi...


maafi maang kar sharminda mat kijiye abhi ji....aur bahut accha likha hai aapne....har line khuch kehti hai....
bahut khoob...
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«Reply #36 on: November 16, 2010, 06:24:08 PM »
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...Jajbaaton ki aandhi mai.......jab likha jaata hai....jeevan ki sachai ko.....sach ki aanch se
Kavita nikhaar jaati hai...haan Nikaarji such me.... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Aapke apne shabdo mein...."..kya likha hai.....khud ko bhi nahi pta....bas dil mein jo aaya likh diya..."

ji haan aapki tarah mujhe bhi nahi pata....bas dil mein jo aaya likh diya tha....bina soche samjhe......ussiki xshma yaachna





koi baat nahi Anaam ji....ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi....hamesha muskuraate rahiye aur dusron k bhi muskurane ki vajah baniye.....gar maine bhi khuch keh diya ho toh maafi chahugi.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #37 on: November 16, 2010, 06:34:07 PM »
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Sanjeev bro..
Aap Ka Hukum Sar Aankhon par... icon_salut icon_salut

Jis Kahani Mein Milne Se pehle Bichadna Likha Ho
Hasne Se Pehle Rona Likha Ho
Paane Se Pehle Khona Likha Ho

Kuch Ankahe Jazbaton ko Lafzon Mein Utaarenge Aaj!!!
Zindagi Ke Panho Mein Likhenge Phir Ek Kahani Aaaj!!!

Jis Kahani Mein Manzil To kareeb Thi
Par Kadam Ladkada Gaye
Kuch Tasveere Bahut Hi Haseen Thi
Par Waqt Ki Tez Aandhi Mein
Tasveere Dhoondhla Gaye
Jeet Naa Tha Jis Baazi Ko
Woh Baazi Hi Haar Gaye

Roti Hui kalam Se Kuch Dil Ki Baatein Kahenge Aaj!!!
Zindagi Ke Panho mein Likhenge Phir Se Ek kahani Aaj!!!

Apni majbooriyon Se Darr kar Zindagi Ghabra Gayi!!!
Buland Hauslo Ko bhi Jaise Maut Aa Gayi!!!
Kuch Faisle Zindagi ke Aise The jo Sunna Nahi chaahte The
Par Zindagi Khud Humein Woh Faisle Suuna Gayi
"Khwaish" Aaj Phir Mohabbat Hi Kyon Maat Kha Gayi

Bhooli-Bisri Dastaan Ko Phir se Dohraayenge Aaj!!!
Zindagi Ke Panho Mein Likhenge Phir Se Ek Kahaani Aaj!!!!

Aapse pehle mai Sanjeev ji ki shukrgujar hu...jinke kehne par aapne likha aur hamein mauka mila aapke vichhaar jaan ne ka khwaish ji.......mai byaan nahi kar sakti k aapne kitna behtrin likha hai....ab tak kaafi baar padh chuki hu.....
aapne itna behtrin likha hai k mujhe khuch mil hi nahi rha..jis se mai aage likh paau.....lekin aapki iss kavita ka jwaab jarur dugi......taaki aapki pending requests ki shikayat dobara na aaye...... Usual Smile

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«Reply #38 on: November 27, 2010, 05:14:43 PM »
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Ji koshish tou yahi rehti hai.....muskaan he muskaan beekheru.....sab k hothon pe.....par ye shabdon ka khel bhi ajeeb hai........Aap kehna kuchh chahte ho samajh kar par koi usska arth alag samajh jaata hai......kabhi kabhi aysa bhi hota hai........

Kyu laate ho mann me apne malaal jab kalam se nikle shabd
Tumne jo kehna chaha tha,uss se alag wo mujhse kehte hain
 
Maana housla-afzaahi ka apna ek mehtvapurn essthan hai
Nikhaar ne ko likhne ki kala,sahi pratikriya ka bhi ek essthan hai……


koi baat nahi Anaam ji....ho jaata hai kabhi kabhi....hamesha muskuraate rahiye aur dusron k bhi muskurane ki vajah baniye.....gar maine bhi khuch keh diya ho toh maafi chahugi.... Usual Smile Usual Smile
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«Reply #39 on: January 16, 2016, 05:55:19 PM »
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Suprb   yar   
Dil  ko  chu  icon_salut   gyi lines  Nikhar  ji 
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«Reply #40 on: January 17, 2016, 04:29:27 PM »
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Suprb   yar   
Dil  ko  chu  icon_salut   gyi lines  Nikhar  ji 
ji shukriya
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