:: poetry chain challenge :: show ur talent ::

by myheart_ursonly on December 10, 2004, 07:00:15 AM
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hi everyone here!! here is a chain challenge... much like haiku in english poetry... but v r dealing in hindi shers...

one has to write 3 lines... must be 3 not 2 or 4
and the person who is replying will take the last last of the latest post and then add his two lines to it and so on...

so to start with im taking a poem/quote ::

tum yaad mujhe aaoge
aur kitna mujhe tadpaoge
tum wapas kab aaoge


*author unknown to me... hope author dusnt mind


 :wink:
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myheart_ursonly
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«Reply #1 on: December 10, 2004, 07:06:01 AM »
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tum wapas kab aaoge
ke sookh jate hain ye lab
aankh se aansu thamte nahi


 Puzzled !
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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2005, 08:00:35 AM »
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thame baithe hain hum
aansun tumhare intezaar mai
jab aaoge to be-rok bahayegen
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2005, 09:32:38 AM »
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jab aaoge to be-rok bahayenge
jis imtihaan se hum guzar rahe hain
har lamhe ka hisaab tumse maangenge
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2005, 04:44:48 PM »
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har lamhe ka hisaab tumse maangenge,
pal pal tanhaaiyon me jo pal guzare hain,
usse kahin zyada pyaar tumse maangenge.
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«Reply #5 on: October 03, 2005, 08:16:14 AM »
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usse kahin zyada pyaar tumse maangenge
tum na bhi chaho dena agar
apna samjh kar tumse tum ko hi maangenge
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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2005, 04:13:13 AM »
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sab kuch to apna tumko dey chukey hai
dil keya jigar bhi apna chir key dekha chukey hai
bus ek teyra he nam likha hai jisper ajj usey bhi dafnaney ja rahey hai
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2005, 04:28:42 AM »
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bus ek teyra he nam likha hai jisper ajj usey bhi dafnaney ja rahey hai

aaj mai aapne gam me gamgeen nahi.....

teri khushi me khush hota ja raha hu....
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2005, 02:39:16 PM »
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teri khushi me khush hote ja rahe hain
hum apni zaat ko kyun tujhse jode ja rahe hain
ye kaun sa lamha meri zindagi me aaya hai
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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2005, 05:05:59 PM »
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"Ye kaun sa lamha meri zindagi me aaya hai,
  tunka tinka bikhra hua sa maine paaya hai,
  raaz-e-dil aaj unki nazron me hamne paaya hai."
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«Reply #10 on: October 09, 2005, 06:20:28 PM »
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nice  work  all friend,............... sabhi  logon  ne  bahot accha likha.....

Ya  Rub  yeh  zamaana  mujhko mitaata hai kis liye
ek zarra bhi nahi maanga sirf uske mohabbat ke siwa.
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«Reply #11 on: October 10, 2005, 11:07:19 AM »
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mil gaye sare gum mujhe, kaya yeh hai wafa ki saza
yaado mai tadpte hai sada, kaya yeh hai payar ki saza
dhundhte hai khushiaya apne gamo mai, kaya yeh hai muskurane ki saza.
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«Reply #12 on: October 18, 2005, 09:19:44 AM »
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dhundhte hai khushiaya apne gamo mai, kya yeh hai muskurane ki saza
rotein hain tho, hai aankon mein basi roop khone ki darr
ab kya karein ro bhi nahi sakte aur hans bi nahi paathe
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«Reply #13 on: October 18, 2005, 11:38:45 AM »
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ab kya karein ro bhi nahi sakte aur hans bi nahi paathe
saza hai payar karne ki dukh de bhi nahi sakte sah bhi nahi sakte
kaya yehi payar hai
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«Reply #14 on: October 18, 2005, 11:54:45 AM »
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pyar ke dard ko sah loge to insan ban jaoge minya.
ye dard bhi har ek ki kismatme nahi hota,
is dard ka mujhe intjar hai. . . .
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