Prakritik aapda..

by nashwani on June 24, 2013, 04:58:08 PM
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Daane daane ko mohtaaz ho na jaun kahin,,
Rabba teri hi iss duniya me kho na jaun kahin..

Prakritik aapda barsaai hai tune aie khuda,,
Maut ki god me, jeene se pehle so na jaun kahin..

Yakin hai mujhko bhejega tu hi masihe yaha,,
Darr hai, intezaar me hausla kho na jaun kahin..

Idhar hain laashe.N udhar zakhmi tadapte log,,
Dard seene me utara hai aaj, ro na jaun kahin..  

Har zakhm ko sehlane ki koshish karunga,,
Ae khuda, iss koshish me tanha ho na jaun kahin..

Vaada hai tujhse, zindagi haar na manegi,,
Darta hun, vaada adhoora chhod so na jaun kahin..!!!
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«Reply #1 on: June 24, 2013, 05:19:43 PM »
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Bahut Khoobsurt Peshkash Ki Hai Aapne,Nice1.
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«Reply #2 on: June 24, 2013, 05:45:19 PM »
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«Reply #3 on: June 24, 2013, 08:46:21 PM »
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Quote from: Advo.RavinderaRavi on June 24, 2013, 05:19:43 PM
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Bahut Khoobsurt Peshkash Ki Hai Aapne,Nice1.
Jee kisi prakritik aapda me fanse insaan ke dard aur hausle ko shabd dene ki ek koshish ki thi..pasand karne ka shukriya ravi jee..happy9
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«Reply #4 on: June 24, 2013, 08:47:46 PM »
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Quote from: Miru;;;; on June 24, 2013, 05:45:19 PM
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Dhanyawaad..happy9
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«Reply #5 on: June 24, 2013, 10:15:42 PM »
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bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi nashwani ji. sabhi ashaar khoobsurat ehsaas se saje hue hai. mujhe aapki yeh kalaam bahut pasand aayi. khaas kar yeh sher bahut zyaada pasand aaye.

akin hai mujhko bhejega tu hi masihe yaha,,
Darr hai, intezaar me hausla kho na jaun kahin..

Idhar hain laashe.N udhar zakhmi tadapte log,,
Dard seene me utara hai aaj, ro na jaun kahin.. 

Har zakhm ko sehlane ki koshish karunga,,
Ae khuda, iss koshish me tanha ho na jaun kahin..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: June 24, 2013, 11:27:40 PM »
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waa nyc ,................
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«Reply #7 on: June 24, 2013, 11:52:49 PM »
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«Reply #8 on: June 25, 2013, 01:35:43 AM »
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Aap apne maqsad me kaamaab rahe hain..

ek accha insaan hone ka parichay diya hai aapne.
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«Reply #9 on: June 25, 2013, 09:22:19 AM »
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beautiful creation love it
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«Reply #10 on: June 25, 2013, 01:55:39 PM »
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bahut hi achchi peshkash rahi nashwani ji. sabhi ashaar khoobsurat ehsaas se saje hue hai. mujhe aapki yeh kalaam bahut pasand aayi. khaas kar yeh sher bahut zyaada pasand aaye.

akin hai mujhko bhejega tu hi masihe yaha,,
Darr hai, intezaar me hausla kho na jaun kahin..

Idhar hain laashe.N udhar zakhmi tadapte log,,
Dard seene me utara hai aaj, ro na jaun kahin.. 

Har zakhm ko sehlane ki koshish karunga,,
Ae khuda, iss koshish me tanha ho na jaun kahin..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Thankyou ! a lot aqsh jee..happy9
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«Reply #11 on: June 25, 2013, 01:57:15 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on June 24, 2013, 11:27:40 PM
waa nyc ,................

Shukriya laaiba jee..happy9
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«Reply #12 on: June 25, 2013, 01:58:00 PM »
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Quote from: Sudhir Ashq on June 24, 2013, 11:52:49 PM
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Shukriya sudhir jee..happy9
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Quote from: mkv on June 25, 2013, 01:35:43 AM
Aap apne maqsad me kaamaab rahe hain..

ek accha insaan hone ka parichay diya hai aapne.

Bahut Shukriya mukesh jee..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: June 25, 2013, 01:59:56 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on June 25, 2013, 09:22:19 AM
beautiful creation love it
Pasand karne ka shukriya sir jee..happy9
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