QAID KARTA JO PHIRE THHA KABHI DARYAA'ON KO .........HASAN

by F.H.SIDDIQUI on September 25, 2011, 06:07:20 AM
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Qaid  karta  jo  phire  thha  kabhi  daryaa'oN  ko,
Kaun  jaane  thha  wahi chhaane  ga  sahraa'oN  ko

Yeh  jahaaN   basti  hai  ehsaan - faramoshoN  kee ,
Tohfa - e - daar  jo  dete  haiN  maseehaa'oN  ko

Humse  kya  poochhte  ho  Hubb - e - Watan  kee  taareef,
Jalte  dekhha  nahiN  kya  tum  ne  kisee  gaaoN  ko

Haalat - e - shahr  ki  haakim  se  shikayat  kaisee,
RaahateiN  mil  to  rahi  haiN   sabhi  bewaaoN  ko

Humko  nafrat  ki  kadi  dhoop  jhulas   daalegi
Aao  ab  mil ke  chalein , dhoondheiN  kahiN  chhaon ko

Dars  tadbeer - o - amal  ka  hummeiN  dene  waale,
Kya  badal  do  ge  mere  haath  ki  rekhaa'oN  ko

Asliyat  chaand  ki  batla  de  koi  unko  'Hasan',
Chaand  kahte  nahiN  thhakte  jo  haseenaa'oN  ko
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«Reply #1 on: September 25, 2011, 07:21:14 AM »
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Hasan Sahab,

Waah waah..bahut khoob
Ek aur chchhee ghazal padhne ko mili

Haalat-e-shahr.....

Humko nafrat ki kadi......

dono hi behad umda sher

Dili daad o mubarakbaad kubool farmaayen.

Satish Shukla 'Raqeeb'
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«Reply #2 on: September 25, 2011, 07:38:45 AM »
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Bahut khoon Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: September 25, 2011, 03:14:09 PM »
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Satish Shuklaji.Aap ne ghazal padhi aur hausla afzaai ki.Ye meri ek puraani ghazal hai.Ismein iste'maal kiye gaye kuchh  ghair maanoos alfaaz aur ishaaron ki wajah se maiN ise post karne main hichkicha raha thha.Lekin ye meri eik pasandida ghazlon mein hai isliye ise share karne ki himmat ki hai.Aap jaise danishwaron ke radde amal se bahut hausla milta hai.Bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #4 on: September 25, 2011, 04:29:42 PM »
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awais saheb,hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Khush rahiye.Hasan
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«Reply #5 on: September 26, 2011, 04:55:51 AM »
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Siddiqui Sahaab Aadaab!

Masha Allah janab kia khub gazal kahi hai aapne..Usual Smile
Kafi achchi kavish ko anjaam diya hai.. Usual Smile

Sabhi ashaar behad khoob rahe... Usual Smile

Tah e dil se daad O mubarakbad kabul kijiye..
Likhate rahiye... Aate rahiye..

Khush O aabad rahiye..
Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile
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«Reply #6 on: September 26, 2011, 08:32:55 AM »
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Parwaaz saheb,Ghazal parhne aur apni raai se nawaazne ke liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.Khush rahiye.Duago,Hasan
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«Reply #7 on: September 27, 2011, 03:37:46 AM »
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FHSidiqi sahab,adab.janab bahut sanjida aur sarcastic kalaam pesh kiya hai.Meri taraf se daad qabul kije.
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«Reply #8 on: September 27, 2011, 07:58:26 AM »
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Qaid  karta  jo  phire  thha  kabhi  daryaa'oN  ko,
Kaun  jaane  thha  wahi chhaane  ga  sahraa'oN  ko

Yeh  jahaaN   basti  hai  ehsaan - faramoshoN  kee ,
Tohfa - e - daar  jo  dete  haiN  maseehaa'oN  ko

Humse  kya  poochhte  ho  Hubb - e - Watan  kee  taareef,
Jalte  dekhha  nahiN  kya  tum  ne  kisee  gaaoN  ko

Haalat - e - shahr  ki  haakim  se  shikayat  kaisee,
RaahateiN  mil  to  rahi  haiN   sabhi  bewaaoN  ko

Humko  nafrat  ki  kadi  dhoop  jhulas   daalegi
Aao  ab  mil ke  chalein , dhoondheiN  kahiN  chhaon ko

Dars  tadbeer - o - amal  ka  hummeiN  dene  waale,
Kya  badal  do  ge  mere  haath  ki  rekhaa'oN  ko

Asliyat  chaand  ki  batla  de  koi  unko  'Hasan',
Chaand  kahte  nahiN  thhakte  jo  haseenaa'oN  ko


khubsoorat ghazal se nawazaa bazm ko siddiqui sahab. maqta khaas raha waise


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«Reply #9 on: September 27, 2011, 08:57:17 AM »
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Qais saheb,Aapne ghazal parhi aur apne tabsire se nawaaza.Hausla afzai ke liye bahut mamnoon hoon.Apne khoosurat kalaam aur tabsiron se nawaazte rahiye ga.Hasan
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«Reply #10 on: September 27, 2011, 01:00:01 PM »
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Sheba ji,Ghazal pasand karne aur naachheez ki hausla afzai ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.Hasan
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«Reply #11 on: September 30, 2011, 09:55:11 AM »
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Qaid  karta  jo  phire  thha  kabhi  daryaa'oN  ko,
Kaun  jaane  thha  wahi chhaane  ga  sahraa'oN  ko

Yeh  jahaaN   basti  hai  ehsaan - faramoshoN  kee ,
Tohfa - e - daar  jo  dete  haiN  maseehaa'oN  ko

Humse  kya  poochhte  ho  Hubb - e - Watan  kee  taareef,
Jalte  dekhha  nahiN  kya  tum  ne  kisee  gaaoN  ko

Haalat - e - shahr  ki  haakim  se  shikayat  kaisee,
RaahateiN  mil  to  rahi  haiN   sabhi  bewaaoN  ko

Humko  nafrat  ki  kadi  dhoop  jhulas   daalegi
Aao  ab  mil ke  chalein , dhoondheiN  kahiN  chhaon ko

Dars  tadbeer - o - amal  ka  hummeiN  dene  waale,
Kya  badal  do  ge  mere  haath  ki  rekhaa'oN  ko

Asliyat  chaand  ki  batla  de  koi  unko  'Hasan',
Chaand  kahte  nahiN  thhakte  jo  haseenaa'oN  ko

Bahut bahut Khooob F.h Siddiqui Ji..

Har Ek A'shaar Lajawaab!!!

Shukriya aapka Jo Aapne Apni Yeh Khoobsurat poetry hum sab ke beech share ki..

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«Reply #12 on: September 30, 2011, 04:05:27 PM »
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Khwaish ji,Bahut mashkoor hoon aap ke pur-khuloos tabsire ke liye.Khush rahiye.Hasan
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