Qalam tor doon (by vb)

by vb on December 11, 2013, 11:29:25 PM
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Qalam tor doon, ye sukhan chhor doon

Sochta hoon k likhnay ka haasil hay kya?
Chaar logon ka parhna, wohi waah waa?
Kon suntaa hay bay-kaar dil ki sadaa
Kon jaanay hay kya, dard-e-marg-e-saba

Jis ki khaatir ye saaray bakheray rahay
Jis k haathon men saaray saveray rahay
Ik meray haath he sub andheray rahay
Jis ka tesha raha, zakhm meray rahay

Jub wohi na parhay, shaayari kya karoon
Us say anjaam-e-hijraaN, kahun na kahun
Sochta hoon k ab aur kya main likhoon
Lay k apnay ghamon ko kahin ja maroon

Ab meray geet mujhko bhe bhaatay nahi
Rang andoh naghmay bhe laatay nahi
Meray aansoo bhe un ko rulaatay nahi
Ake wo hen, k ab laut aatay nahi

Jee men hay is kahaani ka rukh mor doon
Ab Qalam tor doon, ye sukhan chhor doon

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«Reply #1 on: December 11, 2013, 11:31:37 PM »
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 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Wahh!!! Bahot khoob Kalam... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2013, 12:58:15 AM »
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khoobsoorat naz.m ,..............bohat c daad,........
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«Reply #3 on: December 12, 2013, 02:02:38 AM »
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wha wha bhut khub..
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«Reply #4 on: December 12, 2013, 02:41:37 AM »
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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janaab bahut khoobsoorat nazm hai.

Waise aap jaise sukhnawar ko qalam todne aur sukhan chorrne ki koi zaroorat nahiN, aapki shayari ke ham jaise qadrdaan maujood haiN unka bhi to khayaal rakhiye.
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«Reply #5 on: December 12, 2013, 08:10:37 AM »
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Awesome !!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #6 on: December 12, 2013, 08:20:53 AM »
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badeee naayaab nazm dheron daad
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«Reply #7 on: December 12, 2013, 03:25:43 PM »
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Quote from: Saman Firdaus on December 11, 2013, 11:31:37 PM
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Wahh!!! Bahot khoob Kalam... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanx... :]
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«Reply #8 on: December 12, 2013, 03:26:43 PM »
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Quote from: laaiba on December 12, 2013, 12:58:15 AM
khoobsoorat naz.m ,..............bohat c daad,........

buhat shukriya...
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«Reply #9 on: December 12, 2013, 03:28:08 PM »
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Quote from: RAJAN KONDAL on December 12, 2013, 02:02:38 AM
wha wha bhut khub..

shukriya...
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«Reply #10 on: December 12, 2013, 03:30:57 PM »
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Quote from: Iftakhar Ahmad on December 12, 2013, 02:41:37 AM
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah waaaaaaaaaaaaaaah janaab bahut khoobsoorat nazm hai.

Waise aap jaise sukhnawar ko qalam todne aur sukhan chorrne ki koi zaroorat nahiN, aapki shayari ke ham jaise qadrdaan maujood haiN unka bhi to khayaal rakhiye.

Iftakhar Ahmad jee! buhat shukriya aap ka..

aisi dhamkiyan hum aisay he detay rehtay hen, jaisay likh kar kisi par ehsaan kar rahay hen... likhna chhor dena, hamaari kai or hasrtaon men say ake hay... hum say aisa ho nahi saka kabhi...
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«Reply #11 on: December 12, 2013, 03:31:57 PM »
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Quote from: Zaif on December 12, 2013, 08:10:37 AM
Awesome !!
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

thanx...
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«Reply #12 on: December 12, 2013, 03:32:44 PM »
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Quote from: sksaini4 on December 12, 2013, 08:20:53 AM
badeee naayaab nazm dheron daad

sksaini4 jee! buhat shukriya aap ka..
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«Reply #13 on: December 12, 2013, 07:25:24 PM »
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बहुत खूब.....
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«Reply #14 on: December 12, 2013, 07:46:03 PM »
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Quote from: amit_prakash_meet on December 12, 2013, 07:25:24 PM
बहुत खूब.....
amit_prakash_meet jee! hum hindi rasm-ul-khat nahi parh saktay... aap ne taareef ki ya tanqeed.. dono sooraton men thankful hen hum aap k...
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