-----/// Rishtaa ghamon se ///----- Hriday

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kuch yun  rishtaa  rahaa  hamaara  muskuraahat  ke  saath  hameshaa
hum  bhaagte  rahe  uske   pichhe  aur  wo   aage  aage  jaataa  rahaa
naa   chhoo   paaye   kabhi    hum  usko ,  naa mehsoos kar sake kabhi
wo  pichhe  mud  mud  ke  hamaari  haalat  dekh  muskuraataa   rahaa

kai dost   aaye   zindagi   me , par  unkaa   saath   kuch   pal  ka rahaa
bhool   gaye  sab  mujhe ,  main    akelaa   hi  dosti  nibhaataa   rahaa
kai   aise    mile  jo  dil  ke   bahut  kareeb  tak   pahuche  mere magar
ye dil  meraa  thik  meri  tarhaa    hameshaa  tanhaa  tadaptaa  rahaa

aazmaayaa mohabbat  ne   bhi  humein kabhi, kisi ne chaahaa humein
saath  milaa  kuch  pal  kaa , aur har  lamhaa  yaadon  me aataa rahaa
samajh naa paaye kabhi hum ki wo kyun khafaa huwaa humse bhalaa
hum yaad karte rahe  use  aur  wo  humse  pal  pal duur  jaataa rahaa

rishte sab  toot gaye , saathi  sab  chhoot gaye mere, kuch naa rahaa
dard rahaa saath mere, wo mujhse wafaa har lamhaa nibhaataa rahaa
andheri zindagi  me  mere  sadaa ghamon kaa  baadal chhaayaa rahaa
aansuon ka roop  leke meri aankhon se wo har lamhaa barastaa rahaa

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«Reply #1 on: October 07, 2012, 08:35:16 PM »
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Bahut sahi kaha aapney. Maja aa geya.Mubarik
Sheel didi
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«Reply #2 on: October 08, 2012, 01:09:28 AM »
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wonderful qataat dheron daad kapil
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«Reply #3 on: October 08, 2012, 05:37:04 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
kya kehna bahut umda....
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«Reply #4 on: October 08, 2012, 06:53:34 AM »
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wonderful  Applause   Applause  Applause
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«Reply #5 on: October 08, 2012, 08:45:15 AM »
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Nice!!! Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: October 08, 2012, 09:06:09 AM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #7 on: October 08, 2012, 02:04:26 PM »
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bahut khoob, dhero dad
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«Reply #8 on: October 08, 2012, 02:12:52 PM »
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rishte sab  toot gaye , saathi  sab  chhoot gaye mere, kuch naa rahaa
dard rahaa saath mere, wo mujhse wafaa har lamhaa nibhaataa rahaa
andheri zindagi  me  mere  sadaa ghamon kaa  baadal chhaayaa rahaa
aansuon ka roop  leke meri aankhon se wo har lamhaa barastaa rahaa

bahut acha likha hai aapne. Applause Applause Applause

Diye jo zakham milkar sabne vo bahut gehre hai
Bas mere dost hi bache hai firthi hu jinhe dikhane ko

Aaj mere dard ki kahani hai yaron sabki jubaan per
Pass mere kuch aur bacha nahi aapko sunane ko

Tokkar aur tabahi hi mili hame her raah per yaaron
Jab bhi utaye kadam humne apna bhagya aajmane ko

Pata na chala kab aa gaya mere jeeven mein ye dard ka samandar
Jabki humne to kabhi chua bhi na tha kisi dard ke paimane ko

Ab hame na ghar na gharwalon se hai koyi lagav yaaron
Rehna chahti hu tanha aankhon se apni ashq bahane ko..!!

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«Reply #9 on: October 08, 2012, 02:54:37 PM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne mere is koshish ko padha aur pasand kiyaa aur bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suman ji....!!! bahut sundar...!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Isi ke jawaab me maine kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai... main page pe hi post kiyaa hai...!!!


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bahut acha likha hai aapne. Applause Applause Applause

Diye jo zakham milkar sabne vo bahut gehre hai
Bas mere dost hi bache hai firthi hu jinhe dikhane ko

Aaj mere dard ki kahani hai yaron sabki jubaan per
Pass mere kuch aur bacha nahi aapko sunane ko

Tokkar aur tabahi hi mili hame her raah per yaaron
Jab bhi utaye kadam humne apna bhagya aajmane ko

Pata na chala kab aa gaya mere jeeven mein ye dard ka samandar
Jabki humne to kabhi chua bhi na tha kisi dard ke paimane ko

Ab hame na ghar na gharwalon se hai koyi lagav yaaron
Rehna chahti hu tanha aankhon se apni ashq bahane ko..!!


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«Reply #10 on: October 08, 2012, 02:56:50 PM »
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bahut khoob kapil dheron daad
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«Reply #11 on: October 08, 2012, 03:22:38 PM »
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Hriday ji bahut khoob likha hai aap ne....
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«Reply #12 on: October 08, 2012, 03:31:58 PM »
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main aapka tahe dil se shukriyaa adaa karta hoon jo aapne mere is koshish ko padha aur pasand kiyaa aur bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Suman ji....!!! bahut sundar...!!!  Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Isi ke jawaab me maine kuch likhne ki koshish ki hai... main page pe hi post kiyaa hai...!!!


http://www.yoindia.com/shayariadab/miscellaneous-shayri/pyaar-ka-afsaanaa-hriday-t96092.0.html;msg1269148#msg1269148



jo link diya wo hum access nahi kar paa rahe hai. kya reason hoga?
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«Reply #13 on: October 08, 2012, 03:38:56 PM »
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apna link main khud bhi access nahi kar paa raha hoon... iAdmin ji ko abhi mail kiya hai.. dekhta hoon kab tak solve hota hai...!!! Hote hi aapko bataataa hoon main.....!!!

jo link diya wo hum access nahi kar paa rahe hai. kya reason hoga?
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«Reply #14 on: October 08, 2012, 03:43:28 PM »
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ok thanks maine socha aapne mujhe banned kar diya  Shocked Even More Shocked Even More
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