Ru-b-Ru Aa to Sahi........masoom

by masoom shahjada on April 27, 2012, 08:57:47 PM
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Kushi Mili h, Kiyo na Mnayi Jaye.
Mahfile sare sham sjayi Jaye.
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KhudKushi Kaayar hi kiya karte h.
Jaan To Jaan h Kiyo Aese Gawayi Jaye.
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Jaan Pahchan Bas naam ki h.
Mile wo to Baat Brayi Jaye.
.
Ham to intizaar me h koi ishara to kar.
Jindagi Ab sath tere Bitayi Jaye.
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Yu.n hi Bekaar bulaya tumne Yaaro.
kam himmato ko Kya Himmat Dikhayi Jaye.
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Kuch to Risto ko Badalne ka Saleeka sikho.
Dusmano Ko Dosti Sikhayi Jaye.
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Jeetne waale Khusiya Manate h bhoot.
Kiyo na HaarKe bhi Khusiya.n Manayi  Jaye.
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Jra Daulat se kinara kar lo.
Muhabbat kiyo na aajmayi Jaye.
.
Rooth ke Chala Gaya Tu Jaane Kiyo Kar.
Ru-b-Ru aa to Sahi Baat Banayi Jaye.
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«Reply #1 on: April 27, 2012, 09:20:34 PM »
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Bahut hi khoob Maasoom saheb, bahut badhiya likha hai aapne, saare ash'ar acche hai.n. Sirf ek sher mujhe thoda sahi nahi laga-

"Jeetne waale khushiya.n manate hai.n bahut
Kyun naa haarke bhi khushiya.n manayi jaae"

Meri nazar mei.n kisi bhi soorat mei.n haar ka tasawwur karna ghalat hai.
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«Reply #2 on: April 28, 2012, 03:06:29 AM »
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bohut khub shahzada ji
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«Reply #3 on: April 28, 2012, 03:43:13 AM »
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bahut bahut khub masoomji
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«Reply #4 on: April 28, 2012, 06:31:27 AM »
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waaaaah masoom....bahut badiyaaa....Usual Smile:clap:clap:clap:clap:
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«Reply #5 on: April 28, 2012, 10:33:25 AM »
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Bahut hi khoob Maasoom saheb, bahut badhiya likha hai aapne, saare ash'ar acche hai.n. Sirf ek sher mujhe thoda sahi nahi laga-

"Jeetne waale khushiya.n manate hai.n bahut
Kyun naa haarke bhi khushiya.n manayi jaae"

Meri nazar mei.n kisi bhi soorat mei.n haar ka tasawwur karna ghalat hai.
sukriya ahmad bhai
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«Reply #6 on: April 28, 2012, 01:32:42 PM »
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bohut khub shahzada ji
thanks brother
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«Reply #7 on: April 28, 2012, 04:48:22 PM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #8 on: April 28, 2012, 06:40:49 PM »
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bahut bahut khub masoomji
thanks
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«Reply #9 on: April 29, 2012, 11:06:36 AM »
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«Reply #10 on: April 29, 2012, 03:40:14 PM »
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Sukriya sahil bhai
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«Reply #11 on: April 30, 2012, 07:41:19 AM »
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Dooly ji sukriya
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«Reply #12 on: April 30, 2012, 07:54:57 AM »
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mast likha hai aapne MS ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 30, 2012, 01:15:43 PM »
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Kushi Mili h, Kiyo na Mnayi Jaye.
Mahfile sare sham sjayi Jaye.
.
KhudKushi Kaayar hi kiya karte h.
Jaan To Jaan h Kiyo Aese Gawayi Jaye.
.
Jaan Pahchan Bas naam ki h.
Mile wo to Baat Brayi Jaye.
.
Ham to intizaar me h koi ishara to kar.
Jindagi Ab sath tere Bitayi Jaye.
.
Yu.n hi Bekaar bulaya tumne Yaaro.
kam himmato ko Kya Himmat Dikhayi Jaye.
.
Kuch to Risto ko Badalne ka Saleeka sikho.
Dusmano Ko Dosti Sikhayi Jaye.
.
Jeetne waale Khusiya Manate h bhoot.
Kiyo na HaarKe bhi Khusiya.n Manayi  Jaye.
.
Jra Daulat se kinara kar lo.
Muhabbat kiyo na aajmayi Jaye.
.
Rooth ke Chala Gaya Tu Jaane Kiyo Kar.
Ru-b-Ru aa to Sahi Baat Banayi Jaye.
bahut hi behtarien gazal pesh ki hai aapne masoom ji dheron daad aur mubarakbad aapko
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