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by marhoom bahayaat on February 06, 2010, 04:18:36 PM
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                    maut main merey shamil to sabhi they...,
                    magar tadpaa koi na thaa..!
                    aansu to kuch ki aankhon main they...,
                    magar royaa koi na thaa...!
                    sabhi yahan par tamaashbeen they....,
                    magar meraa koi na thaa....!
                    zindagi main chaplusi sabhi kartey they..,
                    magar ab unmain jazbaa koi na thaa...!
                    rukhsat ho chala tu duniya sey marhoom,
                    jahaan main tera ab rutbaa koi na thaa............! crybaby2
                    
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«Reply #1 on: February 06, 2010, 04:59:53 PM »
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Achha likha he....MBji.... Applause Applause Applause

Padha tou sab ne thaa kalaam mera
Kitno ne samjha ouse,eska eilm na thaa

Wah-wah tou sab ne jaroor kaha thaa
Magar ab unmain, jazbaa koi naa thaa...!


                    ghum main merey shamil to sabhi they...,
                    magar 'maauss' koi na thaa..!
                    aansu to kuch ki aankhon main they...,
                    magar royaa koi na thaa...!
                    sabhi yahan par tamaashbeen they....,
                    magar apnaa koi na thaa....!
                    zindagi main chaplusi sabhi kartey they..,
                    magar ab unmain jazbaa koi na thaa...!
                    rukhsat ho chala tu duniya sey marhoom,
                    jahaan main tera ab koi rutbaa na thaa............!
                    
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«Reply #2 on: February 07, 2010, 09:26:45 PM »
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NICE MARHOOM ji
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«Reply #3 on: February 08, 2010, 11:26:49 PM »
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Achha likha he....MBji.... Applause Applause Applause

Padha tou sab ne thaa kalaam mera
Kitno ne samjha ouse,eska eilm na thaa

Wah-wah tou sab ne jaroor kaha thaa
Magar ab unmain, jazbaa koi naa thaa...!


bahut khoob koyal ji
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«Reply #4 on: February 08, 2010, 11:28:09 PM »
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NICE MARHOOM ji

thank you rishi ji
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«Reply #5 on: February 09, 2010, 11:25:10 AM »
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Aapka bahoot bahoot shukriya Marhoom-ji....

bahut khoob koyal ji
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«Reply #6 on: February 09, 2010, 12:04:10 PM »
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Wah wah MB ji bahut khoobsurat creation hai aapki. Lajawwab.
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«Reply #7 on: February 09, 2010, 05:43:29 PM »
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Aapka bahoot bahoot shukriya Marhoom-ji....


thank u
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«Reply #8 on: February 09, 2010, 05:44:08 PM »
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Wah wah MB ji bahut khoobsurat creation hai aapki. Lajawwab.

thanks riyaz sahab
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«Reply #9 on: February 25, 2010, 10:58:32 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #10 on: February 27, 2010, 12:29:02 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thank you
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«Reply #11 on: April 07, 2010, 05:19:35 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: April 07, 2010, 05:49:07 PM »
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Wah wah bahut achha likha hai MB ji. Shandaaar.
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«Reply #13 on: April 09, 2010, 09:13:11 AM »
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Good one MB Ji
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«Reply #14 on: April 09, 2010, 09:08:05 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

thanx
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