<>*Ruuh me basi rehti hain*<>

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<>*Ruuh me basi rehti hain*<>


Lamhon ki har pal kami se rehti hain
Kyun zindagi inti masruuf si rehti hain

Dard o gum bhi nahin mehsus hote ab to
Khushi to jaise dilse koso durr hi rehti hain

Labon pe shikayat aaye bhi to kaise aaye
Tere naam ki har pal labon pe dua jo rehti hai

Chahte hain kitna ye hum kahen bhi to kaise
Tere age sharm se palkein jhuki hi rehti hain

Aaj karte hain ikraare mahobbat ka hum sanam
Teri tasveer mere dil me ruuh me basi rehti hain…!!!

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«Reply #1 on: April 08, 2011, 04:53:48 AM »
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<>*Ruuh me basi rehti hain*<>


Lamhon ki har pal kami se rehti hain
Kyun zindagi inti masruuf si rehti hain

Dard o gum bhi nahin mehsus hote ab to
Khushi to jaise dilse koso durr hi rehti hain

Labon pe shikayat aaye bhi to kaise aaye
Tere naam ki har pal labon pe dua jo rehti hai

Chahte hain kitna ye hum kahen bhi to kaise
Tere age sharm se palkein jhuki hi rehti hain

Aaj karte hain ikraare mahobbat ka hum sanam
Teri tasveer mere dil me ruuh me basi rehti hain…!!!


Bahut Umdaa Khayaal Aur dil ko chhutii panktiyaa kahi hai aapne ... Kasak Ji !

bahut khoob lagi hume aapki yeh tehreer ... dil se daad hazir hai ...
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«Reply #2 on: April 08, 2011, 09:01:40 AM »
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kya baat hai kasakji... sundar...

 
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«Reply #3 on: April 08, 2011, 09:10:37 AM »
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amazing lines with marvelous ryhtm..........

maja aa gaya anamika ji....ekdum dil khush kar dene wali poetry........

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«Reply #4 on: April 08, 2011, 09:32:49 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Anamika di..
"Labon pe dua jo rehti hai"
Wah Wah Wah..
Khush rahiye..!
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Bahut Umdaa Khayaal Aur dil ko chhutii panktiyaa kahi hai aapne ... Kasak Ji !

bahut khoob lagi hume aapki yeh tehreer ... dil se daad hazir hai ...
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naresh ji aapka yun aakar hausla badhana hamesha aur achcha likhne k liye prerit karta hai...bas yunhi mera hausla badhate rahiye...
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«Reply #6 on: April 08, 2011, 09:52:19 AM »
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kya baat hai kasakji... sundar...

 

manju tum khud itna khubsurat likhti ho k meri kalam mujhe fiki hi lagti hai har baar....tumhara sath rehna tareef karna achch alagta hai yunhi sath rehna hamesha ..thnx re...
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«Reply #7 on: April 08, 2011, 10:03:50 AM »
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amazing lines with marvelous ryhtm..........

maja aa gaya anamika ji....ekdum dil khush kar dene wali poetry........

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rajaji ye kya smiley wala reply diye ho....chalo jugalbandi wali poem likhen ek....kya bolte ho ..hamesha ki trah apne style me....aap start karo ....ok...
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«Reply #8 on: April 08, 2011, 10:08:49 AM »
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thanks kasakji.... ki aapko hamara likha pasand aata hai... bas koshish karte hain ki samjh main aane jaisa likh sake... sach kahe to ham bhi aapke cmnt ka intzar karte hain... jab bhi kuch likhte hain....aaur aapbhi bahut hi acha likhti ho... hame acha lagta hai....

aap sath rahiega.... acha lagta hai..
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«Reply #9 on: April 08, 2011, 10:28:07 AM »
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Bahaut bahaut khoob Anamika di..
"Labon pe dua jo rehti hai"
Wah Wah Wah..
Khush rahiye..!
rahim bhai...thnx a lot re..k tumne hamesha sath diya h meri ulti sulti baaton me.....thnx a lot bhai...
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«Reply #11 on: April 09, 2011, 08:04:25 PM »
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Kyaa baat hai maine to sirf ek run liya tha aur tumne to seedhe chakka maar diya.....shabash I am proud of u......Ghayel ka naam roshan karogi.....Usual Smile
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