~*~ Saath choot'te dekha ~*~ by Rahim

by dead heart on April 19, 2011, 01:51:44 AM
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Jo dekha karta tha suraj main ankh main ankh dal kar,
Usse bhi bewaffai kay sabab aj maine toot’te dekha..

Woh sapnon ko saja kar rakhta tha ankhon main apni,
Unn sapnon ko bhi aj maine kanch ki tarha foot’te dekha..

Woh jiske chehre par dikhayi nahin deta dard dil ka,
Uski ankhon main aj maine usse ander hi ander koot’te dekha..

Ab gairon se kya shikwa bewaffai ka ‘Khamosh’,
Jab maine apnon ko hi apnon ko loot’te dekha..

Dil aj bhi kosta hai ankhon ko woh ek nazara dekhne kay liye,
Jab maine usse uske mehboob ki baahon main doobte dekha..

Badi mushkil se khali kar paya dil apna iss nazm kay zariye,
Mager aj jo mehsoos hua usne khured diya zakhmon ko mere,
Pehli baar lavzon ka aur ‘Khamosh’ ka saath choot’te dekha..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~
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«Reply #1 on: April 19, 2011, 02:42:15 AM »
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Rahim Sahaab AadaaB!


Kia baat hai janab .... tees marte ahsaas o khayaal ko aapne behad pyaare andaaz meiN bayaaN kiyaa hai... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob janab likhate rahiye,
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: April 19, 2011, 08:43:09 AM »
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Jo dekha karta tha suraj main ankh main ankh dal kar,
Usse bhi bewaffai kay sabab aj maine toot’te dekha..

Woh sapnon ko saja kar rakhta tha ankhon main apni,
Unn sapnon ko bhi aj maine kanch ki tarha foot’te dekha..

Woh jiske chehre par dikhayi nahin deta dard dil ka,
Uski ankhon main aj maine usse ander hi ander koot’te dekha..

Ab gairon se kya shikwa bewaffai ka ‘Khamosh’,
Jab maine apnon ko hi apnon ko loot’te dekha..

Dil aj bhi kosta hai ankhon ko woh ek nazara dekhne kay liye,
Jab maine usse uske mehboob ki baahon main doobte dekha..

Badi mushkil se khali kar paya dil apna iss nazm kay zariye,
Mager aj jo mehsoos hua usne khured diya zakhmon ko mere,
Pehli baar lavzon ka aur ‘Khamosh’ ka saath choot’te dekha..

~..Rahim..~..A Silent Heart..~

Bahut gehra dard mehsus hua tumhari nazm padhke rahim..per khushi bhi hui ki is nazm k zariya tumhara dard bahar aa gya..hamesh ki tarah bahut khoob likha tumne...
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«Reply #3 on: April 19, 2011, 09:17:05 AM »
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kya baat hai rahimji... kamaal likhte ho..... bahut khub...

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«Reply #4 on: April 19, 2011, 01:06:06 PM »
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«Reply #5 on: April 19, 2011, 04:08:36 PM »
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dost…
maaf karna late cmnt ke lie…
dard ki bayani aur zazbato ko lajawab tarike se pesh kia aapne…
bht umda
khus rahiye janaab
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«Reply #6 on: April 19, 2011, 04:13:58 PM »
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Rahim Sahaab AadaaB!


Kia baat hai janab .... tees marte ahsaas o khayaal ko aapne behad pyaare andaaz meiN bayaaN kiyaa hai... Usual Smile

Bahut khoob janab likhate rahiye,
Khush O aabaad rahiye...
Khuda Hafez.... Usual Smile          


Teh teh dil se shukriya Parwaaz jee..
yunhi saath dete rahiye..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #7 on: April 19, 2011, 04:14:45 PM »
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Bahut gehra dard mehsus hua tumhari nazm padhke rahim..per khushi bhi hui ki is nazm k zariya tumhara dard bahar aa gya..hamesh ki tarah bahut khoob likha tumne...
Bahaut bahaut shukriya di..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #8 on: April 19, 2011, 04:17:29 PM »
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kya baat hai rahimji... kamaal likhte ho..... bahut khub...

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Shukriya shukriya Dost..
Khush rahiye.!
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«Reply #9 on: April 19, 2011, 04:18:46 PM »
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Bohat Khoob Janab
Shukriya Yaash jee..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #10 on: April 19, 2011, 04:20:21 PM »
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maaf karna late cmnt ke lie…
dard ki bayani aur zazbato ko lajawab tarike se pesh kia aapne…
bht umda
khus rahiye janaab
Arey apne waqt diya yehi bahaut hai mere liye..
Teh dil se shukriya..
Khush rahiye..!
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«Reply #11 on: April 19, 2011, 05:24:22 PM »
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Bahut Khub Rahim  Bhai
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«Reply #12 on: April 19, 2011, 05:57:24 PM »
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Bahut Khub Rahim  Bhai
Shukriya Rishi bhai..
Khush rahiye!
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«Reply #13 on: April 19, 2011, 06:00:02 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Bhai rahim!!!

Har Lafz Aapke Dil Ka Dard Darshaa Raha Tha..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #14 on: April 20, 2011, 12:31:17 AM »
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Bahut Bahut Aur Bahut Khoob Bhai rahim!!!

Har Lafz Aapke Dil Ka Dard Darshaa Raha Tha..

Bahut Ache.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Apke teh teh dil se shukriya Khwaish dost..
Khush rahiye..!
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