Sagar

by -Sagar- on April 20, 2007, 03:15:40 PM
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door jo tum ho gayi,kya zindagi ka mol reh jayega
tinka tinka bhikaregi hasti,vajood ek aathass ban jayega
jee kar jab zinda na rahu,saansoN ka bhoj kaise uthaega
"Sagar" ban sab ki payaas bhuja du,meri payaas kaun bhujayega
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«Reply #1 on: April 20, 2007, 06:14:42 PM »
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Wah.. nice ..

7/10 !
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«Reply #2 on: April 25, 2007, 01:21:47 PM »
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bahoot khoob sagar ji!!
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«Reply #3 on: April 25, 2007, 05:01:43 PM »
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thanks ricky n pooja !!!

app bhi kuch likhein ...
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«Reply #4 on: April 25, 2007, 06:49:32 PM »
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Likhna toh bohot chahte hain..
Yadeoin ko kaghaz mein sahejna chahte..
Lekin jab bhi hum pakarte hain kalam..
Jaane kyun..
sabkuch bhool hum kahin kho jate hain !!!


Well.. likhte zaroor lekin waqt sae thora aaj kal tang ho chale hain !
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«Reply #5 on: April 26, 2007, 05:03:57 PM »
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bohaat khoob....

waqt ki zanjeer ne humein bhi hai bandh rakha
honsla bana tere paayar ka ek diya hai jala rakha
mashaal-e-vishwash ki roshani le abb chal pade hain
dil mein ek toofan aor "Sagar"* hai chupa rakha...!!!


*Ansu,tears
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«Reply #6 on: April 26, 2007, 06:31:14 PM »
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Thanx..

Sagar* ka istemaal accha laga..

Btw.. mashaal-e-vishwaas looks little odd because vishwass is pure Hindi word and Mashal-e-vishwaas is actually Urdu Grammer thing.
You may do it like ::: Mashaal-ae-Yakeen :::

Just a generous advice !
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«Reply #7 on: May 04, 2007, 05:58:08 PM »
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thanks ricky

main professional nahi hu.. jab jo dil karta hai.. likh deta hu... aap yuhi hi samjhate rahe... shayad kuch learn kar paun !!!
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«Reply #8 on: January 11, 2010, 05:35:50 PM »
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Sagar  app ki choice bohat achchi hai............God bless u...
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«Reply #9 on: January 17, 2010, 01:01:12 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause
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