Saugaat ban ke aa.........saru..........117

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आजा  के मेरी  खुशियों की  सौगात बन के आ
चाँद  तारों से  महकी शबनमी  रात बन के आ

ए  सनम  में भूल जाऊं  अगले पिछले सारे गम
इस दिल में नई  दुनियाँ की शुरुआत बन के आ

खिले  फूल  कभी दिल का रंग होंठों पे आ जाये
मेरे  उजड़े हुये चमन में  तिलिस्मात बन के आ

तस्वीर-ए-ख़याल-ए-यार से कहता है दिल अक्सर
देख  सुनती  है तो  आजा  करामात  बन  के आ

आये न रास  हरदम  दिन गर्म  और  रातें सर्द
में मोर  बन  के ना चूं  तू  बरसात बन के आ

जी  उठे  मरने के बाद मार मिटें  उठने के बाद
दिलबर  मेरे  सूरत-ए-गुजर-औकात  बन के आ

चलने  को जगह'सरु' न  रुकने की ताब है मेरी
बह  जायें  हाये  समंदर भी वो गात बन के आ

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«Reply #1 on: July 22, 2014, 04:57:28 AM »
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waah waah waah babhut khoob
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«Reply #2 on: July 22, 2014, 06:29:09 AM »
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Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah bahot khooob
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«Reply #3 on: July 22, 2014, 06:54:53 AM »
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Waah !!! Behad khoobsurat ghazal par dheron daad Saru ji !!
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«Reply #4 on: July 22, 2014, 07:00:24 AM »
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आजा  के मेरी  खुशियों की  सौगात बन के आ
चाँद  तारों से  महकी शबनमी  रात बन के आ

ए  सनम  में भूल जाऊं  अगले पिछले सारे गम
इस दिल में नई  दुनियाँ की शुरुआत बन के आ

खिले  फूल  कभी दिल का रंग होंठों पे आ जाये
मेरे  उजड़े हुये चमन में  तिलिस्मात बन के आ

तस्वीर-ए-ख़याल-ए-यार से कहता है दिल अक्सर
देख  सुनती  है तो  आजा  करामात  बन  के आ

आये न रास  हरदम  दिन गर्म  और  रातें सर्द
में मोर  बन  के ना चूं  तू  बरसात बन के आ

जी  उठे  मरने के बाद मार मिटें  उठने के बाद
दिलबर  मेरे  सूरत-ए-गुजर-औकात  बन के आ

चलने  को जगह'सरु' न  रुकने की ताब है मेरी
बह  जायें  हाये  समंदर भी वो गात बन के आ

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«Reply #5 on: July 22, 2014, 09:40:51 AM »
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Bahut khoob.
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«Reply #6 on: July 22, 2014, 03:09:34 PM »
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Bahut Khoob. Kya baat Hai.
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Wah,Wah,Waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaah Sangwaan ji,Bahut khoobsurat khayalaat se pur hai aapkee ye Rumani ghazal.Aik RAU ke saath dili daad qabool kijiye.
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«Reply #9 on: July 22, 2014, 05:46:36 PM »
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वाह....वाह....बहुत ही खूब.....

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bahut khub saruji...... khub....

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Bahut Khoob...
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bahut bahut shukriya  Amit ji.......
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 bahut 2 shukriya sudhir ji...........
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