sharaab ke nashe me !!!

by sarfira on March 09, 2012, 11:19:22 PM
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this is not a poetry

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sharaab ke nashe me har bat kahta raha
dariya nahi uska dil lekin dariya sa behta raha--

chehra jhutha aur baaten jhoothi thi uski
dil tha magar sachcha bar bar kehta raha--

apni bekaraari chupata raha mayusiyon ka
aankho se kar bayan sab khamoshiyon se sehta raha--

ek parinda tha vo bhi kabhi aasmaan ka
shikaar hua khusgrzi ka apno par hi martaa raha--

khus hai vo pee kar lahoo zigar ka
kar dafan umeedo ko andheron me bicharta raha--
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«Reply #1 on: March 09, 2012, 11:28:29 PM »
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waaaaaah
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«Reply #2 on: March 09, 2012, 11:56:42 PM »
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this is not a poetry

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sharaab ke nashe me har bat kahta raha
dariya nahi uska dil lekin dariya sa behta raha--
kya khoob sarfira ji bada jazbaati sher hai Applause Applause
chehra jhutha aur baaten jhoothi thi uski
dil tha magar sachcha bar bar kehta raha--
wah wah. Applause Applause Applause
apni bekaraari chupata raha mayusiyon ka
aankho se kar bayan sab khamoshiyon se sehta raha--
kya andaaz hai kahne ka khoob Applause Applause Applause
ek parinda tha vo bhi kabhi aasmaan ka
shikaar hua khudgarzi ka apno par hi martaa raha--
aisa hi hota hai Applause Applause Applause
khush hai vo pee kar lahoo jigar ka
kar dafan umeedo ko andheron me bicharta raha--
bahut khoob......!kya kahne


bahut khoob.........!
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«Reply #3 on: March 10, 2012, 12:12:57 AM »
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waa waa babaji bhot khub. Applause Applause
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«Reply #4 on: March 10, 2012, 03:37:31 AM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

bahut khoob ji....!!!
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«Reply #5 on: March 10, 2012, 08:42:39 AM »
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Sarfira ji
abhut accha likha hai aapne.
yu hi likhte rahiye. Applause
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«Reply #6 on: March 12, 2012, 09:11:06 AM »
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waah waah lajwaab sarfira ji badhaai ho
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«Reply #7 on: March 12, 2012, 09:14:31 AM »
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Bahut khub Sarfira ji  Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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