sharaab ki dukane jalla doon ....bansi

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Nasha karna kisike liye bhi achha nahin  hota
Nashe se nuksaan hi hain koi phayda nahin hota

Kuchh log peete hain apne gam bhulane ke liye
Wo jante nahin peene se koi gam khatam nahin hota

Peene se kayee gharon ko toot te huye  dekha hai
Kayee zindagiyon ko khatam hote huye dekah hai

Man to karta hai saree sharaab ki dukane jalla doon
Kiya karoon is ki kanoon ijazat nahin ddeta
----------bansi dhameja(madhur)
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«Reply #1 on: August 11, 2012, 10:08:59 PM »
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bahut khub bahut lajwab soch hai aapki bansi ji.........


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«Reply #2 on: August 11, 2012, 10:38:56 PM »
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saudagar ji
AAP KA SHUKIYA KIN ALFAZ SE KAROON
MERE PASS WO ALFAZ NAHI  HAIN
bansi TO EK NACHEZ HAI KOI SHAYAR NAHI HAI
 
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«Reply #3 on: August 12, 2012, 12:36:20 AM »
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achhi socha rahi aapki bansi ji...

tamasha kyu hi ye sharaab hi to hai...
aadat maana jara si kharaab hi to hai...

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«Reply #4 on: August 12, 2012, 12:39:52 AM »
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Nasha karna kisike liye bhi achha nahin  hota
Nashe se nuksaan hi hain koi phayda nahin hota

Kuchh log peete hain apne gam bhulane ke liye
Wo jante nahin peene se koi gam khatam nahin hota

Peene se kayee gharon ko toot te huye  dekha hai
Kayee zindagiyon ko khatam hote huye dekah hai

Man to karta hai saree sharaab ki dukane jalla doon
Kiya karoon is ki kanoon ijazat nahin ddeta
----------bansi dhameja(madhur)



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«Reply #5 on: August 12, 2012, 12:40:32 AM »
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achhi socha rahi aapki bansi ji...

tamasha kyu hi ye sharaab hi to hai...
aadat maana jara si kharaab hi to hai...

Intezar!



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«Reply #6 on: August 12, 2012, 05:28:47 AM »
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kisi shayer ne kia khoob kaha he

ay Zauq dekh dukhter e raz ko na moonh laga
chut-tee nahi he  moonh se ye kafir lagi hui!!
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«Reply #7 on: August 12, 2012, 06:21:26 AM »
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sahi kaha bansiji
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«Reply #8 on: August 12, 2012, 01:17:58 PM »
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waaahh waaahhh sir
bilkul sahi likha hai aapne Applause Applause Applause

ye kanoon ko bohot tax milta hai is shrab se .. shrab bikni kabhi khatam nahi ho sakti !!
agar aap jalaoge to mashal mai pakdaunga apko bansi g  ! Usual Smile
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«Reply #9 on: August 12, 2012, 02:20:11 PM »
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bahut prernaa daayak
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«Reply #10 on: August 12, 2012, 10:18:11 PM »
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intezar ji shukriya
manta hoon
Zaraa see aadat kharaab hone se bahut  nuksaan nahin hota
Jab lat parh jaye sharaab ki to uska koi ilaaj nahi hota
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«Reply #11 on: August 13, 2012, 04:07:34 PM »
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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause  bahut bahut khoob Bansi ji,.... bahut achcha likha hai aapne...!!!
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«Reply #12 on: August 13, 2012, 04:58:26 PM »
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khamosh aawaaz ji thnks
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«Reply #13 on: August 13, 2012, 05:04:56 PM »
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roy ji thanks
man to kuchh karna chahta hai magar
haalaat wo sab karne dete nhin
logon ko sharaab peene se rokna assan hai magar
sharaab ki dukane jalaanaa  aasaan nahin

 
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«Reply #14 on: August 13, 2012, 05:08:23 PM »
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mazHur ji shukriya
ghar se maikhane jana to aasaan hai magar
ghar ko wapas aanaa aasaan nahin
sharaab peene ki aadat dalna aasaan hai magar
us aadat ko chhorhna aasan nahin
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