shayad~

by AbhiTamrakar on October 19, 2010, 11:22:45 AM
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dosto likhna chahta tha kuchh or hi par na jane dimag kahan se kaahan chala gaya...ek alag hi mod par aake ruk gaya ..eisa laga ajakal badi bagawati ho gayi meri soch ...ek bar socha chalo nahi karuga post par fir socha kar deta hun..akhir kuchh dil ne kaha he to dil ki marziii ......shayad aap sabko pasand aaye~



bade din se nahi hua deedar e yaar mujhe yaaron
kisi ne husna ke toofan se rukne ki gujarish ki hogi shayad~

ek ek labz teer sa laga he zaalim khair kar
kisi ne dil ki kalam chalai he panno par shayad~

husna par jaan dene wale bahut he magar ye to puchh zara
kisi ne zindagi bhi kamayi hogi kabhi jaan dekar shayad~

sou bar soch fir chala shabda ke teer ae bande
kisi ne chot "Abhi" khayi hogi tere sharo'n se shayad~

bhagwan se har bar apna pyar mangne walon socho zara
kisi ne ek bar to maa-baap ki khushi mangi hoti shayad~


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«Reply #1 on: October 19, 2010, 11:32:48 AM »
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last one is d best.....
good one abhi ji... Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: October 19, 2010, 11:34:27 AM »
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shukriya manjil jii~
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«Reply #3 on: October 19, 2010, 08:52:51 PM »
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Waqei Abhi bhai,
jude jude ehsaason se bhari hai apki nazm..bahaut bahaut khoob..bahaut achi lagi yeh nazm mujhe..!
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«Reply #4 on: October 20, 2010, 05:54:58 AM »
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shukriya rahim bhaii..apko pasand aayi yahi kafi he~
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«Reply #5 on: October 21, 2010, 09:17:30 AM »
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bahut bahut khoob likha hai aapne Abhi ji....!!!
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«Reply #6 on: October 21, 2010, 10:18:55 AM »
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dhanyawad kapil jiii~
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«Reply #7 on: October 22, 2010, 01:47:37 PM »
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abhi bhaiiiiiiiiiiii aap ki rachna aaki soch ki mai dad deta hu par jo kuch kami mujhe lagi maine poori kar di

bagawati kalam me aap ka sada sath nibhane ka wada hai mera

bagawat ham bhi karty hai


kabhi to khud bhi soch lo ki koun ho tum bhi
tumko bhi kisi ne chalna sikhaya tha shayad~

aaj thukra kar jaa rahe ho jinko raahon me
tum gire the to sambhalna sikhaya tha shayad~

aaj kahty ho jise "bojh ban gaye ho tum"
kabhi kandhon pe tumhen usne ghumaya tha shayad~

badi kismat se milta hai saya maa-baap ka
tune paya hai to kuch karm acha kiya tha shayad~


aap ka Raahi
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