SII RAHAA HOON (Rubai)... "MohaN"

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SII RAHAA HOON

Sahib dil ke zakham hee sii rahaa hoon
Main phatey kaachh hee sii rahaa hoon
Phir se dekhun watan kee khush.haalee
Peeiye jaa raha-o-jeeiye jaa rahaa hoon

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«Reply #2 on: November 25, 2016, 11:10:10 AM »
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Bahut khoob sir

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Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
bahut shukria Suresh Jee.
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Bahut khoob sir

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bahut shukria Arjun Jee.
 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2 hello2
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SII RAHAA HOON

Sahib dil ke zakham hee sii rahaa hoon
Main phatey kaachh hee sii rahaa hoon
Phir se dekhun watan kee khush.haalee
Peeiye jaa raha-o-jeeiye jaa rahaa hoon

Surindar. N             "MohaN"

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #6 on: November 28, 2016, 12:29:13 PM »
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very nice
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Quote from: surindarn on November 25, 2016, 06:18:09 AM
SII RAHAA HOON

Sahib dil ke zakham hee sii rahaa hoon
Main phatey kaachh hee sii rahaa hoon
Phir se dekhun watan kee khush.haalee
Peeiye jaa raha-o-jeeiye jaa rahaa hoon

Surindar. N             "MohaN"

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