!!!..Sitam parwana kar gaya..!!!

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Socha jitnaa, zayada usse asar kar gaya,,
Wo chehra, jo dil me mere ghar kar gaya..

Masoom ankho se wo koi to gadbad kar gaya,,
Hava ka ikk jhonkha yaha patjhad kar gaya..

Ghosla apna chhodkar, dil me mere basar kar gaya,,
Mere hatho ko chhukar, lambi apni umar kar gaya..

Aaine se, mere hi chehre ko wo ojhal kar gaya,,
Guzare har pal ko apne, wo mera kal  kar gaya..

Kareebiyo.N ki na ittila ki, faslo.N ki khabar kar gaya,,
Khud hi khilaa ke gul, phir wo waha banzar kar gaya..

Ikk mastaane ko wo ikk 'deewaana' kar gaya,,
Aur kehte hain ki sitam parwana kar gaya..!!! Ñ
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«Reply #1 on: October 27, 2013, 02:12:55 AM »
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 Clapping Smiley loved your poem..it is really nice
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Clapping Smiley loved your poem..it is really nice

Thankyou ! Ambalika..happy9
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Thankyou ! Ambalika..happy9
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Waah bahaut khoob Nashwani ji
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Waah bahaut khoob Nashwani ji

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«Reply #8 on: October 27, 2013, 04:36:19 AM »
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kya baat hai....asar to kar gaya......
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Socha jitnaa, zayada usse asar kar gaya,,
Wo chehra, jo dil me mere ghar kar gaya..

Masoom ankho se wo koi to gadbad kar gaya,,
Hava ka ikk jhonkha yaha patjhad kar gaya..

Ghosla apna chhodkar, dil me mere basar kar gaya,,
Mere hatho ko chhukar, lambi apni umar kar gaya..

Aaine se, mere hi chehre ko wo ojhal kar gaya,,
Guzare har pal ko apne, wo mera kal  kar gaya..

Kareebiyo.N ki na ittila ki, faslo.N ki khabar kar gaya,,
Khud hi khilaa ke gul, phir wo waha banzar kar gaya..

Ikk mastaane ko wo ikk 'deewaana' kar gaya,,
Aur kehte hain ki sitam parwana kar gaya..!!! Ñ



Masoom ankho se wo koi to gadbad kar gaya,,
Hava ka ikk jhonkha yaha patjhad kar gaya..
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kya baat hai....asar to kar gaya......

Thankyou !
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Superb.

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Masoom ankho se wo koi to gadbad kar gaya,,
Hava ka ikk jhonkha yaha patjhad kar gaya..
Applause Applause Applause Applause

Thankyou ! adil jee..happy9
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«Reply #14 on: October 27, 2013, 09:20:45 AM »
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Socha jitnaa, zayada usse asar kar gaya,,
Wo chehra, jo dil me mere ghar kar gaya..

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Masoom ankho se wo koi to gadbad kar gaya,,
Hava ka ikk jhonkha yaha patjhad kar gaya.(.gai). jitni khatarnaak cheezein hain sab feminine hain.
 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
Ghosla apna chhodkar, dil me mere basar kar gaya,,
Mere hatho ko chhukar, lambi apni umar kar gaya..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Aaine se, mere hi chehre ko wo ojhal kar gaya,,
Guzare har pal ko apne, wo mera kal  kar gaya..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Kareebiyo.N ki na ittila ki, faslo.N ki khabar kar gaya,,
Khud hi khilaa ke gul, phir wo waha banzar kar gaya..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Ikk mastaane ko wo ikk 'deewaana' kar gaya,,
Aur kehte hain ki sitam parwana kar gaya..!!! Ñ

 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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