SOCHIYE...A.B

by adil bechain on December 12, 2009, 01:10:06 PM
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                                  CHIRAAG HAI PER USMAIN ROSHNI NAHIN,
                                  MAQSAD BINAA WAJOOD KUCH BHI NAHIN...! Usual Smile

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                                  GULISTAAN HAI PAAS TEREY PER TU PHOOL JAISA NAHIN,
                                  INSAAN NAHIN TU, GAR TUJHEY SOHBAT KA ASAR NAHIN...! DOH

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                                  DOST CHAHIYE GAR TO KHUD USKEY LAYAK BUNN,
                                  UNN 'NEEM' SEY KABHI 'SHAHAD' KI TAMANNA KARTEY NAHIN...!! Usual Smile
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«Reply #1 on: December 12, 2009, 01:51:22 PM »
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Adil Sahab, ye kya likha hai aapne. kafia bhi nahi nibhaya aur behr bhi laapata hai. Theek se koshish kijiye. Waise khyal achhe hain.
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«Reply #2 on: December 12, 2009, 11:11:59 PM »
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first 2 lines bahut pasand aayi mujhe Adil ji ,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: December 13, 2009, 05:30:58 AM »
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Quote from: Pl.dont mind on December 12, 2009, 01:51:22 PM
Adil Sahab, ye kya likha hai aapne. kafia bhi nahi nibhaya aur behr bhi laapata hai. Theek se koshish kijiye. Waise khyal achhe hain.

sir ji yeh ghazal nahin hai.........!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: December 13, 2009, 05:31:38 AM »
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first 2 lines bahut pasand aayi mujhe Adil ji ,bahut khoob icon_thumleft Applause Applause Applause

thanx madhuwesh ji
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«Reply #5 on: December 14, 2009, 03:36:16 PM »
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Nice lines
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«Reply #6 on: December 15, 2009, 10:43:16 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on December 14, 2009, 03:36:16 PM
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thank u rishi ji
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«Reply #8 on: January 24, 2010, 06:54:00 PM »
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