sub ko yahaan,yeh maqaam milta nahien..(nazar ghouri)

by nazar ghouri on June 06, 2010, 01:34:43 AM
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«Reply #15 on: June 07, 2010, 02:19:04 AM »
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sweet saqib saheb bahot bahot shukriya aap ne meri is koshish ko pasand kiya.
aslaamalikum nazar bhai,wah wah subhan allah..lajawaab kardiya,bahut achi peshkash icon_salut
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«Reply #16 on: June 07, 2010, 02:21:54 AM »
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mamta saheba aapne meri jis andaz main hausla afzai ki hai iss paishkash pe ,mei aapka teh dil se shukr guzar hoon.bahot bahot shukriya.
nazar saheb gazal ke har shair par karodo daad qubool karen.lekin 3rd 4th or6th shair ne to jaan hi nakal kar rakh di. jazbaat or inqalaab ka ye jaljala har sanjeeda dil ko jhakjhor kar rakh dega.behtareen peshkash!waaaaaah!!!
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«Reply #17 on: June 07, 2010, 02:25:09 AM »
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wajahat bhai aap ne meri iss haqeer si koshish ko padhne ke  liye waqt nikala iske liye mei aapka shukr guzar hoon
wah bhai bahot khoob am wajahat tearyeyed
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«Reply #18 on: June 07, 2010, 02:30:49 AM »
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wajahat bhai aapne bataya ke aap ke dost ne bhi meri iss paishkash ko pasand kiya aur woh bhi nazr naam se hi daad di hai,mein shukr guzar hoon aapke dost saheb ka .
wah saab bahot khoob,lajawab : icon_salut
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«Reply #19 on: June 07, 2010, 02:34:17 AM »
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aapki likhi baatein sadd fisad sahi hain riyaz bhai..aapki hausla afzai ka behad mashkoor hoon ,aap ne apna qimti waqt diya aur is paishkash ko sarah,bahot bahot shukriya.
Wah wah Nazar Sb. aapki kamaal ki takhleeq hai ye. Ek muddat se filisteeniyon par ho rahe zulmo sitam aur haal hi mein unki imdaad ko jaa rahe ek group par zalimana hamle aur amwaat ke peshe-nazar  aapke tassuraat bahut achhe lage. Ye bade dukh ka maqaam hai un bekas, bebas  logon ki madad ke liye koi bhi aage nahi aata. Muslim countries ko lagata hai Allah se zyada America ka khauf hai. UNO bhi mazammat ke siwa kuchh nahi kar paata.Ye America ki musalmano se nafrat ki alaamat hai. Mazlumon ke saath koi ho ya na ho magar Allah hai. Jo bhi musalmano ko nahaq nuqsaan pahuchaye Allah unko azaab-e-aleem de.

Aapne bahut achha likha hai, aap hazaron daad ke mustahiq hain.
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«Reply #20 on: June 07, 2010, 02:37:00 AM »
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khamosh awaaz saheb aap ka likha shair bahot hi umda hai daad qubool karein,aapne meri iss chhoti si koshish ko pasand kiya aapka bahot bahot shukriya

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«Reply #21 on: June 08, 2010, 06:04:08 PM »
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ASK,
Bhai sab mujhe faqr hai aap par ke aap mere DOST hai shayeri MASHALLAH bohot khoob!                                                                                     Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause                                                         
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«Reply #22 on: June 08, 2010, 07:02:07 PM »
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ASK,                                                                            Nazar sab ye jo shayer hai kabhi aap isko live sonye kyon ke iska andaaz e bayan bohoth pyara hai iska naam "MISAM GOPALPURI" hai. oske ye kalam ko khud RAHAT INDURI sahab ne farmayesh ki.                                                                                                  Itna bejaan ho ahsaas ki maro ki tarha !
                     Phool chupte hai mere jism me qharon ki taraha !
                     Kuch to ho dil ko sukun khawo mere sar ki qasam !
                     Choudh kar ab to na jao ke baharon ki tarha!
                     Koyi chara na raha tark ke taaloq ke siwa !
                     Beach me padkaye kuch log daraton ki tarha !
                     Sath reh sakte hai per ek nahi ho sakte !
                     Kitne majboor hai hum dono kanaraon ki tarha !
                     Zakhm sub bhar chuke bas ek chubhan baqi hai !
                     Hath me tere bhi phatar tha hazaraon ki tarha !
                     Be qata aaj jo soli pe chatahte hai mujhe !
                     Kal meri khak choome ke wo mazaraon ki tarha !
                                                         faqt,
                                                  SHABBIR AHMED HASHMI
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«Reply #23 on: June 09, 2010, 05:54:12 PM »
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walekum salam shabbir bhai,aap ne meri iss koshish ko saraha,pasand kiya mein aapka shukr guzar hoon,aap ke yeh lafz "mujhe faqr hai aap par ke aap mere dost hain" padh kar bahot kushi hoi mein aap ka ehsaan mand hoon ke aap ne iss na cheez ko iss khabil samjha bahot bahot shukriya,Allah aap ko khush rakhe,Allah hafiz. aap ne jo ghazal share ki hai bahot hi laajawaab hai,ek mashwara hai shabbir bhai aap yoindia ke member banjao,aaur aap ki jo pasandida shayeri hai yahaan post karte rhahiye,Allah hafiz
ASK,
Bhai sab mujhe faqr hai aap par ke aap mere DOST hai shayeri MASHALLAH bohot khoob!                                                                                     Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause                                                         
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