sub ko yahaan,yeh maqaam milta nahien..(nazar ghouri)

by nazar ghouri on June 06, 2010, 07:04:43 AM
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Tuesday 1st june Israeli commandos ne "Gaza" jaane waale "Humanitarian Aid Group"ke jahaaz pe attack kiya ,attack main "HAG"ke 19 members halaak hoe.Israel ke iss hamle ke khilaaf dunya ke chappe chappe main gazabnak muzahere hoe,America ne iss hamle ki mazamatt main sirf "do jumle " kahe,Egypt ki aur "Saudi Arabia "ki khamoshi ke kya maanie.?in mumalik ki khamoshi ne mujh jaise aam aadmi ko jhinjhod ke rakh diya,meine ek "palestinian" ke ehsaas ko mehsoos karne ki koshish ki,jo saudi Arabia ,Egypt aur America ke hukumraanao'n se kuch kehna chaha hai, mulaheza farmaen...khaas kar Saudia..

Sub ko yahaan ,yeh maqaam milta nahien....
Tujh se magar yeh maqaam sanbhalta nahien...

Yahaan to, bachh ke nikal jaaega tu............
Wahaan koi bahaana magar chalta nahien........

Faqr-o-faaqa ki talqiyaan tujhe kya maloom...?
Tere gharr koi bhook se machalta nahien.......

Tumhaari khwaab gahao'n main ujale palte hain..
Hamaare hujjrao'n main diya jalta nahien.......

Meer-e-kaarwan tujhe akhir huwa kya hai......
Kyun! teri zubaan se koi lafz nikalta nahien..

Tujh jaise tamashai  aur bhi hain.............
jinki aankhaon se aansoo nikalta nahien......

Meri aah! se har rooz arsh hilta hai........
Aur yeh na samjho manzar badalta nahien...


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«Reply #1 on: June 06, 2010, 11:51:23 AM »
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    Bahut achha bayanan kiya hai Nazar ji. Dil ko chhoo lene wale ehsaas pesh kiy hai aapne. icon_salut
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«Reply #2 on: June 06, 2010, 01:57:03 PM »
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Subhan_allah Nazar saheb kya khoob inquilabi peshkash hai........bas janab lajawab kar diya aapne.........Allah aapko is kalam ke tufail Jannat me aala maqam de.

Aur jaha kahi bhi musalman bhaiyo par zulm ho rahe hai aur jaha kahi bhi insaniyat ka ghala ghota ja raha hai Allah unki mushkil aasan kare aur unhe apni ladaiee me kamyaab kare AAMEEN.
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«Reply #3 on: June 06, 2010, 02:24:41 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoob Nazar Bhai..

Bahut Hi Dumdaar Aur Inquialabi Peshkash!!!

Aapki Soch,Aapki Samaj ko mera Salaam Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #4 on: June 06, 2010, 03:26:31 PM »
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aslaamalikum nazar bhai,wah wah subhan allah..lajawaab kardiya,bahut achi peshkash icon_salut
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«Reply #5 on: June 06, 2010, 08:22:28 PM »
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nazar saheb gazal ke har shair par karodo daad qubool karen.lekin 3rd 4th or6th shair ne to jaan hi nakal kar rakh di. jazbaat or inqalaab ka ye jaljala har sanjeeda dil ko jhakjhor kar rakh dega.behtareen peshkash!waaaaaah!!!
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«Reply #6 on: June 06, 2010, 09:38:39 PM »
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bhai nazar saheb , wah wah wah aur wah ,bahi apki shayari parwan chad rahi hai ,har zumre me taba azmai kar rahe ho wah , kya kahene hain bhaijaan , lajawab eak umda taqleeq pe dili dad ba awaz a buland hazir hai qubool karen ,,

yaar jigar badi inkesari ke saath eak sher ki tarjumani chahunga ,, sher kaafi acha aur umda hai magar ishara samjhne se qasir hon ,, arab bashindon ko hai ya marti howi urdu tahezib ko ,,

Meer-a-karwan tujhe aqi howa kya hai ..
kyun,teri zuban se koi lafz nikalta nahi.

umid hai jaankar maza dubala hoga .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..



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«Reply #7 on: June 06, 2010, 10:04:39 PM »
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qadeer bhai,salaam -o-dua,aap ne padha pasand kiya dil ko aur kya chahiye,bahot bahot shukriya aap ka ,aap ne apne bsy schedule main se waqt nikaal kar daad o tehseen se nawaza jiska mein mamnoon o mashkoor hoon,,mera ishara arab bashindaon ki janib hi hai khas kar (khadim-e-harmain khud ko kehne waalaon ki taraf).
bhai nazar saheb , wah wah wah aur wah ,bahi apki shayari parwan chad rahi hai ,har zumre me taba azmai kar rahe ho wah , kya kahene hain bhaijaan , lajawab eak umda taqleeq pe dili dad ba awaz a buland hazir hai qubool karen ,,

yaar jigar badi inkesari ke saath eak sher ki tarjumani chahunga ,, sher kaafi acha aur umda hai magar ishara samjhne se qasir hon ,, arab bashindon ko hai ya marti howi urdu tahezib ko ,,

Meer-a-karwan tujhe aqi howa kya hai ..
kyun,teri zuban se koi lafz nikalta nahi.

umid hai jaankar maza dubala hoga .. allah apko hamesha khush rakhe ..



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«Reply #8 on: June 06, 2010, 10:08:34 PM »
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wah bhai bahot khoob am wajahat tearyeyed
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«Reply #9 on: June 06, 2010, 10:11:53 PM »
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wah saab bahot khoob,lajawab : icon_salut
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«Reply #10 on: June 06, 2010, 10:52:27 PM »
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Wah wah Nazar Sb. aapki kamaal ki takhleeq hai ye. Ek muddat se filisteeniyon par ho rahe zulmo sitam aur haal hi mein unki imdaad ko jaa rahe ek group par zalimana hamle aur amwaat ke peshe-nazar  aapke tassuraat bahut achhe lage. Ye bade dukh ka maqaam hai un bekas, bebas  logon ki madad ke liye koi bhi aage nahi aata. Muslim countries ko lagata hai Allah se zyada America ka khauf hai. UNO bhi mazammat ke siwa kuchh nahi kar paata.Ye America ki musalmano se nafrat ki alaamat hai. Mazlumon ke saath koi ho ya na ho magar Allah hai. Jo bhi musalmano ko nahaq nuqsaan pahuchaye Allah unko azaab-e-aleem de.

Aapne bahut achha likha hai, aap hazaron daad ke mustahiq hain.
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«Reply #11 on: June 06, 2010, 11:28:13 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: June 07, 2010, 07:36:57 AM »
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tamanna saheba aapne meri iss koshish ko saraha mei aapka teh dil se shukr guzar hoon

    Bahut achha bayanan kiya hai Nazar ji. Dil ko chhoo lene wale ehsaas pesh kiy hai aapne. icon_salut
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«Reply #13 on: June 07, 2010, 07:44:04 AM »
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sajid bhai aap ne hamesha hausla afzai ki hai meri har koshish pe,aapka mei behad mashkoor o mamnoon hoon,aap ne mujhe jo du'a di uske shukriye ke liye mere paas alfaaz nahi hain,bus itna kahonga ke hamesha aapka ehsaan mand rahonga.bahot bahot shukriya.
Subhan_allah Nazar saheb kya khoob inquilabi peshkash hai........bas janab lajawab kar diya aapne.........Allah aapko is kalam ke tufail Jannat me aala maqam de.

Aur jaha kahi bhi musalman bhaiyo par zulm ho rahe hai aur jaha kahi bhi insaniyat ka ghala ghota ja raha hai Allah unki mushkil aasan kare aur unhe apni ladaiee me kamyaab kare AAMEEN.
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«Reply #14 on: June 07, 2010, 07:46:50 AM »
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bahot bahot shukriya aapka khwaish saheb .meri is paishkash ko aapne pasand kiya aur dilkhol kar daad di.
Bahut Bahut Khoob Nazar Bhai..

Bahut Hi Dumdaar Aur Inquialabi Peshkash!!!

Aapki Soch,Aapki Samaj ko mera Salaam Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

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