!!!..Subah ka aalam..!!!

by nashwani on October 06, 2013, 08:19:51 PM
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Sheba jee ki likhi hui RAAT ko padhkar ye kuchh likhne ka idea aaya..Ek chhoti si koshish hai..

Khwabo.N ka dariya sukhata subah ka aalam,,
Haqeeqat se rubaroo karaata subah ka aalam..

Tanha raat ko apna banati vo chand ki roshni,,
Uss chand ka noor churaata subah ka aalam..

Gham ke paimane chhalkata shaam ka manzar,,
Naye haseen nazaare dikhata subah ka aalam..

Saathi andhera jaane kitne hi naummedo.N ka,,
Logo.N ko phir tanha banaata subah ka aalam..

Mehboob ki yaad me tha sari raat neend tihaare,,
Zalim do pal ki uski neend udata subah ka aalam..

Mana khudgarz hai, hai zara ziddi bhi, par haan,,
Nazaro.N ke parde hataata subah ka aalam..!!! Ñ   
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«Reply #1 on: October 06, 2013, 08:22:18 PM »
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waah waah waah waah bhai kya khub aur dilkash qalaam raha sheba ji ke qalaam ki raat ki darvani subah behad badhiya tarike se dikhai tumne.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #2 on: October 06, 2013, 08:24:38 PM »
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waah waah waah waah bhai kya khub aur dilkash qalaam raha sheba ji ke qalaam ki raat ki darvani subah behad badhiya tarike se dikhai tumne.... Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bahut shukriya mere eid ke chand..lagta hai aapki subah bhi zara der se hoti hai..Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #3 on: October 06, 2013, 08:28:16 PM »
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haahhahaha subah ho kahan rahi hai bhai.. yeh to tere qalaam ne ehsaas dilaya ki subah bhi hoti hai warna hum to sheba ji kahi raat mein hi jee rahe hain
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«Reply #4 on: October 06, 2013, 08:31:22 PM »
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haahhahaha subah ho kahan rahi hai bhai.. yeh to tere qalaam ne ehsaas dilaya ki subah bhi hoti hai warna hum to sheba ji kahi raat mein hi jee rahe hain

Are wo to maine implement kar li..ap sab ke liye ye lo subah ka aalam..wo kali raat mujhe bahut pasand hai main hi rak leta hun..tongue3 Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #5 on: October 06, 2013, 09:15:29 PM »
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Gham ke paimane chhalkata shaam ka manzar,,
Naye haseen nazaare dikhata subah ka aalam..

Mehboob ki yaad me tha sari raat neend tihaare,,
Zalim do pal ki uski neend udata subah ka aalam..

Mana khudgarz hai, hai zara ziddi bhi, par haan,,
Nazaro.N ke parde hataata subah ka aalam..!!! Ñ   


waah waah nashwani bhai bohut umda kalaam pesh kiya hai ,

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«Reply #6 on: October 06, 2013, 09:20:05 PM »
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Gham ke paimane chhalkata shaam ka manzar,,
Naye haseen nazaare dikhata subah ka aalam..

Mehboob ki yaad me tha sari raat neend tihaare,,
Zalim do pal ki uski neend udata subah ka aalam..

Mana khudgarz hai, hai zara ziddi bhi, par haan,,
Nazaro.N ke parde hataata subah ka aalam..!!! Ñ   


waah waah nashwani bhai bohut umda kalaam pesh kiya hai ,

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Pasand karne ka bahut shukriya sahal bhai..happy9
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«Reply #7 on: October 06, 2013, 09:42:15 PM »
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Bahaut achchhee ghazal kahi Nashwani ji .... Daad aapko !
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«Reply #8 on: October 06, 2013, 09:49:27 PM »
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Tanha raat ko apna banati vo chand ki roshni,,
Uss chand ka noor churaata subah ka aalam..

Bahut badhiya

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«Reply #9 on: October 06, 2013, 10:05:24 PM »
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Tanha raat ko apna banati vo chand ki roshni,,
Uss chand ka noor churaata subah ka aalam..

Gham ke paimane chhalkata shaam ka manzar,,
Naye haseen nazaare dikhata subah ka aalam..

Bahut bahut khoob nashwani ji.
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«Reply #10 on: October 06, 2013, 10:28:57 PM »
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Sheba jee ki likhi hui RAAT ko padhkar ye kuchh likhne ka idea aaya..Ek chhoti si koshish hai..
Khwabo.N ka dariya sukhata subah ka aalam,,
Haqeeqat se rubaroo karaata subah ka aalam..

Tanha raat ko apna banati vo chand ki roshni,,
Uss chand ka noor churaata subah ka aalam..

Gham ke paimane chhalkata shaam ka manzar,,
Naye haseen nazaare dikhata subah ka aalam..

Saathi andhera jaane kitne hi naummedo.N ka,,
Logo.N ko phir tanha banaata subah ka aalam..

Mehboob ki yaad me tha sari raat neend tihaare,,
Zalim do pal ki uski neend udata subah ka aalam..

Mana khudgarz hai, hai zara ziddi bhi, par haan,,
Nazaro.N ke parde hataata subah ka aalam..!!! Ñ   


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«Reply #11 on: October 06, 2013, 11:47:50 PM »
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«Reply #12 on: October 07, 2013, 12:56:03 AM »
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Sheba jee ki likhi hui RAAT ko padhkar ye kuchh likhne ka idea aaya..Ek chhoti si koshish hai.. icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower icon_flower
Khwabo.N ka dariya sukhata subah ka aalam,,
Haqeeqat se rubaroo karaata subah ka aalam..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Tanha raat ko apna banati vo chand ki roshni,,
Uss chand ka noor churaata subah ka aalam..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Gham ke paimane chhalkata shaam ka manzar,,
Naye haseen nazaare dikhata subah ka aalam..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Saathi andhera jaane kitne hi naummedo.N ka,,
Logo.N ko phir tanha banaata subah ka aalam..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Mehboob ki yaad me tha sari raat neend tihaare,,
Zalim do pal ki uski neend udata subah ka aalam..
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
Mana khudgarz hai, hai zara ziddi bhi, par haan,,
Nazaro.N ke parde hataata subah ka aalam..!!! Ñ
 Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley   


acha raha subah ka aalam raat ke andhere se icon_flower icon_flower!
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«Reply #13 on: October 07, 2013, 02:30:21 AM »
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Sheba jee ki likhi hui RAAT ko padhkar ye kuchh likhne ka idea aaya..Ek chhoti si koshish hai..
Khwabo.N ka dariya sukhata subah ka aalam,,
Haqeeqat se rubaroo karaata subah ka aalam..

Tanha raat ko apna banati vo chand ki roshni,,
Uss chand ka noor churaata subah ka aalam..

Gham ke paimane chhalkata shaam ka manzar,,
Naye haseen nazaare dikhata subah ka aalam..

Saathi andhera jaane kitne hi naummedo.N ka,,
Logo.N ko phir tanha banaata subah ka aalam..

Mehboob ki yaad me tha sari raat neend tihaare,,
Zalim do pal ki uski neend udata subah ka aalam..

Mana khudgarz hai, hai zara ziddi bhi, par haan,,
Nazaro.N ke parde hataata subah ka aalam..!!! Ñ   

Bahut Hi Umda Kalaam,Dhero.N Daad Qabool KareiN.!!
Bhai Ashwani Jee.
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«Reply #14 on: October 07, 2013, 02:31:00 AM »
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