SUKH-DUKH--by ghansham das ahuja

by ahujagd on July 09, 2012, 05:50:38 AM
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                सुख -दुःख
 
सुख  पाना  है  तो   प्राणी  दुःख  का  दरिया  पार  कर
गम  को  गले  लगा  ले  प्राणी   इसको   अपना   जानकर 
 
रात  दिन  तुमने  मेहनत  की
परवाह  न  की  तुने  सेहत  की
फल  इसका  तुझे  मिलेगा  जरूर
ऐसा  तू  विश्वास  कर … सुख  पाना …
 
          अपने  से  ऊपर  वालों  की  तू  ना  कर  देखा -देखी
          कैसे  जीते  हैं नीचे  वाले  देख  दर्द  उनका  भी
          चैन  मिल  जायेगा  सुख  तू  पायेगा
          कुछ  न  मिलेगा  हिम्मत  हार  कर … सुख  पाना  …
 
मेहनत  का  फल  सदा  ही  होता  है  मीठा
बोया   तुने  आम  तो  क्यों  मिलेगा  रीठा
दुःख  से  तू  घबराना  ना  सुख  पे  तू  इतराना  ना
बस  लगन  से  तू  अपना  काम   कर

सुख  पाना  है  तो   प्राणी  दुःख  का  दरिया  पार  कर
गम  को  गले  लगा  ले  प्राणी   इसको   अपना   जानकर 
 घनशाम दास  आहूजा
 
       
                   SUKH- DUKH
sukh paana hai to pranee dukh ka dariya paar kar
gam ko gale lagaa le pranee isko  apnaa  jaankar

raat din tune mehnat ki
parvaah na ki tune sehat ki
fal iska tujhe milega jaroor
aisa tu vishwas kar… sukh paana…

          apne se upar valon ki tu na kar dekha-dekhi
          kaise jeete neeche vale dekh dard unka bhi
         chain mil jayega sukh tu payega
         kuchh na milega himmat har kar… sukh paana …

mehnat ka fal sadaa hi hota hai meetha
boyaa  tune aam to kyon milega reetha
dukh se tu ghabrana na sukh pe tu itrana na
bas lagan se tu apna kaam kar

sukh paana hai to pranee dukh ka dariya paar kar
gam ko gale lagaa le pranee isko apnaa jaankar

ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #1 on: July 09, 2012, 05:54:11 AM »
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bahut hee aatmvishwaas jagaane waalee aur prernaa daayak rachnaa hai ahujaa ji aapko dil se bade aadar se saadhuwaad detaa hoon aapp ese hee likhte rahe aur khush rahe ek rau ke saath
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«Reply #2 on: July 09, 2012, 06:13:17 AM »
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Bahut khoob likha hai Ghanshyam jee
Dil se paar paana bahut mushkil hai phir bhee na jaane kab ye jag jaaye aur savera ho jaaye.
Acchi peshkash par dil se badhaai
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«Reply #3 on: July 09, 2012, 07:17:28 AM »
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Bahut  pyari , man ko chhoone waali nazm hai . ahuja ji , shat shat pranaam!!!
 Hats off to you!
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«Reply #4 on: July 09, 2012, 09:51:41 AM »
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Beautiful
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«Reply #5 on: July 09, 2012, 03:19:51 PM »
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Ahuja Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee waaH kia prerna daayi kavita kahi hai... waaH jee
bade hi uch vichaaroN ko shabdoN ki khoobsurat malaa meiN
piroya hai janab... Usual Smile

Is sundar rachana par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 

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«Reply #6 on: July 09, 2012, 03:20:32 PM »
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saini sahab,
aapki tareef milee to mujhe sab kuchh mil gaya
fir vistrut sameeksha par to mera dil khil gaya.
aapko bahut bahut dhanyavaad

(akalgrast kshetra par rau ki baarish roopi boond ke liye bhi)

ghansham das ahuja
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«Reply #7 on: July 09, 2012, 03:27:00 PM »
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mukesh ji,
 bahut bahut dhanyavaad hausla afzaai ke liye, rachna aapko pasand aai jaan kar mujhe bahut khushi hui sach kaha hai aapne jab jaago tabhi savera, kahte hain na der aayad durust aayad,
shubh kaamnaon ke sath
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«Reply #8 on: July 09, 2012, 03:30:01 PM »
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Bahut  pyari , man ko chhoone waali nazm hai . ahuja ji , shat shat pranaam!!!
 Hats off to you!
hasan ji,
prashansa karne ka andaaz aapka bhi bahut niraala hai, mujhe bahut khushi hui ki aapko meri yeh rachna pasand aai hausla afzaai ke liye bahut bahut dhanyavaad
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«Reply #9 on: July 09, 2012, 03:31:19 PM »
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Beautiful
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thanks a lot armanje ji
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«Reply #10 on: July 09, 2012, 03:36:57 PM »
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Ahuja Jee Aadaab!

WaaH jee waaH kia prerna daayi kavita kahi hai... waaH jee
bade hi uch vichaaroN ko shabdoN ki khoobsurat malaa meiN
piroya hai janab... Usual Smile

Is sundar rachana par humari dheroN dili daad O mubbarakbad
kabul kijiye... Usual Smile

Likhate rahiye... aate rahiye..
Shaad O aabaad rahiye...

Khuda Hafez... Usual Smile                 


parwaaz ji, aapne jis tarah is rachna ka swagat kiya hai aur taareef ki hai vo apne aap mein kabil-e-tareef hai aapka yeh andaaz aur grafic mujhe bahut pasand hai. bahut bahut shukriya parwaaz ji.
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«Reply #11 on: July 09, 2012, 04:03:54 PM »
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AHUJA JI
BAHUT HI PRENRNA DAYAK HAI YEH PESHKASH AAPKI
DIL KO CHOO GAYE HAI YEH NAZAM AAPKI
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«Reply #12 on: July 09, 2012, 04:17:04 PM »
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beautiful
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«Reply #13 on: July 10, 2012, 10:33:24 AM »
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AHUJA JI
BAHUT HI PRENRNA DAYAK HAI YEH PESHKASH AAPKI
DIL KO CHOO GAYE HAI YEH NAZAM AAPKI

thanku bansi ji aapke samay aur aapki daad ke liye  bahut bahut shukriya.
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«Reply #14 on: July 12, 2012, 11:09:47 AM »
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beautiful
thank you kamlesh ji
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