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yaad  rakhne ko  cheezen aur bhi hain, ek tere naam ke siwaa
jahaan me karne ko kaam aur bhi hain, ek mohabbat ke siwaa

school  college   ka   time thaa , jab   hum  bhi ishq karte the
apne  class  ki    ladkiyon   pe    hum  kai   kai  baar marte the
kisi  ke  paas   chance  na mile  to  naraaz  hum  naa hote the
agle  roz  se    hum   kisi   dusri    ke   liye   koshish  karte the

naye   kisi  chehre  ko  dekh   paagal   se   ho   jaate the hum
neend nahi aankhon  me , raat  ko    so  nahi  paate the hum
agle   subah   milna  hai  usse ,  baat     pakka  karungaa usse
apne   is   dil   ko   kuch   is    tarha   se  samjhaate  the  hum

ab  aisi  koi  baat   kahaan  ,  kisi     se     mulaaquaat  kahaan
jaage    poori     raat    hum ,  ab   waisi     koi     raat  kahaan
kaash   wo   din   fir  laut   aate  ,  raatein    wo   fir  laut aati
bheeg  jaaye   poori  tarha  hum ,   ab  waisi   barsaat kahaan

apne   paagalpan   se   maine    jaane   aaj   ye  kyaa  likha hai
dil  me  mere   aayaa   kyaa   thaa , aur  maine  kyaa  likha  hai
padh  ke   sabne   sochaa   ye  hi 'uuuff  isne  ye  kya likha hai
mann huwaa to likh diya ye? kya itnaa buraa likhaa hai? ? ? ?

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«Reply #1 on: August 30, 2012, 11:25:49 AM »
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good nazm kapil  ji
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«Reply #2 on: August 30, 2012, 11:50:49 AM »
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Bohat hi khusurat aur accha likha hai aapne! Pad kar aacha laga!!!
Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley

Bheegi Barsaaton Mein Ab Woh Behte Ashq Kaha,
Saari Raat Jagaye Kisi Ki Yaad, Waise Aashiq Kaha,
Milna Aur Bhichad Na Ek Khel Ho Gaya Hai Jaise,
Kar Jaye Apna Naam Amar Aaj Aaisa Ishq Kaha..!!
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«Reply #3 on: August 30, 2012, 11:55:02 AM »
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Thank you ji thank you Shireen ji...!!! aapne bahut khoobsurat likha hai....!!!

nashe me khud ko dooboke use bhulaanaa chaahaa
bas kisi na kisi bahaane se duur jaanaa chaahaa
wo yaad aati rahi har lamhaa mujhe bahut zyaadaa
na bhulaa sakaa use jise maine bhulaanaa chaahaa..!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 30, 2012, 12:02:00 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Saini ji...!!!

good nazm kapil  ji
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«Reply #5 on: August 30, 2012, 12:04:03 PM »
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yaad rakhne ko cheezen aur bhi hain, ek tere naam ke siwaa
jahaan me karne ko kaam aur bhi hain, ek mohabbat ke siwaa

school college ka time thaa, jab hum bhi ishq karte the
apne class ki ladkiyon pe hum kai kai baar marte the
kisi ke paas chance na mile to naraaz hum naa hote the
agle roz se hum kisi dusri ke liye koshish karte the

naye kisi chehre ko dekh paagal se ho jaate the hum
neend nahi aankhon me, raat ko so nahi paate the hum
agle subah milna hai usse, baat pakka karungaa usse
apne is dil ko kuch is tarha se samjhaate the hum

ab aisi koi baat kahaan, kisi se mulaaquaat kahaan
jaage poori raat hum, ab waisi koi raat kahaan
kaash wo din fir laut aate, raatein wo fir laut aati
bheeg jaaye poori tarha hum, ab waisi barsaat kahaan

apne paagalpan se maine jaane aaj ye kyaa likha hai
dil me mere aayaa kyaa thaa, aur maine kyaa likha hai
padh ke sabne sochaa ye hi 'uuuff isne ye kya likha hai
mann huwaa to likh diya ye? kya itnaa buraa likhaa hai? ? ? ?

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      kaise kahein kitna bura likha hai?Huh?? sab kahtey hain thik likha hai to thik hi likha hoga. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


             likho kuch bhii waah waah karney ko hamesha tayaar hain.!
              kaam iss umr mein bachaa kuch nahin buss hum bekaar hain.!!
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #6 on: August 30, 2012, 12:17:55 PM »
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hahahahhaah samajh hi nahi aayaa taarif thi ya khilli....  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

padhne ke liye shukriyaa sirji... Usual Smile


ek dil tha jisse pyaar karte the, wo gum hai kahin
dhundu kaise, police station na number tak nahin...tongue3


Applause Applause Applause Applause

      kaise kahein kitna bura likha hai?Huh?? sab kahtey hain thik likha hai to thik hi likha hoga. Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


             likho kuch bhii waah waah karney ko hamesha tayaar hain.!
              kaam iss umr mein bachaa kuch nahin buss hum bekaar hain.!!
Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard
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«Reply #7 on: August 30, 2012, 12:58:10 PM »
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Waah waah kya khoob likha hai Kapil jee.
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«Reply #8 on: August 30, 2012, 01:03:36 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriyaa Iftakhar ji...!!!

Waah waah kya khoob likha hai Kapil jee.
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«Reply #9 on: August 30, 2012, 03:56:15 PM »
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Aap to likhte hi dil se hai.
aapko padhte -2 padhne vaale ke saamne vahi drisya jeevant ho uthta hai..
bahut accha, behatreen,
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«Reply #10 on: August 30, 2012, 05:28:54 PM »
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hahahahhaah samajh hi nahi aayaa taarif thi ya khilli....  Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard

padhne ke liye shukriyaa sirji... Usual Smile


ek dil tha jisse pyaar karte the, wo gum hai kahin
dhundu kaise, police station na number tak nahin...tongue3




 Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard Laughing hard


                       waise main taarif kamm tanqeed zayada kartaa hoon.
                       per kabhii apney girebaan mein nahin jhaankta hoon.
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«Reply #11 on: August 31, 2012, 12:48:18 AM »
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bahut khoob
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«Reply #12 on: August 31, 2012, 02:00:47 AM »
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yaad  rakhne ko  cheezen aur bhi hain, ek tere naam ke siwaa
jahaan me karne ko kaam aur bhi hain, ek mohabbat ke siwaa

school  college   ka   time thaa , jab   hum  bhi ishq karte the
apne  class  ki    ladkiyon   pe    hum  kai   kai  baar marte the
kisi  ke  paas   chance  na mile  to  naraaz  hum  naa hote the
agle  roz  se    hum   kisi   dusri    ke   liye   koshish  karte the

naye   kisi  chehre  ko  dekh   paagal   se   ho   jaate the hum
neend nahi aankhon  me , raat  ko    so  nahi  paate the hum
agle   subah   milna  hai  usse ,  baat     pakka  karungaa usse
apne   is   dil   ko   kuch   is    tarha   se  samjhaate  the  hum

ab  aisi  koi  baat   kahaan  ,  kisi     se     mulaaquaat  kahaan
jaage    poori     raat    hum ,  ab   waisi     koi     raat  kahaan
kaash   wo   din   fir  laut   aate  ,  raatein    wo   fir  laut aati
bheeg  jaaye   poori  tarha  hum ,   ab  waisi   barsaat kahaan

apne   paagalpan   se   maine    jaane   aaj   ye  kyaa  likha hai
dil  me  mere   aayaa   kyaa   thaa , aur  maine  kyaa  likha  hai
padh  ke   sabne   sochaa   ye  hi 'uuuff  isne  ye  kya likha hai
mann huwaa to likh diya ye? kya itnaa buraa likhaa hai? ? ? ?

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«Reply #13 on: August 31, 2012, 02:30:05 AM »
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Very Nice. KApil Ji
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«Reply #14 on: September 01, 2012, 03:54:22 PM »
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bahut bahdiya bahut hi khoob likha lajawab
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