Tammanayon Ka Qatl Hua Hai kuch Iss Qadar "Khwaish"

by khwaish on December 21, 2010, 02:16:58 PM
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«Reply #15 on: December 22, 2010, 04:20:06 PM »
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bahut Khub likha khwahish ji
behtareen.
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na dil mile na dildaar mile
          yahan to har taraf sirf khushiyon ke kharidaar mile
na chahat ki taqbeer koi
         na mohabat ke tarafdaar mile
---- ab nai badhaunga ise--
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khus rahiye--dil se
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«Reply #16 on: December 22, 2010, 05:09:16 PM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 21, 2010, 02:16:58 PM
Naa zakhm Mile Naa Zakhmo Ke Nishaan Mile
Dil Mein Bas Kuch Toote Hue Armaan Mile

Iss Zameen Par Kuch Bhi To Nahi Haasil!!!
Mujhe To Bas Ab Mere Hisse Ka Aasman Mile

Tammanayon Ka Qatl Hua Hai Kuch Iss Qadar!!
Ab Mujhe Mein Naa Baaki Koi Jaan Mile

Uski Aankhon Se Jo Utra, Kuch Yuh Be-Ghar Sa Hua Main !!!
Be-Gharo Ko Kahan, Aaj Ke Daur Mein Koi Makaan Mile

"Khwaish" Dil Ki Baaton Ko Dil mein Hi Qaid Kar Le
Suuna Hai, Yahan Deewaro Ke Bhi Hai Kaan Mile

Zaroori To Nahi Ke Har Baat Lafzon mein kahi jaaye!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Har lafz Ko Zubaan mile

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bahut khoob Khwaish JI
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«Reply #17 on: December 22, 2010, 06:54:32 PM »
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«Reply #18 on: December 23, 2010, 10:21:29 AM »
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Quote from: khwaish on December 21, 2010, 02:16:58 PM
Naa zakhm Mile Naa Zakhmo Ke Nishaan Mile
Dil Mein Bas Kuch Toote Hue Armaan Mile

Iss Zameen Par Kuch Bhi To Nahi Haasil!!!
Mujhe To Bas Ab Mere Hisse Ka Aasman Mile

Tammanayon Ka Qatl Hua Hai Kuch Iss Qadar!!
Ab Mujhe Mein Naa Baaki Koi Jaan Mile

Uski Aankhon Se Jo Utra, Kuch Yuh Be-Ghar Sa Hua Main !!!
Be-Gharo Ko Kahan, Aaj Ke Daur Mein Koi Makaan Mile

"Khwaish" Dil Ki Baaton Ko Dil mein Hi Qaid Kar Le
Suuna Hai, Yahan Deewaro Ke Bhi Hai Kaan Mile

Zaroori To Nahi Ke Har Baat Lafzon mein kahi jaaye!!
"Khwaish" Kaun Kehta Hai Ke Har lafz Ko Zubaan mile

              ~~~~~Khwaish~~~~~

Bahut Khub Khwaish JI Applause Applause
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«Reply #19 on: December 23, 2010, 10:22:19 AM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 22, 2010, 05:50:50 AM
NA APNE MILE NA ANJAAN MILE
HUME TO MAHFILO ME BHI SUNSASN MILE

WAFA AUR BEWAFAYI KA FAISLA AB HO CHUKA MUSHKIL
HUME TO QURBANI PER BHI SO SO ILJAAM MILE

DAR B DAR BHATKA HU TA-UMRR SUKUN KI TALASH ME
EE KHUDA SHAYAD AB TERE DAR PER HI KUCH PAL KA ARAAM MILE

KOI MILA DAULATMAND KOI MILA JARURATMNAD
DIL ME CHAHAT THI KOI TO APNSA SA EK INSAN MILE

Bahut Khub Matrix Ji
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«Reply #20 on: December 23, 2010, 10:23:40 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 22, 2010, 09:16:14 AM

Iss safar me chalte hume log hazaar mile
Kuch jaane pehchane to kuch anjaan mile

Dekhkar muskura diye kabhi wo hume
Kabhi nazrein churate wo saahibaan mile

Kehne ko to sab apne hain yhan is mehfil me
Kahan hume yahan koi aapse kadardaan mile

Jo samjh paaye na hamare ehsaas aat kabhi
Hume aise hi log aksar gaate apne gungaan mile

Zaroori to nahin k kasak ki har khwaish puri ho jaye
Bas itni dua karo k uski parwaz ko khula aasmaan mile...!!!

Bahut Khub Kasak Ji
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«Reply #21 on: December 26, 2010, 02:47:08 PM »
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Quote from: Matrix Guy on December 22, 2010, 05:50:50 AM
khwaish ji .....wat a mindblowing presentation ..........
dil chu gaya apka har shabd ......really  its wonderfull......isi gungunane ka dil kar raha he ....koi dhun bataiye jis pe ise gunguna saku........superb  poetry..

few lines from my side....

NA APNE MILE NA ANJAAN MILE
HUME TO MAHFILO ME BHI SUNSASN MILE

WAFA AUR BEWAFAYI KA FAISLA AB HO CHUKA MUSHKIL
HUME TO QURBANI PER BHI SO SO ILJAAM MILE

DAR B DAR BHATKA HU TA-UMRR SUKUN KI TALASH ME
EE KHUDA SHAYAD AB TERE DAR PER HI KUCH PAL KA ARAAM MILE

KOI MILA DAULATMAND KOI MILA JARURATMNAD
DIL ME CHAHAT THI KOI TO APNSA SA EK INSAN MILE

Tehhhhh Dilllll Se Shukriya Matrix Ji...

Aur vaakai Aapne Lajawaab Likha..Bahut Khoob!!!

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«Reply #22 on: December 29, 2010, 07:34:46 AM »
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Quote from: *KasaK*....Dil Ki on December 22, 2010, 09:16:14 AM

khwaish ji kai dino baad aapke kisi post pe reply de rahi hun..kya karti kuch aisa ban hi nahinraha tha k aapke likhe pe jawwab de paati...
ek adna si koshish ki hai yahan ..ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega....

Iss safar me chalte hume log hazaar mile
Kuch jaane pehchane to kuch anjaan mile

Dekhkar muskura diye kabhi wo hume
Kabhi nazrein churate wo saahibaan mile

Kehne ko to sab apne hain yhan is mehfil me
Kahan hume yahan koi aapse kadardaan mile

Jo samjh paaye na hamare ehsaas aat kabhi
Hume aise hi log aksar gaate apne gungaan mile

Zaroori to nahin k kasak ki har khwaish puri ho jaye
Bas itni dua karo k uski parwaz ko khula aasmaan mile...!!!

Anuji, Aapke Likhe Ehsaas Dil Ko Chuu Gaye!!!

Bahut Hi khoobsurti Se Aapne Jazbon Ko lafzon mein Utaara Hai..

Bahuttttttttt Khoob Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #23 on: December 29, 2010, 08:01:18 AM »
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khwaish ji bahu achhi umda creation hai .mazaa aa gaya.
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tamannaon ka katl hona hi achha hai.
verna ye kahan jeene deti hain yaaro.
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«Reply #24 on: February 16, 2011, 09:13:51 AM »
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Quote from: manzil-e-ishq on December 22, 2010, 09:17:20 AM
bahut bahut khoob khawish ji.....
luved d 1st one...
superb lines...

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«Reply #25 on: May 23, 2011, 09:22:23 AM »
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Quote from: AbhiTamrakar on December 22, 2010, 09:43:53 AM
bahut bahut khoob khwaish bhai..

bahut badhiya peshkash hai apki..

yunhi likhte rahiye~

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«Reply #26 on: May 24, 2011, 01:10:56 PM »
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Quote from: Shihab on December 22, 2010, 12:27:25 PM
Bahut Khub Khwaish Bhai...

Khush Rahiye...


~Shihab~

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«Reply #27 on: August 05, 2011, 07:51:05 AM »
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Quote from: killbill on December 22, 2010, 04:20:06 PM
bahut Khub likha khwahish ji
behtareen.
***
na dil mile na dildaar mile
          yahan to har taraf sirf khushiyon ke kharidaar mile
na chahat ki taqbeer koi
         na mohabat ke tarafdaar mile
---- ab nai badhaunga ise--
***
khus rahiye--dil se

Aapka bahut bahut Shukriya killbillji

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Quote from: Rajesh Harish on December 22, 2010, 05:09:16 PM
Bahut khoob Khwaish JI

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«Reply #29 on: December 28, 2011, 11:04:36 AM »
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Quote from: Rishi Agarwal on December 23, 2010, 10:21:29 AM
Bahut Khub Khwaish JI Applause Applause

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