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«Reply #15 on: August 15, 2010, 05:43:08 PM » |
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Waah Waah Waah ... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob...
Jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye utni hi kam... Bahoot Umda likha hai aap dono ne !
hum dono ki taraf se aapka bht bht shukriya divya ji.....thnx alot for the appreciation |
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«Reply #16 on: August 15, 2010, 05:44:00 PM » |
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Nice creation and narration of romantic situations..
thnx surendraji for ur appreciation...thnx alot |
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«Reply #17 on: August 15, 2010, 06:20:39 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Anamika N Kapil
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«Reply #18 on: August 15, 2010, 06:31:21 PM » |
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Bahut khoob Anamika N Kapil
thnx rajesh ji....for liking our post |
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«Reply #19 on: August 15, 2010, 07:01:15 PM » |
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«Reply #20 on: August 15, 2010, 07:02:02 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Sajid ji...!!! Kya baat hai Kasak and klaskar jee you both have done an amazing job.............love this thread.
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«Reply #21 on: August 15, 2010, 07:02:56 PM » |
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«Reply #22 on: August 15, 2010, 07:03:38 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Divya ji...!!! Waah Waah Waah ... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob...
Jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye utni hi kam... Bahoot Umda likha hai aap dono ne !
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«Reply #23 on: August 15, 2010, 07:04:23 PM » |
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Thanx a lot Smardia ji...!!! Nice creation and narration of romantic situations..
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«Reply #24 on: August 15, 2010, 07:06:05 PM » |
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bahut bahut shukriya Koyal ji... pab ab to mere naam ka spelling thik kar lijiye... please...!!! |
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«Reply #28 on: August 16, 2010, 12:57:08 PM » |
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heheheheh.... chalo de diya aapko adhikaar.... !!! khush rahiye...!!! |
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«Reply #29 on: August 17, 2010, 07:27:09 AM » |
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<>*Tasveer*<>
Rangon se sajakar ek kore kagaz ko
Baithe jab yunhi hum use nihaarte
Na jane kaise unme hume tum dikhai diye
Hamari taraf dekh haule se muskurate
Hadbadakar humne nazar hata li tab
Fir se ek bar nazar dali uss tasveer par jab
Fir wahi saanwli saloni surat nazar aai
Han tum hi the wo mujhe dekh muskurate
Ghabrakar hume wo tasveer almari me ja chhupai
Koi dekh na le jaan na le hamare dil ka raaz
Bas yahi sochkar hum use rahe kai din chhupate
Lekin aaj fir anayaas hi aagye aap saamne
Usi shararti andaz me mujhe dekh muskurate
Hayeee..ab kya karun main soch me pad gai
Kuch sharmai kuch apni chunri me hi ulajh gai
Wo dhundhte hue aagaye hamare kamre tak
Aur uss chhupi hui tasveeer pe nazar unki pad gai
Hum bas dekhte hi reh gaye sharmo haya se sakuchate
Hath me le jab wo puche k ye kiski tasveer hai
Hum sirf keh gay ek khwaab hai jisme rang kai hain
Unhone bhi apni dairy se meri dulhan si saji tasveer nikali
Aur usi shararti andaaz me dekhte rahe mujhe muskurate...!!! WAAAAAH WAAAAAH BAHUT KHOOBSOORAT ANDAZ-E- BAYAAN .....HAAL -E- DIL ....BAYAAN KAR GAYE EK EK SHABD MUSKURATE ..MUSKURATE...BAHUT KHOOB...KASAK JI |
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