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<>*Tasveer*<>

Rangon se sajakar ek kore kagaz ko
Baithe jab yunhi hum use nihaarte
Na jane kaise unme hume tum dikhai diye
Hamari taraf dekh haule se muskurate

Hadbadakar humne nazar hata li tab
Fir se ek bar nazar dali uss tasveer par jab
Fir wahi saanwli saloni surat nazar aai
Han tum hi the wo mujhe dekh muskurate

Ghabrakar hume wo tasveer almari me ja chhupai
Koi dekh na le jaan na le hamare dil ka raaz
Bas yahi sochkar hum use rahe kai din chhupate
Lekin aaj fir anayaas hi aagye aap saamne
Usi shararti andaz me mujhe dekh muskurate

Hayeee..ab kya karun main soch me pad gai
Kuch sharmai kuch apni chunri me hi ulajh gai
Wo dhundhte hue aagaye hamare kamre tak
Aur uss chhupi hui tasveeer pe nazar unki pad gai
Hum bas dekhte hi reh gaye sharmo haya se sakuchate

Hath me le jab wo puche k ye kiski tasveer hai
Hum sirf keh gay ek khwaab hai jisme rang kai hain
Unhone bhi apni dairy se meri dulhan si saji tasveer nikali
Aur usi shararti andaaz me dekhte rahe mujhe muskurate...!!!
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«Reply #1 on: August 15, 2010, 08:04:20 AM »
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wah ji wah .. kya kehne aapke... bahut hi pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob Kasak ji...!!!.... mera ye jawaab aapke isi kavita ke liye bana hai to isko yahaan post karna jaruri hai....

haan ye yaadon ke rang se bani tasveerein hain,
kuch meri baatein hain, kuch tumhaari yaadein hai,
kho ke kabhi unme is tarah doob jaata hoon main,
kya kahun wo de jaati kitni saugaatein hain,
wo tuhmaaraa muskurake saamne se guzarna,
aur aisi hi kuch haseen meethi yaadein hain,


kaagaz pe to bante bante ab tak na ban saki,
tumhaari wo tasveer maine apne dil me banaayi hai,
chaah ke bhi koi mita na sakega ye tasveer tumhaari,
kisi syaahi se nahi ye maine apni chahat se banayi hai,
tumhaara khayaal hi mere dil me gudgudi kar jaati hai,
aur aise hi kuch khoobsurat haseen baatein hain,


wo aankhon me tumhaare kaajal ka jo rang hai,
wo tumhaare hothon pe gulaab ka jo rang hai,
tumhaare maathe ki safed bindi bahut pyaari hai,
aur tumhaare chehre ka jo pyaara rang hai,
haan inhi rangon se banayi tumhaari tasveer maine,
aur usi tasveer se judi ab meri saanse hain,

aur aise hi kuch khoobsurat haseen baatein hain,
aur aisi hi kuch haseen meethi yaadein hain....
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«Reply #2 on: August 15, 2010, 08:14:20 AM »
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shukriya janaab shukriya...... notworthy
itne pyare reply k liye...... :
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«Reply #3 on: August 15, 2010, 08:23:10 AM »
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shukriya Kasak ji....!!!
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«Reply #4 on: August 15, 2010, 09:22:15 AM »
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too good kasak n kapil ji....

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«Reply #5 on: August 15, 2010, 10:30:34 AM »
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Kya baat hai Kasak and klaskar jee you both have done an amazing job.............love this thread.
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«Reply #6 on: August 15, 2010, 10:38:37 AM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Anamika Ji Aur Kapil ji..

Aap Dono Vaakai bahut Acha Lihte Ho.. Thumbs UP

Yuhi Likhte Rahiye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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«Reply #7 on: August 15, 2010, 10:55:15 AM »
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Waah Waah Waah ... Bahoot Bahoot Khoob...
Jitni bhi tareef ki jaaye utni hi kam... Bahoot Umda likha hai aap dono ne !
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«Reply #8 on: August 15, 2010, 11:17:45 AM »
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Nice creation and narration of  romantic situations..
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«Reply #9 on: August 15, 2010, 11:39:22 AM »
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Anaamika-di you rock yaar.... hello hello hello hello
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<>*Tasveer*<>

Rangon se sajakar ek kore kagaz ko
Baithe jab yunhi hum use nihaarte
Na jane kaise unme hume tum dikhai diye
Hamari taraf dekh haule se muskurate

Hadbadakar humne nazar hata li tab
Fir se ek bar nazar dali uss tasveer par jab
Fir wahi saanwli saloni surat nazar aai
Han tum hi the wo mujhe dekh muskurate

Ghabrakar hume wo tasveer almari me ja chhupai
Koi dekh na le jaan na le hamare dil ka raaz
Bas yahi sochkar hum use rahe kai din chhupate
Lekin aaj fir anayaas hi aagye aap saamne
Usi shararti andaz me mujhe dekh muskurate

Hayeee..ab kya karun main soch me pad gai
Kuch sharmai kuch apni chunri me hi ulajh gai
Wo dhundhte hue aagaye hamare kamre tak
Aur uss chhupi hui tasveeer pe nazar unki pad gai
Hum bas dekhte hi reh gaye sharmo haya se sakuchate

Hath me le jab wo puche k ye kiski tasveer hai
Hum sirf keh gay ek khwaab hai jisme rang kai hain
Unhone bhi apni dairy se meri dulhan si saji tasveer nikali
Aur usi shararti andaaz me dekhte rahe mujhe muskurate...!!!
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«Reply #10 on: August 15, 2010, 11:44:17 AM »
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Aur Kalaakaarji aapka tou kehna hi kya......har swaal ka jawaab hai aapke paas......
Har emotion ka khayaal.....har taale ki chabi....har rang ki tulikaa..... Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause Clapping Smiley Hats off to you! Hats off to you! Hats off to you!

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wah ji wah .. kya kehne aapke... bahut hi pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... bahut khoob Kasak ji...!!!.... mera ye jawaab aapke isi kavita ke liye bana hai to isko yahaan post karna jaruri hai....

haan ye yaadon ke rang se bani tasveerein hain,
kuch meri baatein hain, kuch tumhaari yaadein hai,
kho ke kabhi unme is tarah doob jaata hoon main,
kya kahun wo de jaati kitni saugaatein hain,
wo tuhmaaraa muskurake saamne se guzarna,
aur aisi hi kuch haseen meethi yaadein hain,


kaagaz pe to bante bante ab tak na ban saki,
tumhaari wo tasveer maine apne dil me banaayi hai,
chaah ke bhi koi mita na sakega ye tasveer tumhaari,
kisi syaahi se nahi ye maine apni chahat se banayi hai,
tumhaara khayaal hi mere dil me gudgudi kar jaati hai,
aur aise hi kuch khoobsurat haseen baatein hain,


wo aankhon me tumhaare kaajal ka jo rang hai,
wo tumhaare hothon pe gulaab ka jo rang hai,
tumhaare maathe ki safed bindi bahut pyaari hai,
aur tumhaare chehre ka jo pyaara rang hai,
haan inhi rangon se banayi tumhaari tasveer maine,
aur usi tasveer se judi ab meri saanse hain,

aur aise hi kuch khoobsurat haseen baatein hain,
aur aisi hi kuch haseen meethi yaadein hain....

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«Reply #11 on: August 15, 2010, 01:39:47 PM »
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koyal tum aur tumhari tareef karne ka andaaz sach me alag hai.....

love u re....
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«Reply #12 on: August 15, 2010, 01:40:32 PM »
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too good kasak n kapil ji....

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shukriya devangi ji......
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«Reply #13 on: August 15, 2010, 01:41:19 PM »
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Kya baat hai Kasak and klaskar jee you both have done an amazing job.............love this thread.
ghayal ji ..ise itna pasand karne k liye tahe dil se shukriya aapka...
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«Reply #14 on: August 15, 2010, 01:42:05 PM »
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Bahut bahut Khoob Anamika Ji Aur Kapil ji..

Aap Dono Vaakai bahut Acha Lihte Ho.. Thumbs UP

Yuhi Likhte Rahiye.. Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley


thnx khwaish ji....aapne fir hume saraha.....thnx alot
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