**Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai** by Rahim

by dead heart on September 20, 2009, 04:59:31 PM
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Yeh ghazal aap ek aise ladke ki kahani samaj lijiye jiski mehbooba margayi hai ya usse juda hogayi hai...Umeed hai pasand ayega...Kisi ko koi baat mere iss kalam main pasand na aye toh advance main maafi mangna chahunga...

**Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai**

Tujh bin aaj kal yeh mann kahan lag raha hai,
Teri yaad main bas yeh dil ro raha hai,
Ke tu hoti toh aisa hota;tu hoti toh waisa hota,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Najane tu kab aake mere labon ki pyaas bhujaegi,
Thamke mera haath mujhe tu apna batlaegi,
Bhujake tanhai ke andheron ko;dil main mere mohobat ki aag lagaegi,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Tu thi jab tak saath;tab tak meri zindagi ka sahara hua karti thi,
Dant dant kar mujhe tu zindagi ke salikhe seekhaya karti thi,
Chandni raaton ke neeche baith tu mujhe mohobat ki kahaniyan sunaya karti thi,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Teri baahon main lipat kar hum bhi kabhi ro liya karte the,
Apni rooh aur dil ko tere askhon se jaise do lia karte the,
Choti ho ya badi;har pareshani ko teri aagosh main bhuladia karte the,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Aaj tu nahin hai yeh baat maine maan li hai,
Tere bina jeene ki aadat maine dal li hai,
Fizaen bhi baahon ko chooti hai toh baahein ro kar kehti hai 'uss ke jaisa maaza nahin aya',
Naya chand dekh ankhein kehti hai tadap kar 'tu bhi uske jitni khubsoorati nahin la paya',
Ab zindagi main bas tanhaion ka andhera hai,
Dil main teri yaadon ka bahaut bada basera hai,
Ab toh jee raha hoon bas ek umeed ke saath,
Ke tu ayegi Qayamat ke dinn aur thamlegi mera haath,
Phir hum dono ka Khuda ke darbar main fesla kiya jaega,
InshAllah humari mohobat ko Jannat se nawaza jaega,
Tamam Jannation, Farishton aur Paighambaron ko teri aur meri shaadi main bulwaenge,
Hum dono Jannat ke premi kehlaenge,
Phir InshAllah woh hume duaon se nehlaenge,
Phir hum apna hi ek baag banwaenge,
Aur puri zindagi wahin guzarjaenge,
InshAllah aisi hi hogi teri aur Rahim ki prem kahani,
Filhaal toh yeh dil teri yaad main tadap raha hai,
Sach bolta hoon tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

~Rahim~
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«Reply #1 on: September 20, 2009, 08:38:33 PM »
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Yeh ghazal aap ek aise ladke ki kahani samaj lijiye jiski mehbooba margayi hai ya usse juda hogayi hai...Umeed hai pasand ayega...Kisi ko koi baat mere iss kalam main pasand na aye toh advance main maafi mangna chahunga...

**Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai**

Tujh bin aaj kal yeh mann kahan lag raha hai,
Teri yaad main bas yeh dil ro raha hai,
Ke tu hoti toh aisa hota;tu hoti toh waisa hota,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Najane tu kab aake mere labon ki pyaas bhujaegi,
Thamke mera haath mujhe tu apna batlaegi,
Bhujake tanhai ke andheron ko;dil main mere mohobat ki aag lagaegi,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Tu thi jab tak saath;tab tak meri zindagi ka sahara hua karti thi,
Dant dant kar mujhe tu zindagi ke salikhe seekhaya karti thi,
Chandni raaton ke neeche baith tu mujhe mohobat ki kahaniyan sunaya karti thi,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Teri baahon main lipat kar hum bhi kabhi ro liya karte the,
Apni rooh aur dil ko tere askhon se jaise do lia karte the,
Choti ho ya badi;har pareshani ko teri aagosh main bhuladia karte the,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Aaj tu nahin hai yeh baat maine maan li hai,
Tere bina jeene ki aadat maine dal li hai,
Fizaen bhi baahon ko chooti hai toh baahein ro kar kehti hai 'uss ke jaisa maaza nahin aya',
Naya chand dekh ankhein kehti hai tadap kar 'tu bhi uske jitni khubsoorati nahin la paya',


Nicely written Rahim
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«Reply #2 on: September 21, 2009, 09:18:37 AM »
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Really touching gazal Rahim bhai,bahut khoob,kamaal ki creation hai,too good. Thumbs UP Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley :clapping:excellent
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dead heart
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«Reply #3 on: September 21, 2009, 07:47:48 PM »
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Shukriya Talat di aur Madhu di...
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«Reply #4 on: September 29, 2009, 02:02:40 AM »
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Bahoot khoob Rahim Bro.. bahoot hi khoobsoorat  aur pyaara khayal hai... Bahoot Khoob!
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«Reply #5 on: September 29, 2009, 09:29:54 AM »
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Shukriya Divya di
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«Reply #6 on: September 29, 2009, 09:43:14 AM »
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aap ki abhi tak ki padhi hui sabhi gazal bahot hi aa6i he.
ek dam 6u jati he dil ko..

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«Reply #7 on: September 29, 2009, 10:42:03 AM »
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Yeh ghazal aap ek aise ladke ki kahani samaj lijiye jiski mehbooba margayi hai ya usse juda hogayi hai...Umeed hai pasand ayega...Kisi ko koi baat mere iss kalam main pasand na aye toh advance main maafi mangna chahunga...

**Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai**

Tujh bin aaj kal yeh mann kahan lag raha hai,
Teri yaad main bas yeh dil ro raha hai,
Ke tu hoti toh aisa hota;tu hoti toh waisa hota,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Najane tu kab aake mere labon ki pyaas bhujaegi,
Thamke mera haath mujhe tu apna batlaegi,
Bhujake tanhai ke andheron ko;dil main mere mohobat ki aag lagaegi,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Tu thi jab tak saath;tab tak meri zindagi ka sahara hua karti thi,
Dant dant kar mujhe tu zindagi ke salikhe seekhaya karti thi,
Chandni raaton ke neeche baith tu mujhe mohobat ki kahaniyan sunaya karti thi,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Teri baahon main lipat kar hum bhi kabhi ro liya karte the,
Apni rooh aur dil ko tere askhon se jaise do lia karte the,
Choti ho ya badi;har pareshani ko teri aagosh main bhuladia karte the,
Tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

Aaj tu nahin hai yeh baat maine maan li hai,
Tere bina jeene ki aadat maine dal li hai,
Fizaen bhi baahon ko chooti hai toh baahein ro kar kehti hai 'uss ke jaisa maaza nahin aya',
Naya chand dekh ankhein kehti hai tadap kar 'tu bhi uske jitni khubsoorati nahin la paya',
Ab zindagi main bas tanhaion ka andhera hai,
Dil main teri yaadon ka bahaut bada basera hai,
Ab toh jee raha hoon bas ek umeed ke saath,
Ke tu ayegi Qayamat ke dinn aur thamlegi mera haath,
Phir hum dono ka Khuda ke darbar main fesla kiya jaega,
InshAllah humari mohobat ko Jannat se nawaza jaega,
Tamam Jannation, Farishton aur Paighambaron ko teri aur meri shaadi main bulwaenge,
Hum dono Jannat ke premi kehlaenge,
Phir InshAllah woh hume duaon se nehlaenge,
Phir hum apna hi ek baag banwaenge,
Aur puri zindagi wahin guzarjaenge,
InshAllah aisi hi hogi teri aur Rahim ki prem kahani,
Filhaal toh yeh dil teri yaad main tadap raha hai,
Sach bolta hoon tere bin yeh dil kahin kho raha hai...

~Rahim~

Rahim ji kya khub likha h aapne dil ko chu gai ye to
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«Reply #8 on: September 29, 2009, 04:43:21 PM »
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Shukriya Rishi jee aur thinkhattk jee
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