<>*Teri har shaam ka*<>

by *KasaK*....Dil Ki on October 01, 2010, 06:14:17 PM
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<>*Teri  har shaam ka*<>


Kya kabhi yun hua hai
Akeli  si shaam me
Mehki fizaaon k daaman me
Baithe ho tum
Yunhi  gumsum

Dubte suraj ki laalima k sath  
Rangeen  ho gai hain
Yaadein tumhari
Timtimate chiragon k aas paas
Machal uthti hai gai baatein

Sukhe honth tumhare
Bheeg  jate hain anayaas
Dil me umangon ki lehrein
Shor  machine lagti hain

Hath anayaas hi
Apni  purani dairy k
Panne palatne lagte hain
Aankhen na jane kise
Khojne  lagti hai

Nahin milta wo warq
Jispe  likha tha naam hamara
Dil se nikalti hai ek aahhh
Aur  bebasi me ek bund
Aankhon  se chhalak uthti hai

Janti hun main
Yehi manzar hota hoga
Meri  yaad me mere sanam
Teri  har shaam ka........!!!!!!
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«Reply #1 on: October 01, 2010, 06:28:48 PM »
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 Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

Kasak Jee Aadaab!

Kia mindblowing creation ki hai jee aapne....
Waah waah waah...... No words so touchi...

Keep it up.... It's a real spirit...  Thumbs UP

Keep writting......
keep posting......
May God Bless You Always.......
Khuda Hafez....... Usual Smile         

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«Reply #2 on: October 01, 2010, 06:33:27 PM »
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aahhaaaaaaaaa........aaj maza aaya parwaz ji..aapne dil khol k tareef ki....
thnx thnx ji bht sara thnx...ab lagta hai k hum bhi kuch kuch achcha likhne lage hain ..thnx ji aapne pasand ki ise......

God bless u ji
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«Reply #3 on: October 01, 2010, 06:46:03 PM »
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Kuch correction's kar raheN hai dekh lijiyeNga kahaaN kia badla hai....

Ummid hai aapko bura nahi lageNga... Usual Smile          



<>*Teri  har shaam ka*<>


Kya kabhi yun hua hai
Akeli  si shaam me
Mehki fizaaon k daaman me
Baithe ho tum
Yunhi Khoye gumsum

Dubte suraj ki laalima k sath  
Rangeen  ho gai ho
Yaadein tumhari
Timtimate chiragon k aas paas
Machal uthti ho baatein

BHige honth tumhare
sukh  gaye ho anayaas
Dil me umangon ki lehrein
Shor  machane lagi ho

Hath anayaas hi
Apni  purani dairy k
Panne palatne lagte hain
Aankhen na jane kise
Khojne  lagti hai

Nahin milta wo warq
Jispe  likha tha naam hamara
Dil se nikalti hai ek aahhh
Aur  bebasi me ek bund
Aankhon  se chhalak uthti hai

Janti hun main
Yehi manzar hota hoga
Meri  yaad me mere sanam
Teri  har shaam ka........!!!!!!
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«Reply #4 on: October 01, 2010, 06:51:36 PM »
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correction done parwaz ji........isi tarah har bar correct karke sikhate rahiyega......thnx ji ...
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«Reply #5 on: October 01, 2010, 08:06:52 PM »
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vry touchy .......

very very gud
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«Reply #6 on: October 01, 2010, 10:08:10 PM »
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wow bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... dard to hai par padhne me mazaa aayaa... free wording ka jaadu bhi alag hi hota hai... maine bhi kuch try kiya hai usi style me likhne ka... ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega...

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haan aksar ye hota hai
kitaab ke panno me
ek sukha gulaab milta hai
aur dil kisi ki yaad me
tab machalta hai

wo gulaab jo nishaani thi
kisi ke pyaar ki
wo gulaab jo kahaani thi
kisi ke aetbaar ki
ab tanha un panno me
aahen bhara karta hai

aansoo ke do boond tab
aankhon se nikal aate hain
un dino ko yaad karke
wo aansoo beh jaate hain
wo gulaab aksar meri tanhaai me
mujhse hi baatein karta hai

kabhi kabhi us gulaab ko dekh
chehra mera khil jaata hai
hasi lamho ko yaad karke
dil mera machal jaaata hai
baarish ki har boon ke sang
usko ye dil yaad karta hai

har shaam uski yaad me
wo gulaab tadapta hai
kal tak jo mehekta tha
aaj kitaab ke panno me
sukha chup sa rehta hai...
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«Reply #7 on: October 03, 2010, 10:12:12 AM »
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Good poem Kasak ji. Nice creation.
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«Reply #8 on: October 03, 2010, 11:42:42 AM »
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Aahaaa,, Kya baat hai Anamika kya mast likha hai... Mann kiya padate hi chale jao .. Bahoot Bahoot Khoobsooorat ehsaas !!!
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«Reply #9 on: October 03, 2010, 11:47:41 AM »
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wow bahut pyaari kavita likhi hai aapne... dard to hai par padhne me mazaa aayaa... free wording ka jaadu bhi alag hi hota hai... maine bhi kuch try kiya hai usi style me likhne ka... ummeed hai aapko pasand aayega...

Applause Applause Applause Applause Applause

haan aksar ye hota hai
kitaab ke panno me
ek sukha gulaab milta hai
aur dil kisi ki yaad me
tab machalta hai

wo gulaab jo nishaani thi
kisi ke pyaar ki
wo gulaab jo kahaani thi
kisi ke aetbaar ki
ab tanha un panno me
aahen bhara karta hai

aansoo ke do boond tab
aankhon se nikal aate hain
un dino ko yaad karke
wo aansoo beh jaate hain
wo gulaab aksar meri tanhaai me
mujhse hi baatein karta hai

kabhi kabhi us gulaab ko dekh
chehra mera khil jaata hai
hasi lamho ko yaad karke
dil mera machal jaaata hai
baarish ki har boon ke sang
usko ye dil yaad karta hai

har shaam uski yaad me
wo gulaab tadapta hai
kal tak jo mehekta tha
aaj kitaab ke panno me
sukha chup sa rehta hai...

Wow.. Kapil ji.. waah kya baat hai... Bahoot hi meeti ki khushi mili pad ke... jaise yea sunder sa sach dil ke bahoot kareeb hai... Lajawaab !!!!
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«Reply #10 on: October 03, 2010, 09:25:24 PM »
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bahut bahut shukriya Divya ji...!!!

Wow.. Kapil ji.. waah kya baat hai... Bahoot hi meeti ki khushi mili pad ke... jaise yea sunder sa sach dil ke bahoot kareeb hai... Lajawaab !!!!
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«Reply #11 on: October 04, 2010, 04:12:12 PM »
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<>*Teri  har shaam ka*<>


Kya kabhi yun hua hai
Akeli  si shaam me
Mehki fizaaon k daaman me
Baithe ho tum
Yunhi  gumsum

Dubte suraj ki laalima k sath 
Rangeen  ho gai hain
Yaadein tumhari
Timtimate chiragon k aas paas
Machal uthti hai gai baatein

Sukhe honth tumhare
Bheeg  jate hain anayaas
Dil me umangon ki lehrein
Shor  machine lagti hain

Hath anayaas hi
Apni  purani dairy k
Panne palatne lagte hain
Aankhen na jane kise
Khojne  lagti hai

Nahin milta wo warq
Jispe  likha tha naam hamara
Dil se nikalti hai ek aahhh
Aur  bebasi me ek bund
Aankhon  se chhalak uthti hai

Janti hun main
Yehi manzar hota hoga
Meri  yaad me mere sanam
Teri  har shaam ka........!!!!!!
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Yaar!!! yeh Aapne Kab likha?? tongue3

Bahut bahut Khoob Anuji..Kya Khoobsurti se aapne jazbaaton ko lafzon mein utaara hai..

Tooooooooooooo Goooooooood!! Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley Clapping Smiley
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