Tu ake kaveeta ho jaisay (NM)

by vb on November 06, 2010, 08:29:01 PM
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«Reply #1 on: November 06, 2010, 08:38:40 PM »
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bahaut acchhaa vb ji. virah ras se sarobar kalaam hain apkaa.
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«Reply #2 on: November 07, 2010, 01:36:55 PM »
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jitani tariph ki jaye kam hai good yar
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«Reply #3 on: November 23, 2010, 10:46:00 AM »
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agar awaara sher aise hote hain to fir wo kavita kaisi hogi........

maashaalllaahhhh itna khubsuart geet likha hai aapne.....bht bht bhtttttt hi pyaara hai ye geet aapka VB ji.....
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«Reply #4 on: November 23, 2010, 12:07:12 PM »
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bahut bahut khoob vb jiii....

kya baat hai..

andaaz subhanaallah..

dher saari daad..

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«Reply #5 on: November 23, 2010, 02:59:28 PM »
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*KasaK*....Dil Ki jee! buhat shukriya parhnay ka.. ye puraani nazmen jaanay kaisay aap ki nazron say guzarnay lageen..

aawaargi kya tu kaveeta kya... hamaari nazmon main maum k dil tak pighlaanay ki haraarat nahi.. kisi kaveeta ko kya bayaan karen gay...
aisa aapko lagta hai vb ji......par har padhne wala aapki kavita ko ek alag andaaz me padhta hai....
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