Tu he ab mera sathi hai

by Pooja on January 06, 2009, 11:01:42 PM
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Ajeeb mood main ajeeb khayal ayya hai
kalam meri ne, na jaane ajj kaya likhwaya hai  DOH



Tanhaai main ajj main aor mere ghav hai
Pucha ghav ne bata ajj kaya vichar hai

Kuredena hai mujhko ya malhum lagana hai
Janta hu main, her haal mai, tujhe roye jaana hai

Main hu tere sath sath, soch kar bataana
Kaya such main mera sath lagta hai tujhe suhana

Log karte hai Pooja –path poore jahan main
Kisi bhi ghav se parbhu ji hume bachana

Hans kar kaha Pooja ne, baat sun O jaane jaana
Tere bin kaise ho mera, unko ab paana

Itani se baat nadaan tu na meri jaana
Mila hai tu us se, jo ho gaya ab anjaana

Uski di sougaat se, kaise ho bhala door mera jaana
Tu he ab mera sathi hai, umarbhar mera sath nibhana
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«Reply #1 on: January 06, 2009, 11:05:36 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Khoooooob Pooja Ji.. Humesha Ki Tarah Bahut Khubsoorat Likha hai aapne..!! Accha Laga Padh kar..!! Applause


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«Reply #2 on: January 06, 2009, 11:06:57 PM »
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Bahut Bahut Bahut khoob Pooja...dard se bhari kavita likhi hai aapne..padhkar kuch udaasi se chaai..koshish karunga ki kuch keh sakoon aapko is poetry ke jawaab mein..par filhaal bahut bahut khoob Applause Applause Applause Applause
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«Reply #3 on: January 06, 2009, 11:32:13 PM »
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Bohat khoob likha hai pooja...
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«Reply #4 on: January 06, 2009, 11:35:02 PM »
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Shukaria Mann ji, Khwaish ji and HoneyRose
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«Reply #5 on: January 06, 2009, 11:50:51 PM »
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Kuch Likh Raha hoon Pooja..pata nahi main jo likh raha hoon,uss jazbaat ko koi samaj paayega ya nahi..

Woh Guzra Hua Waqt Bhi Apna Hi Tha,
Aur Ab Yeh Faisla Bhi Hamara Hai,
Hum Dono Ne Milkar Hi,
Ab yeh Zakhm Ko Ubaara Hai....

Dooriyan Dilo Mein Thi,
Jo Guzre Waqt Ke Saath
Faaslo Mein Dhal Gayi, 
Kya Kahe!! Ab Apni Ankh Se Utra Ashk Bhi Humein Gaawara hai...

Teri Kuch Nishaaniyon ko Thaam kar,
Tere Dar se Chale Hum,
Kya Kahe!! Apne Lahoo Ka Katra-Katra De kar,
Humne uss Gulshan Ko Sawaara hai....

Tamannaye Bahut si thi Dil Mein,
Par ab koi Aarzo Nahi Baaki,
Apne Hi Ashko Ko Peekar Humnein,
Woh Guzra Waqt Guzaara Hai....

"KHWAISH" AUR KUCH NAHI TO BAS DUA TO KAR HI SAKTA HAI,
"POOJA" HAAR NAA MAAN IS GHAM KE SAMUNDAR SE,
WOH DEKH AB PAAS HI KINAARA HAI...... tearyeyed
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«Reply #6 on: January 06, 2009, 11:54:13 PM »
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wah wah wah!!! jawab nahi apke is jawab ka ... bahoot he acha likha hai... ek ek line aise buni hai apne ki baar baar parrne ko man kare!!! Good work Khwaish ji!!!
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«Reply #7 on: January 06, 2009, 11:58:46 PM »
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wah wah wah!!! jawab nahi apke is jawab ka ... bahoot he acha likha hai... ek ek line aise buni hai apne ki baar baar parrne ko man kare!!! Good work Khwaish ji!!!

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Pooja aapka...
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«Reply #8 on: January 07, 2009, 04:28:20 AM »
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Nice one Pooja Ji
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«Reply #9 on: January 07, 2009, 12:18:36 PM »
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kya baat hai pooja ji........

tu na saee tera ghav hi saee,kuj to mila tuje yaad karne ke liye,
hai bahut hi wafadar,ardi neendh se bhi uthata hai teri yaad dilane ke liye.
kya malum yeh ghav banjaye meri gava kisi roj tuje paane ke liye,
ab toh yehi mera saathi hai,yeh hi kaafi hai, muhje apna banane ke liye.
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«Reply #10 on: January 08, 2009, 07:42:44 AM »
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Ajeeb mood main ajeeb khayal ayya haikalam meri ne, na jaane ajj kaya likhwaya hai  DOHTanhaai main ajj main aor mere ghav haiPucha ghav ne bata ajj kaya vichar haiKuredena hai mujhko ya malhum lagana haiJanta hu main, her haal mai, tujhe roye jaana haiMain hu tere sath sath, soch kar bataanaKaya such main mera sath lagta hai tujhe suhanaLog karte hai Pooja –path poore jahan mainKisi bhi ghav se parbhu ji hume bachanaHans kar kaha Pooja ne, baat sun O jaane jaanaTere bin kaise ho mera, unko ab paanaItani se baat nadaan tu na meri jaanaMila hai tu us se, jo ho gaya ab anjaanaUski di sougaat se, kaise ho bhala door mera jaanaTu he ab mera sathi hai, umarbhar mera sath nibhana
Kaise choot jata hai hathon se hath
yeh samjha pana hai mushkil

reh jata hai bas ek ajeeb se khusboo ka ehsaas
jisko sambhal pana bhi hai mushkil

gila nahi teri mohobbat mera ab mere naam nahi aata
lekin teri shayari mein khud ka vajood dhoond pana hai mushkil
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«Reply #11 on: January 09, 2009, 10:47:00 PM »
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thanks cara ji and nice lines from you!!

Nice work Arjun....

kuch rishte, waqat ke sath badal jaya karte hai
badlate rishto ke sath, rishte toot jaya karte hai

garv kiya karte the kabhi jin zajbaato per hum
wo he zajbaat kahi ander so jaaya karte hai

wajood khud ka sirf tabhi najar atta hai kis aor main
jab khud ke zajbaat kisi aor se mil jaaya karte hai
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