Tu kya ho ga? (NM)

by vb on May 26, 2010, 01:09:46 PM

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marhoom bahayaat

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Re: Tu kya ho ga? (by vb)

«Reply #1 on: May 26, 2010, 05:02:54 PM »

mana ki nigaah uthti nahin teri mehfil mein,
ek nazar jo mujhey dekh logey to kya hoga........... Applause


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Re: Tu kya ho ga? (by vb)

«Reply #2 on: May 26, 2010, 08:03:10 PM »

Wow Vb ji bahut khoob,great and lovely creation.excellent,bahut achi lagi aapke poem ,beautiful lines Marhoom ji:hatsoff: icon_thumleft


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Re: Tu kya ho ga? (by vb)

«Reply #3 on: May 26, 2010, 11:18:07 PM »

bahut sundar... bahut hi umda.... bahut khoob likha hai aapne Vb ji... bahut bahut khoob...!!!


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Re: Tu kya ho ga? (by vb)

«Reply #4 on: May 27, 2010, 05:15:44 AM »

Bahut khoobsurat likha hai V.B ji. 5th sher bahut pasand aaya.Dhero daad aapko.


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Re: Tu kya ho ga? (by vb)

«Reply #5 on: May 27, 2010, 05:59:24 AM »

khoob....bhut achi paishkash VB sahab

apni tasveer hi hame de do
daikh lainge tumhe jo ik nazr (to kya hoga?)
bhut acha khyaal hai daad hazir qubool keejiye

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Re: Tu kya ho ga? (by vb)

«Reply #6 on: May 27, 2010, 02:36:43 PM »

As usual, bahut gehrayee hay aik aik alfaaz mein...God bless your great penmanship!

yeh pal do pal kee umangein kis liye
rait pe bikhare aansoo jo na samet paye
-------------------------------------tu kya hoga?
(!.!)