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Tu mera sapna tu mera armaan hai
Tu hi zindgi tu hi meri jaan hai
Tere siva main kuch bhi nahi janna
TuJh mein bassi janna meri jaan hai
Mat rutha karo mujh se yun tum
Tu nahi to duniya meri veeran hai
Cahe jo saza do par khamosh na raho
Teri khamoshi karti bahut preshaan hai
Tu kaya hai shyaad tujh ko malum nahi
Kash ki saanseen hai tu aur usski jaan hai
-♥ -♥ -♥ -♥ -♥ -♥ -♥Kash♥ -♥ -♥ -♥ -♥ -♥
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«Reply #2 on: August 22, 2012, 11:53:28 AM » |
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very beautiful Kash ji....bahot hi achcha!
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«Reply #4 on: August 22, 2012, 03:29:34 PM » |
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 bahut khoob @FOR YOU SHEBA sorry to say but ... aap ka mazakiya andaz se likhna hame pasand aata hai. But mood her waqt sab ka aisa hota nahi. Kash jee ka ek serious kavita ka aapne udadiya mazak aisa laga hame aapka comments padkar.
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«Reply #5 on: August 22, 2012, 03:48:40 PM » |
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«Reply #7 on: August 22, 2012, 05:13:30 PM » |
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Wah Wah Wah Kash jee bahut umda kalaam kahi hai aapne. jitni tareef karuN kam hai.. ab aapne raasta pakad liya hai..bas chalte rahiye..aap samajh gaye honge..mai kya kah raha hun. Now U deserve.. |
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«Reply #8 on: August 22, 2012, 05:23:21 PM » |
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Bahut khoob likha kash ji dhero daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #9 on: August 22, 2012, 05:23:45 PM » |
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Bahut khoob likha kash ji dhero daad aur mubarakbaad
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«Reply #10 on: August 23, 2012, 01:11:34 AM » |
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bahut hee khoob
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«Reply #11 on: August 23, 2012, 02:30:49 AM » |
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bahut khoob.........! kaash ji comments ka bura mat maane just kidding. you are
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«Reply #12 on: August 23, 2012, 06:53:59 AM » |
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bahut khoob kashji
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«Reply #13 on: August 23, 2012, 07:51:21 AM » |
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Thanx. SPS.
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«Reply #14 on: August 23, 2012, 02:00:09 PM » |
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on eTI community..
